Congratulations. You made me laugh today =D Thanks forbrightning up my day!
*lol* Poor baby. But I can't help it. Nicely done, though. To the person who said to watch the language: in the definition of rating: PG-13 signifies language and possible sexual content, and there isn't a warning symbol for language, so I think that it's okay.
Watch the language please. It was rated PG 13 you should put a warning on atleast. It was quite funny though.
I really, really, realyl probably shouldn't be laughing about this . . . poor Snape. HAS he tried the shampoo yet? Um . . . very strong writing, you develop his thoughts very well. Good grief. Once again, I really shouldn't be laughing about this. . . . All in all, very strong story. Cheers!
This is a well written story. I love the way you express his emotions and now you have me feeling sorry for him. Keep it up.
OMG! Hilarious! Shrivellus!