Reviews For The Pursuit
Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/05/09 22:29
Chapter: The Twist

Seriously, what is wrong with her? Why doesn't she ditch Benny and marry Ron? Speaking of Benny, I wonder what his story is... *smiles mischievously*

Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/05/09 22:19
Chapter: The Pansy

OK, I think I get it. Bernard's having an affair with Lynn! Yes? No? I suppose I'll find out when I read on. Great story, by the way! :)

Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/05/09 22:09
Chapter: The Note

Whoa! This is great! I like how you put in the new, possessed Hermione, it makes the story better. Great!

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 07/17/09 5:24
Chapter: The Note

omg i soo happy to find out that you're writing a fanfic on ron and hermione! yay! i was so happy i decided to read this know i must have told you this zillion times but this fic is awesome :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Please, feel free to tell me as many times as you want how much you like this fic! ;) I'm pretty excited about the Ron/Hermione one I'm working on now; hopefully it won't disappoint you!

Reviewer: MadEyeMaddy
Date: 07/04/09 23:28
Chapter: The Choice

Nonononononononononononononononono!!!!! You can't....No you just...Don't end it there!!!!! :[. This was A-m-a-z-i-n-g. This was one of my all-time favorites.

One questions though. Why was Portia disguised as a little girl? I didn't really get that, and it was creeping me out. A lot.

I'd have to say my favorite part of the story was where Hermione is pretending to be passed out. Because she just jumps up and saves the day. No one ever uses Hermione like a hero that way. It made me so happy to see her like that. I also liked when she took all the spells and potions and such out of her hair.

My favorite line was "If anyone will be having Ron's super-baby, it'll be me." :D.

The ending made be sooooo happy. I don't know if anything made me "laugh" though. Maybe in shock though, because this was such a "thriller". (You should change all the names and publish this into a book. I'm serious). I fell out of my seat when Bernard said it wasn't really him. That, and the little girl. *shudder*.

I think that's the longest review I've ever written. I hope you reply, I'd love to hear back. R/Hr foreverr(:


Author's Response: The longest review ever -- that's high praise! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! This story wasn't really a very funny one, you're right; it is certainly a "thriller." I always think Hermione is a cooler hero than people give her credit for, so it's good to know you agree and you liked that scene! ;) As for why Portia was disguised as a little girl -- just a part of her creepy charm. . . . Thanks very much for the review!

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 04/28/09 3:50
Chapter: The Choice

Great story! That was completely entertaining. Ron and Hermione are my favourite couple and this story really does justice to them. I especially enjoyed reading the chemistry between them and the character development of both the protagonists. That part in the tunnel was really freaky though, I could literally imagine that little girl Ron sees! I know it might sound a little bizarre but little girls sometimes terrify, brilliant story loved how u incorporated Streetcar too! :) 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much! This was the first time I ever tried my hand at writing a story that focused on Ron/Hermione, and it's good to know that you think I did them justice. They weren't originally one of my favorite Harry Potter couples, but the more I write them, the move I love them :) I think what Ron saw in the tunnel would be pretty terrifying, too! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/08/09 18:54
Chapter: The Choice

loved this story. it wasnt as dark or as deep (cant think of another word) as some fo your other fics but its still good.


the last part was my favorite when they got back together so cute :)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/02/09 14:49
Chapter: The Tunnel

yaya i guessed tight. miscarrage was what i though from the memory in the last chapte.r


but who is it????


great chapter.

Author's Response: Good job! Being able to guess a twist is always fun ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/02/09 14:39
Chapter: The Girl

really interesting. loved the memory at the beginning. and the girl she's creepy but i love the caracter

Author's Response: Sometimes creepy characters are fun to read -- it's good to know you can appreciate her :) As always, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 03/30/09 15:31
Chapter: The Hotel

yay! they are together!!! never would have guessed with bernard. good twist.

Author's Response: I'm glad it was unexpected -- I love writing (and reading) twists. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 03/30/09 15:18
Chapter: The Twist

oh the suspense! good think you finsihed writing this so i dont have to wait for updates. :)

Author's Response: That is the best part of reading completed stories :) I'm glad you like it; thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 03/27/09 14:20
Chapter: The Pansy

great chapter.


dont like bernard. agree with ron he is a pansy. dont trust him.


i love how jealous ron is. :) and hermione too with the fan girls

Author's Response: Jealous Ron is fun -- as is jealous Hermione . . . maybe that's why I liked the sixth book so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank for the review.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 03/26/09 20:41
Chapter: The Note

love your other fics so i decided to read this too.


its really good.


not really a ron/hermione person. but this looks good.


cant wait to

Author's Response: Generally I tend to stick to Harry/Ginny with Ron and Hermione as a background couple. However, I tried my hand at them in this fic, and I hope you enjoy it as you do my others!

Reviewer: half_n_half
Date: 03/25/09 23:25
Chapter: The Pansy

Ron was absolutely right...Bernard is the perfect pansy. i approve that you capture the "pansy-charmer-two-timer" effect. nice work. haha...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that :)

Reviewer: sonywinx
Date: 02/03/09 10:58
Chapter: The Choice

I loved it, I tell you. Loved it. Followed it through each friggn' chapter.
Good job, doc!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you loved it :)

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 01/04/09 19:42
Chapter: The Choice

I liked it - suspenseful, kept me hanging and captures the characters well - I could see all of them turning out like this

Author's Response: Thanks! Suspenseful is always something for which I try, as is keeping the characters true to form. It's good to know you thought I managed both!

Reviewer: Rose Molly Weasley
Date: 01/02/09 12:13
Chapter: The Choice

I really liked this story and I think it is one of the really good ones in the Ron and Hermione saga. You really did justice to their rather complicated realtionship! I hope there's a sequel coming!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Ron and Hermione are really the ultimate romance of Harry Potter, and I'm glad you thought I did them justice! :)

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 12/25/08 18:01
Chapter: The Choice

Well, being the hopeless romantic that I am, I have to say that the ending was my favorite part! I love the part where Ron starts listing all of the qualities about Hermione and I love it that she points out that he smells like beer and I definitely love the last line, "She only grinned" (perfect!)! This story really did pull me in from the first chapter. I certainly enjoyed all the twists and turns and the great emotion between Ron and Hermione and Ginny and Harry. Great story! Hope you write some other stories soon! :)

Author's Response: I loved writing that last scene between Ron and Hermione -- I'm glad you enjoyed it, too! It actually took me a while to figure out exactly where I wanted to end it -- I had a few different scenarios in my head and good last lines to have; this is what I ended up with. Thanks very much for the review. I'm big on twists and turns in stories, and it's good to know you appreciated them in mine. :)

Reviewer: HGHR_fan
Date: 11/29/08 21:57
Chapter: The Choice

I am absolutely in love with this story. You turned a very scary plot into a beautiful ending and made it work for everyone. The bad guys got what they deserved and the good guys lived to tell the tale. This is so happy and scary and sad that it just too many emotions wrapped in one 9 chaptered story. You write really well and I can't wait to read another one of your story. If you have any ideas of writing a sequel to this please do, and I will be the first to read it. This was beautiful and please think of writing a sequel I want to know what happens to Ron and Hermione's baby and James of course.

~*~ Ali

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you thought I was able to tie it all together very well. I don't know if there will ever be a chaptered sequel, but I am considering doing a one-shot follow-up that would answer some lingering questions and check in with our favorite characters. It might never happen, but at the same time. . . . We'll have to see! Again, I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

Reviewer: hermionefan25
Date: 11/18/08 15:21
Chapter: The Choice

Wow I love you your stories are so good, I don't usually read massive fics but I really got into yours, I love the ending hehe you let us use our imagination to what happens next and I love that in a author, again just to tell you your a great writer and can't wait to see more in your stories
Hope xx

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you decided to give this story a short even though it's not your usual type. And I'm glad you liked it! It is fun as an author to leave a little sometime to the reader's imagination ;)

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