Reviews For The Pursuit
Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 10/12/07 21:33
Chapter: The Hotel

finally!!!!!! the chapter arrived and the kiss!! yay!!!! haha....superb chapter....i knew that bernard was wonky...ok, now i give up the idea that ginny planned probably was the DEA..i hope hermione changes her mind...dun marry that rat!! marry ron!!

Author's Response: I was really excited to finally write the kiss! I'm glad you liked the chapter; thanks very much for the review.

Reviewer: Ginny_Harry4ever_74
Date: 10/12/07 20:49
Chapter: The Hotel

Wow!!! Excelent!! I have been reading this story from the start and I can't seem to stop!!! I dont want to stop!!! Please, keep writing! And, wow, only in three hours? to write that?

lol. You are a great author!!!

Author's Response: Usually chapters for this story take me a while to write, but this one. . . . I guess I really got into it! Thanks for the review, and I will try and update quickly!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 10/12/07 20:24
Chapter: The Hotel

Oh this is brilliant! I was starting to get concerned when Hermione was acting like this materialistic girl that we all know she isn't. Now it makes so much more sence! I did love the ending! And I can't wait for the next chapter! =D

Author's Response: I was happy to finally get to reveal what was really going on with Hermione! I'm glad you liked the chapter; thanks for the review!

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 10/12/07 10:25
Chapter: The Note

ahh, the quote for chapter 4 is so good! im excited for it to be updated!!!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Siriusly_ Lily
Date: 10/11/07 14:43
Chapter: The Hotel

Yay! new chapter!! just hope it doesnt take as long to validate as WDDSU...
I like the quote! Finally Ron is taking action!! Hehehe =D

Author's Response: I like the quote too. . . . I certainly hope it doesn't talk as long to validate as WDDSU did as well!

Reviewer: Nadia Malfoy
Date: 10/07/07 15:30
Chapter: The Note

Ron understood now.

His blood boiled now.

Hermione had given him that book to read.

Teehee! Very funny!

I'm on the third reading of this story, I just LOVE it! I so wish I could write as well as you . . .

Please write a sequal to Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick! (I know I'm delusional, but it's really not my fault!)

Sorry if this review isn't making much sense, I am very HYPER today!

Author's Response: That's is one of my favorite parts :) I'm glad you like the story; thanks for the review! As for a sequel to Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick -- I actually have one planned out and the first chapter is currently being written. . . .

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 10/04/07 9:43
Chapter: The Twist

please update!!

Author's Response: I just submitted the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sonywinx
Date: 09/30/07 9:35
Chapter: The Twist

plz! FAST!

Author's Response: The next chapter is now waiting to be validated!

Reviewer: oliverwoodisthebest
Date: 09/29/07 23:23
Chapter: The Note

"and fly around like hes some sort of king!"- Nice reference to "Weasley is Our King"

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: oliverwoodisthebest
Date: 09/29/07 22:51
Chapter: The Note

"the air so tense you could swim in it"- awesome.
I also really liked the whole Ron read a book-blood boiled- Hermione gave him the book. Very creative.

But, Hermione changing her hair that much and wearing a lot of make up was really out of character, in my opinion.

Author's Response: A lot of the things Hermione does and says so far are very out of character, I specifically wrote them that way. As for why, you'll have to stick around to find out. . . . Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 09/19/07 15:15
Chapter: The Note

Wow. I think this is quite possibly the best story I've read in a long time. keep it up, please! *runs off to read everything MagEd has ever written...*

Author's Response: That makes me smile! Thanks very much for the review, I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: KirKinator
Date: 09/19/07 3:25
Chapter: The Note

That story is incredible i luv it please please please update

Author's Response: I'll try; I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: snapey_rapeyx3
Date: 09/13/07 22:09
Chapter: The Twist

this is an amazing story. all i can say is.. wow. wow wow wow wow wow. i love it soooooooo much!!!! everything about it is just. perfect. good job, and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 09/11/07 19:47
Chapter: The Twist

Ahhh, another cliffie. Typical MagEd.

This chapter just opened up a whole new slew of questions for me. Such as, What hapened to Ron and Hermione? What did Ron do that he says wasn't his fault? And why in the WORLD is Hermione marrying Bernard when she knows he's cheating on him?

This was a very good chapter, and I hope you update soon with an answer to these burning questions!

Author's Response: All of those are good questions -- and they have good answers! Another update should be here before long! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: maze
Date: 09/05/07 11:19
Chapter: The Twist

I really have no idea why Hermione knowingly stay with a man who cheats on her???She also turn down Ron's proposal!!!She's not that smart if you ask me. Great writing and I will be looking out for updates.Please make it sooner.

Author's Response: She is certainly acting crazy -- but don't worry, I promise there are VERY good reasons for her behavior, at least, very Hermione-ish reasons. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 09/04/07 19:54
Chapter: The Twist

ahhh. evil evil evil. why do you do that?

lol. just kidding. amazing chapter. yet again. cant wait for the update.!

Author's Response: I am a little evil, I know. ;) Thanks for reviewing anyway, and I will try and update quickly!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/03/07 22:22
Chapter: The Twist

OMG I cannot wait to find out why they broke up! Not to mention why Hermione is still with a guy who is cheating on her. And I really liked how you're incorporating bits of DH in (the watch). Please update soon!

Author's Response: As much as I love DH, it did make this and a most all of my stories AU -- and I can't help but put a little DH into them now, even if only in tiny portions :) Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/03/07 20:46
Chapter: The Pansy

I absolutely get the shivers every time I read part of the note (or even the whole note, when I read it last chapter). Even the part about the pie seems creepy. And I deffinitely thought that the smudge on Bernard's coat was going to have something to do with the whole kidnapping, until it just turned out he's been cheating on Hermione. I don't really like him much, but then again I don't think Hermione does either, so it's okay.

Author's Response: You don't think Hermione likes him? Well . . . ;) I'm glad you thought the note was creepy, I was going for that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 09/03/07 19:52
Chapter: The Twist

Oh! Why is she marrying Benny!?!?!?!?!?!
What happened to make her choose Benny instead of Ron?
I should go re-read to see if it has been said already but I hope she makes the right descion in the end.... (RON!)
Good mystery though!

Author's Response: It is a Ron/Hermione fic. . . . I'm glad you like the mystery of it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 09/03/07 9:21
Chapter: The Twist

wow...somehow i had the feeling that hermione knew about idiotic bernard and lynn's relationship. and i still feel ginny's planned all this..but, this is reallly really great!! update soon if poss.!

Author's Response: Hermione couldn't possibly have not know -- she's Hermione! Thanks for the review, I will try and update faster this time!

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