Reviews For Midnight Chills
Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 11/28/06 20:10
Chapter: Midnight Chills

It was definately interesting. I do think the cursing made it highly unpleasant to read though. The 'f' word is not a nice word at all, and you really shouldn't say it that much like that. Perhaps you have Tourette's? I feels forced, like you thought it would be funny to call him 'Shrivellus' and wrote the fic purely for that reason. I would suggest placing it in a different category, as I did not find it all too funny, besides the ending, which I stated my thoughts on. I like your writing style, but there was just no point to this story. Try again.
4/10

Reviewer: swmrchik44
Date: 11/23/06 14:04
Chapter: Midnight Chills

I liked the writing, kind of... the story was kind of pointless, it was just Snape taking a bath(Which is also very un-characteristic) I also think all of the cursing made it distasteful.

Reviewer: Luminata
Date: 11/17/06 19:16
Chapter: Midnight Chills

Not too bad, continue for longer though

Reviewer: H_Granger
Date: 11/15/06 18:48
Chapter: Midnight Chills

Hilarious. Good job!

Reviewer: ACDC1992
Date: 11/05/06 6:43
Chapter: Midnight Chills

brilliantly funny 7 witty, couldn't thought of it my self! *****

Reviewer: lupinthe3rd
Date: 10/31/06 5:32
Chapter: Midnight Chills

I think it needs a bit more.

Reviewer: AJV
Date: 10/13/06 3:09
Chapter: Midnight Chills

THIS IS PRETTY GOOD>HAHAHAHAHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Harrystruelove
Date: 09/16/06 16:12
Chapter: Midnight Chills

oh burn!! haha that was a good story! great job! you really explained snape's hatred

Reviewer: dragon_force
Date: 09/08/06 11:23
Chapter: Midnight Chills

hilarious

Reviewer: hannahbanana13
Date: 08/12/06 14:54
Chapter: Midnight Chills

hee hee priceless write more!!!!

Reviewer: harryncho
Date: 08/12/06 9:19
Chapter: Midnight Chills

haa haa!! that's funny!!! Poor Snape!

Reviewer: ans
Date: 08/02/06 17:08
Chapter: Midnight Chills

lol

Reviewer: hannahbanana13
Date: 07/27/06 19:00
Chapter: Midnight Chills

wow. Snape bathroom girls wwwooooowwww scary thoughts.

Reviewer: MR_Q
Date: 07/20/06 13:57
Chapter: Midnight Chills

tee-hee

Reviewer: halfblood1313
Date: 06/10/06 22:05
Chapter: Midnight Chills

...ummm...
that was confussing to say tha least
i didn't get tha whole point of it
but yea...i dont get y it's rated "professors" either.
there weren't that many bad words or anything...
but yea...
it was ok i guess

Reviewer: hermioneandron4eva
Date: 06/09/06 18:24
Chapter: Midnight Chills

ooooooooooohhh i like it!!!!

Reviewer: ronlvshrm
Date: 06/02/06 9:37
Chapter: Midnight Chills

its an ok story till now though,ahead it may get better.inthis chapter its just a different version of "snapes worst memory"

Reviewer: fire_princess
Date: 05/29/06 17:18
Chapter: Midnight Chills

i don't get it

Reviewer: awinwinsituation
Date: 05/26/06 14:21
Chapter: Midnight Chills

Shrivellus, LMAO!! Wow that's funny.

Reviewer: IloveLupin
Date: 05/09/06 18:28
Chapter: Midnight Chills

That suck major but Snape deserves anything bad that anyone writers about him, even if he is just a character in the GREATEST BOOKS OF ALL TIME!!!

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