Reviews For The Pursuit
Reviewer: Xanga Blood
Date: 12/09/07 16:33
Chapter: The Hotel

I just read your quote and I am mad! you are very mean! I need it! I need more! *tear! Lol!

yeah sorry about thaat but...I need it! *twitch*

Author's Response: I am pretty mean, I know -- but a quote means the chapter is soon to follow! In fact, it's already in queue, it just needs to be accepted!

Author's Response: Ah! Here I go lying to you. This is what happens when I try and multi-task. The next chapter of another of my stories is in queue, not this one -- but this one will be soon!

Reviewer: Beegurl
Date: 12/09/07 12:55
Chapter: The Hotel

I know it sounds crazy, but I just can't get over the fact that I still think the whole thing is a set up!! I mean, the thing with the DEA could happen, but what are the chances of both Ginny AND Harry being in the same room at the same time at the exact moment the kidnapping was planned. I think it is an elaborate plot formed to get Hermione and Ron back together. Great story, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: It's an interesting theory, I give you brownie points for that. I guess you'll just have to wait and see how it turns out. . . . I've started in on the next chapter, and I do plan on finishing it and posting it soon! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Beegurl
Date: 12/09/07 11:49
Chapter: The Pansy

Bernard seems like a nice enough guy, but it's soooo easy to hate him because he is with Hermione. If that wasn't the case, I might actually like him!

Author's Response: Being with Hermione does completely ruin him!

Reviewer: Xanga Blood
Date: 12/08/07 13:19
Chapter: The Hotel

I need more! Just a reminder.....

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm working on it! ;)

Reviewer: book babe
Date: 12/04/07 16:48
Chapter: The Hotel

oh wow
i love it
aww and im so glad for ron and hermione yay

Author's Response: I'm glad for them too! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 12/04/07 2:43
Chapter: The Note

oh please please please update!!!

Author's Response: I really am working on it, I swear. My goal is to get another chapter up before the Holidays.

Reviewer: Hermione G Weasley
Date: 12/03/07 10:54
Chapter: The Twist

this was an interestng chapter. i was right about the cheating and affair. why is hermione still marrying the git? and you have to make hermione and ron end up together, because it is a ron/hermione fanfic after all. cant wait to keep reading!

Author's Response: Of course they'll end up together! They just have a bit of a bumpy road ahead of them. . . .

Reviewer: Hermione G Weasley
Date: 12/03/07 10:26
Chapter: The Pansy

Bernard was kinda stuck up if you ask me. and the way Lynn came flying in calling Bernie, and with the pink lipstick.... 'Hermione was talking snappily to a thin woman with golden floss hair in a fancy bob, candy blue eyes above lips painted an offensive shade of pink'-could the two be having a secret affair?

Author's Response: He is sort of stuck up, I agree. I should know, considering I wrote him ;) Thanks for the review, and as for your theory, well, read on. . . .

Reviewer: Xanga Blood
Date: 12/02/07 23:00
Chapter: The Hotel

I know I review's just that I love your story and can NOT wait for you to post the next one!

Author's Response: Trust me, you can never review too much!

Reviewer: Hermione G Weasley
Date: 12/02/07 19:38
Chapter: The Note

oh my god this was so good! intense, with the way hermione and ron were fighting, and the way all we could "hear" was ginny's screams of help...intense

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: roxy foxy
Date: 11/26/07 7:33
Chapter: The Hotel

hey plzz write more n update fast plz plz the plot is mind-blowing

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it; I'll try to have the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: Xanga Blood
Date: 11/25/07 19:43
Chapter: The Hotel

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleas I love this story it is freekin awesome!

Author's Response: I'm working on it!

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 11/24/07 17:35
Chapter: The Hotel

Very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 11/22/07 22:28
Chapter: The Hotel

this is such a great story could you please please please please hurry and write the next chapter? don't take this the wrong way i'm just so eager to read it. i've been waiiting for over a month :)

Author's Response: It has been a while, I know, and I'm sorry! I have started writing the next chapter, and here's a little teaser: it starts with a memory. . . . ;)

Reviewer: roxy foxy
Date: 11/22/07 10:20
Chapter: The Hotel

good plot keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Xanga Blood
Date: 11/17/07 21:32
Chapter: The Hotel

Write more PLZ!

Author's Response: I'm working on it!

Reviewer: P_potter
Date: 11/11/07 2:53
Chapter: The Hotel

am loving where you are going with this story!!!! it's so cute the ending of this chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hopefully soon!

Reviewer: HotSauce202
Date: 11/08/07 19:44
Chapter: The Note

I'd imagine it would be much harder to write the NEXT chapter, actually. I mean, yeah, they did that, and in the morning somebody will say "that was a mistake" etc., but where do you go from there, you know? Also, I noticed a lot of your fics are dominated by either James/Lily (Lily first hating James, then loving him), or people doing things out of character for a reason that we don't find out until chapters later. I'm not complaining, it's good, just something I noticed.

Author's Response: That is generally how I do things, you're right. The next chapter is going to be tough, in fact, it already is tough, I've written the beginning already -- and already deleted it. ;)

Reviewer: HotSauce202
Date: 11/08/07 16:46
Chapter: The Note

Hey, what's up? This is a great start so far, and it's kept me interested from the first sentence. May I just say that I have read both Uncle Fred and Someone to Watch Over Me, and I really love your work. Also, I have just a quick question: I've dabbled in fanfiction in the past (though none of it HP related), myself, but I was never able to hold interest in a story long enough to see it through. I get the feeling it's because I wasn't willing enough to sacrifice time for the good of the story, because I'd never go back and delete something I'd spent hours on and write something totally different in its place. Any thoughts?

In the hopes that your day has been good enough that this DOESN'T make it,


Author's Response: As terrible as this is for me to admit, I experience the same sort of thing as well. After the third chapter of The Pursuit, I hit a road block. I knew wanted I wanted to happen, I knew how I want the story to end, but getting there seemed very daunting, and I deleted hours of work before I finally got the fourth chapter up. At times, the same goes for Uncle Fred, and Someone To Watch Over Me. Often what I do is work on one-shots or short fics such as The Twinge, or I Love You This Much, or three or four others that I've written and never posted, and before too long I'll get this inspiration to write for my WIP again. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like my writing!

Reviewer: RonandHermione4
Date: 11/08/07 14:14
Chapter: The Hotel

WONDERFUL! I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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