Reviewer: Crazy about Draco Malfoy
Date: 09/16/12 8:44
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

really good

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 08/17/09 16:06
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Woah, this is likee the most perfect Sirius and someone eles fic I've like ever read in my life, it made a tear fall down my face with sweetness! Amazinggggg!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! This is the last one shot in the Cami/Sirius series, but I'd love you to read A Dog's Life, Sirius in the Moonlight, A Moment Like This, Spring Fever, and Off the Leash. :)

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 02/18/09 23:51
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Aw! This is sooo sweet! Disregarding my jealousy of Cami, I loved this fic. It was just so adorable.

Author's Response: When you read, you are Cami, so stop being jealous of yourself, lol. Thank you!

Reviewer: TuMBLeWeeD
Date: 07/11/08 3:58
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Awh. We need more people who can write romance like you do.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 06/13/08 11:24
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Cute story, entertaining, and good to know that Sirius wasn't always lonely at Grimauld Place :)
I really do love your stories quite a bit, as I'm sure you love writing them. Keep on writing! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

The thought that he went from Azkaban to Grimmauld--one prison to another--without experiencing more than the love of friendship before falling behind the veil was too tragic for me. I had to give Sirius a romance!

Reviewer: derre
Date: 05/22/08 17:56
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

this is the best story ever!!!!!

Author's Response: I heart you for saying so!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/15/08 20:46
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

I just had a thought about Sadie's costume shop. Have you ever seen a childs cartoon called Mr Benn? Well he would visit a clothes shop every day and have an adventure every time he stepped into the changing room. Well this reminded me of him. Sadie could have her own fic in which she sold or hired costumes that had special features to make you more believable when you dress up. How about a musketeer outfit that was enchanted to make you a true swordsman, or a ballerina outfit that made you dance?

Author's Response: No, I've never seen that cartoon, but it's a brilliant idea, and I'll definitely try to weave Sadie into another story. Thank you so much for telling me that!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/15/08 20:40
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

I hope you realise what you do to your readers. I am currently sitting hear with the biggest, most rediculous grin on my face and trying not to burst with happiness. This was just so...

Author's Response: If you're grin looks like mine, awwwww! *hugs*

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 02/15/08 23:20
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

I love any story about Sirius! And this one is just fantastic

Author's Response: Thank you! Sirius is such a great character, I wish I could think of a plausible way to bring him back, sigh.

Reviewer: Angel Feathers
Date: 02/02/08 6:09
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You


Author's Response: Thank you! Sirius deserves to be loved. :) If you ever get the urge to read a Sirius/Marauder Era romance, I'd love you to take a peek at Semi Charmed Life!

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 01/21/08 7:22
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Wow, Kerichi. You have really outdone yourself on this one. I wandered into your author's page, thinking that I should read one of your stories. Everyone says they are great, but I don't always like what everyone else does. This is an acception. I love this fic!

A minor flaw that I saw, was about Cami. Could you tell what she looked like? I bet that you did in another one-shot, but it would be helpful here, if, like I did, this is the first one someone read.


Author's Response: Yay for you making your own decisions while being willing to take a look to see if you agree with other people's opinions! (Yay! for me, too, lol, since you read my story!)

You're right about Cami being described in more detail in other stories, through Sirius' eyes in A Dog's Life and her looking into a mirror in A Moment Like This. Cami is described in this story, just not in detail, because it's her pov, and it woudn't read 'natural' for her to think 'this costume accentuates my hazel eyes'. :D

Here's the main description: The blue velvet of the dress was a shade Cami thought would look well with her pale skin and brown hair. She could imagine herself wearing it, with a beaded snood covering a braid coiled at her neck. So you know she has pale skin, brown hair long enough to braid, and later, she sees the costume bares a lot of cleavage, so she isn't flat chested, lol.

Thank you for loving this story, and if I can think of a way to sneak in more description, I will! :)

Reviewer: 7574117
Date: 06/06/07 4:30
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

say kerry could you make a one-shot from sirius' pov when he falls thru the veil thinking of cami? just thought it would b a gud idea...lmao

Author's Response: From the book, I honestly believe that when Sirius fell through the veil, it didn't seem real, he was so suprised, thinking, 'She actually hit me!' In my own life, I've been in a car accident where time seemed to weirdly slow and all I could think was 'I can't believe this is happening!' so no, no last thoughts one shot, but thank you for wanting one. :)

Reviewer: 7574117
Date: 06/06/07 4:27
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

sooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuute! sirius is so sweet it makes me wish i was a which and thirty something instead of a nineteen-year-old muggle with no permission to use internet (i do everything on the sly) just so i could be with sirius

Author's Response: Cami's twenty seven, so she's younger than Sirius by only a few less years than Tonks is Remus--not that much older than you! ^_~

Reviewer: 7574117
Date: 05/31/07 2:04
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

oh damn you, woman! i just realised something...u shouldn't have created cami, cos now it's another mourning soul after sirius' death! she'll probably die of a bad liver after all that drinking anyway...he he

Author's Response: I always thought it was a greater tragedy that Jo didn't give him a lover (that Harry/readers know about, at least, :D) so when he fell some people thought he might actually be happier! Inconceivable!

Cami wasn't an alcoholic for that long, lol. She's only 5 years older than Tonks. :D. She'll mourn Sirius, but I think she'd rather have loved him and lost him than never to have loved him at all. Sigh.

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 05/25/07 21:24
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

That was so cute!!! It was probably your best Sirius/Cami one-shot...and your last, I guess. I love the quote at the beginning It's not being in love that makes me happy. It's being in love with you. Where did you find it? It sums up everything, doesn't it? Good job!!!


Author's Response: Random googling of love quotes, I saw that one. Too bad it was anonymous. Someone deserved to have the credit, because it's a great sentiment! Thank you! You've definitely cheered me up today! *hugs*

Reviewer: MagicHappens7
Date: 05/24/07 20:08
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Aww it was so sweet and romantic! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't bear for Sirius to fall behind the veil in my R/T story without another happy fic first. Sigh.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 05/20/07 14:54
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

Aaaaw! So sweet!

Author's Response: I think Sirius is sweet. He doesn't always show it, because he's under stress, but there's a reason Harry opens up to him when he doesn't to so many others--I think it's because Sirius has a big heart. :)

Reviewer: ElspethBates
Date: 05/18/07 8:03
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

This makes me wish I had a wizard boyfriend that could make a tropical beach in the middle of winter so I could dress up and dance for him!

I wonder what my husband would think if he knew that? LOL

Author's Response: He'd probably say "Isn't working magic for you in the bedroom enough, witch?" :D And then you could say one of our favorite lines from The Princess Bride. "I'm not a witch, I'm your wife!" LOL

Thanks for reviewing on two sites. I'm doubly honored!

Reviewer: giamiller
Date: 05/18/07 5:45
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

i just can't figure out from where u get these bloody wonderful ideas. but i love em.

Author's Response: I have a quirky mind, so it's a good thing I can channel it into writing, heehee! Thank you!

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 05/18/07 4:43
Chapter: 10 Things I Love About You

I have read several of your stories, but this is my favorite.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I hate keeping to canon and having Sirius go through the veil, but at least he knows how much he's loved first!

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