Reviews For The Pursuit
Reviewer: charma10
Date: 10/15/07 19:10
Chapter: The Hotel

Fantastic! I can't wait for the update. You get your chocolate and water and you write!!! That last scene was great. Just perfect and tension-filled and romantic even

Reviewer: charma10
Date: 10/15/07 19:10
Chapter: The Hotel

Fantastic! I can't wait for the update. You get your chocolate and water and you write!!! That last scene was great. Just perfect and tension-filled and romantic even

Reviewer: charma10
Date: 10/15/07 19:07
Chapter: The Hotel

Fantastic! I can't wait for the update. You get your chocolate and water and you write!!! That last scene was great. Just perfect and tension-filled and romantic even

Author's Response: Thanks; it's my favorite chapter so far. Hopefully another burst of inspiration will hit me (witch chocolate, of course!) and I'll have the next chapter out soon!

Reviewer: Cole Potter
Date: 10/14/07 21:30
Chapter: The Hotel


Author's Response: Soon, I promise!

Reviewer: PheonixAnimagus
Date: 10/14/07 16:33
Chapter: The Hotel



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Cole Potter
Date: 10/14/07 13:31
Chapter: The Hotel

I lked that one yeah...WRITE MORE!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it! :)

Reviewer: Meralie
Date: 10/14/07 13:00
Chapter: The Hotel

It's a really good chapter, and I hope you pull another chapter that you write in an hour, because I can hardly wait for the next one. How many chapters do you plan on having?
Can't wait for the next,

Author's Response: Thanks! The plan right now is around six or seven, but that really is only tentative. I know exactly what I want to happen, but I really never know how long a scene is going to end up being until I actually write it; I'm a terrible judge of that sort of thing.

Reviewer: MandyMuggle
Date: 10/13/07 23:08
Chapter: The Hotel

Whoa. That was pretty much crazy... in a good way, of course. I'm very happy that Hermione hasn't changed, though I really wish that marrying Bernard was not the solution. I just know that everything will turn out okay, though, because that's what happens in your fan-fics. ;)

Author's Response: I do tend to be a sucker for happy endings ;) I'm glad you liked the chapter -- and its craziness!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 10/13/07 17:11
Chapter: The Hotel

I'm glad they got things all figured out, now they can concentrate on finding Harry and Ginny. Though, knowing them, they'll still be bickering over the tiniest things.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, things do seem much better, but of course there will still be some pretty big issues to overcome. . . . Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Siriusly_ Lily
Date: 10/13/07 13:46
Chapter: The Hotel

YAY! Berny is an evil idiot and Hermione doesnt like him! But she has to marry him! ewwy! Oh well... Considering he is now known to be evil, I am guessing he does have something to do with Harry and Ginny's disappearance/ kidnapping... I don't know if you would do the same thing like with Uncle Fred, but it seems like Berny is just a pawn... IDK...

But,... Yay! Happy Chappie ending!... I can't wait for the next chappie and what will happen at the Barn...!
Update Soon!

Author's Response: Of course Hermione doesn't really like him! I'm glad I could finally have that revealed; I didn't like writing a seemingly bad Hermione. Thanks very much for the review!

Reviewer: Ron_Hermione_625
Date: 10/13/07 9:42
Chapter: The Hotel


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ginny1015
Date: 10/13/07 8:32
Chapter: The Hotel

I waited, I read, and now I'm happy.

Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 10/13/07 7:36
Chapter: The Hotel

I loved Hermione's reasoning for the engagment. Great job. Wonderful chapter!! =) --RP/Kate

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 10/13/07 7:08
Chapter: The Hotel

YAY!! HERMIONE HAS NOT CHANGED! RON/HERMIONE FOREVER!!! ok, now thats out of my system, im goin to write the review now. You never cease to amaze me with your chapters and explinations and cliffhangers...i mean, sometimes people write cliffhangers and certain ideas and the reasoning or what comes next doesnt totally life up to scratch, but yours always is, in fact, its a thousand times better! I never need to get the slightest bit worried that the next part might be slightly different to how i would like it because its always a hundred times better! I love the reasoning behind hermiones change, i was startin to miss hermiones bushy hair! Another thing i love is how you use cliches in your own ways and make them all new and orignial and not a cliche anymore! I loved the ending to this chapter! I wish i could say everything i loved about this chapter but theres too much, i just want to say i love this story, its amazing how addicted to this story i am, i was addicted to this story after one chapter, which is an incredicle feat! If you ever write a book i will definately buy it and recommend it to everyone that will listen even those who hate reading because i dont think anyone should miss out from your writing. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I think explanations that don't really fit, or cliffhangers that then led to something anticlimactic are terrible -- I'm glad you don't think mine is like that! And I agree, Hermione without bushy hair is a terrible, terrible thing! Thanks again for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 10/13/07 5:01
Chapter: The Hotel

I loved it it was wonderful!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: alzzu
Date: 10/13/07 4:41
Chapter: The Hotel

Honestly. Brilliant. Loved it. I used to be able to form complete sentences.

I knew there was a good explanation to Hermione's behaviour! Ha! Knew you wouldn't let me down. Okay, that's maybe taking it to extremes, but... I knew it!

This is a brilliant, brilliant chapter. (I still haven't found a word that'd be better than brilliant. If I had, I'd use it.) And seriously, three hours with only one break? God, I wish I could write as well as you do so fast!

Seriously, amazing job!
- Alisa

Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much, I always love your reviews -- I think Brilliant is a great word! :)

Reviewer: TheDivaDivine
Date: 10/13/07 0:52
Chapter: The Note

I love the first chapter. The writer has a way of expressing the feelings and emotions of the moment and the characters thoughts. The only off thing is a pie in the sky. I don't get that but why over look the obvious clue of blood being in the room. Isn't it obvious to check the hospital first in case a eight month pregnant Ginny went into labor. I am curious about that but i won't judge to quickly. I read some more chapters first.

Author's Response: Hmm, sorry if that doesn't make sense to you, but I figured the screaming they heard before they went up to check on them indicated that she didn't just go into labor. . . .

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl9388
Date: 10/13/07 0:14
Chapter: The Hotel

i have been waiting forever for this chapter and it was definatly worth the wait!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 10/12/07 22:51
Chapter: The Hotel

oh YES! I knew Hermione wouldn't have been marrying someone as horrible as Bernard without a reason. And the Ron/Hermione action... simply beautiful!

great job, can't wait for the next chapter - to find out more about harry and ginny!

Author's Response: Thanks! And of course Hermione has a reason for marrying Bernard, I couldn't have it any other way!

Reviewer: Phoenix 86
Date: 10/12/07 22:36
Chapter: The Hotel

nice explanation of Hermione's actions. i thought she turned into THAT to get back at Ron for something that happened between them in the past.

Author's Response: No, she just turned bitchy in order to get back at Ron ;) Thanks for the review.

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