Reviews For The Pursuit
Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 10/21/08 16:02
Chapter: The Prophesy

Very good one, my dear! Can't wait for the next installment. Hopefully all will be revealed and all fences will be mended.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the next chapter should tie everything up :)

Reviewer: seeker15
Date: 10/21/08 14:58
Chapter: The Note

*stares silently at the computer screen for several minutes* that . . . . . was . . . . AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! DEFINITELY THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!! you scared me at the beginning though. i thought Portia was Luna. haha. :^) oh. and my theory is that Hermione got pregnant again after what happened at the hotel. that would be a mistake too, right? please please PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! No, no, I couldn't possibly have made it Luna! Although I could see how you might think that for a second. That's an interesting theory, though, about Hermione . . . I guess you'll just have to wait and see. I'll update as fast as I can!

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 10/21/08 10:14
Chapter: The Prophesy

Wow! Lots of info. Can't wait for the rest. Happy writing. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks! I did throw a lot at you, didn't I? Well, I'll try an update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 10/21/08 0:01
Chapter: The Prophesy

I knew it! I knew it was "Lynn" (or should I say Portia) who was behind it. What a crazy lady! I guess it's one more chapter to the end.

I have question--when Ginny mentioned that she and Harry were tied up, were they also gagged as well? I'm sorry, but I had to ask.

Author's Response: Yup, just one more chapter until the end. Good job guessing, though! As for Ginny and Harry being gagged in addition to tied up, I've never really thought about it. You decide.

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 10/20/08 21:32
Chapter: The Prophesy

portia. tunnel. super baby. intense battle sequence.

this was intense, man. lots to digest! you did a fantastic job with it, though! this story has been a real pleasure to read - very much looking forward to reading the last chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter -- it was very intense, as you said!

Reviewer: acciomagic
Date: 10/20/08 21:09
Chapter: The Prophesy

missed this story...glad you're back to it!

Author's Response: Good! :)

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 10/18/08 2:22
Chapter: The Man

Gaah! you and your cliffhangers!! Please! finish the story!!(is the woman a certain death eater who escaped azkaban?)

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue! You'll find out soon ;) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 10/08/08 17:59
Chapter: The Note

now that the queue has finally opened up, have you submitted chapter 8 yet?

Reviewer: MaraudersLover
Date: 09/20/08 16:12
Chapter: The Man

wow. try to finish the next chapter as fast as you can!

Author's Response: The next chapter is officially written! The queue, however, isn't exactly ready for it. . . .

Reviewer: Sylladi
Date: 09/10/08 18:00
Chapter: The Man

Well, now I simply must keep reading, only to see who this woman is...

I started reading your story because someone said my fic reminded them of yours. I'm afraid that maybe the same woman is now coming back in both (although not as literally in mine, if that is the case).

And I have one typo that really bothered me:
"bronze" should be "brawn" when Bernard was insulting Ron. Although I must admit this mistake made me giggle. I was just imagining a metal Ron walking around somewhere...^^

Author's Response: Alas, I always have some typo or other! I'll try and fix that; thanks for pointing it out!

Reviewer: gogolax
Date: 08/30/08 15:38
Chapter: The Man

keep writing. this is getting really interesting.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I'll do my best to get the next chapter up before too long!

Reviewer: A Potter
Date: 08/12/08 3:25
Chapter: The Man

Great Story!! I cant wait to find out wot happens to harry!! my guess for the woman is one of rons exs. please update soon

Author's Response: That's an interesting guess. . . . I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Eleutherios
Date: 08/10/08 2:55
Chapter: The Man

Alright, first off, another great chapter. I'm dying to find out who the woman is. I was reading some of the other comments and I read some of there theories. Some seemed more likely than others, but who knows (besides you, of course) it could me any of them.

I really hope you can update soon because the if the cliffhanger didn't kill me, surely the wait will.

Great job. And keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! There have been a lot of different guesses, and some have certainly been warmer than others. I will try and update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 08/09/08 14:33
Chapter: The Note

Wow! Great chapter! You really kept me in suspense until the very end! And I'm glad we have more info on Hermione's abandonment of Ron. I have some theories of who the woman at the end of chapter seven could be. My first theory is that the woman is Bellatrix LaStrange. She's defnitely crazy enough to come up with a plan to try to change the prophesy, and she'd definitely do it if it meant pleasing Voldemort and seeing him again too. The other theory is that its Narcissa Malfoy or another female death eater. But, I do like the theory of another reviewer who supsects that its Bernard's secretary. Guess we'll have to wait and see. Hope you update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Keeping readers in suspense is always good ;) I'm glad you liked this chapter. Bellatrix or Narcissa? Interesting guesses . . . they are both in Slytherin. . . .

Reviewer: MegHeAd
Date: 08/08/08 13:30
Chapter: The Man

Call me crazy, but I think its Benard's secretary, because they had "relations" in his office. But she didn't make a very big appearance in that chapter... Well, anyway, that was a really good chapter!!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Bernard's secretary? That's an interesting guess. And you're not the first to suggest it! I'm glad you like this chapter; thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 08/07/08 21:07
Chapter: The Man

Whoa! That was really good. You had me hooked in the first chapter. Now I just want to finish it! The first thing I thought at the end of this chapter was Madam Rosmerta when you said "curvy". Then I thought, Lavender! But, now, does that make sense!? Wow, I have no idea. But... great job, I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks! Being hooked is a good thing! :) You're not the first to suggest Lavender Brown, but Madam Rosmerta is a new guess! Alas, you'll just have to wait and see. . . .

Reviewer: HPluver95
Date: 08/07/08 20:39
Chapter: The Man

Great story, it really makes you want to keep reading. I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so. I will try and update soon!

Reviewer: HPluver95
Date: 08/07/08 20:39
Chapter: The Man

Great story, it really makes you want to keep reading. I can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: seeker15
Date: 08/07/08 20:16
Chapter: The Man

i think it's bellatrix! I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Bellatrix, eh? You'll see soon enough! :)

Reviewer: unregisteredanimagus
Date: 08/07/08 13:09
Chapter: The Man

Once again brilliantly wonderful...

Do I need to mention that I suspect Pancy's presence underneath all those curves and long hair?

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Pansy, huh? Interesting guess. . . . Thanks for the review!

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