Reviews For Lunar Eclipse
Reviewer: munlight_12
Date: 07/10/08 4:40
Chapter: Chapter 2

I absolutely loved ur story.
I cried through the whole thing. i've been reading ur stories and u r really a phenomenal writer.
U draw me into ur world.I feel like i'm in a trance when I read it.
Keep up the great work

Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/21/08 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 2

OMG..this is beautifully written. The way you string words together seamlessly is just WOW! Great job! ^_^

Reviewer: peevesismyhero
Date: 11/18/07 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 2

that is REALLY good. i dont know what to say. you have actually made me speechless, and i promise that is not something that happens very often. AMAZING!!!

Author's Response: This review made me really happy! Thanks very much, I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 22:10
Chapter: Chapter 2

really interesting, this was a very unique idea for a story it turned out marvelous!
I really like it! good job!

ya know what comes with me...

Abby: me me felted sad butt theres a neww hermione butt she never replaceded the old one. maybe new one smart too?

Author's Response: Yeah, it was different, wasnt't i.t..sort of odd, but I liked the way it turned out. It was sad to write. Yeah, I can imagine this new Hermione being very smart too. Of course, people are unreplaceable, but then again, they hold their places in our hearts, no matter the weather.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 21:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

ohh this is totally awesome in a sick twisted way.... if that makes sense but really amazing!


Abby: offfs to chapppyy too too! i hope i hope harry and giinny babauy cute and and and that ron become happy ron need to smiel.... people n eed to smiel to be hole dontt ya tink? you cantt live like tat. buyt goood!

Author's Response: Abby I completely agree with you. Life isn't worth the effort of making your heart beat if you're not gonna smile. Thanks for reviewing!..again, lol.

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 09/25/07 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 2

this story left me was amazing. i loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is the highest compliment you could have given me.

Reviewer: xcrunner26
Date: 09/08/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 2

amazing story..youre a great writer!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jsb12
Date: 07/14/07 13:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

Loved this story. I even cried a little. Even though I knew that Hermione couldn't stay, I couldn't help but read. Very beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thanks. Even though she could't stay, I could'nt help but write it.

Reviewer: Lily_Heather_Evans
Date: 06/29/07 23:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

Great story! The bit about Ron wishing for Hermione back was a little predictable, but it was still a touching story. I'm up to date on all your stories now, and they're awesome; keep writing!

Author's Response: Well, it obviously was obvious, I even had it on the summary. It didn't really matter to me if it was obvious, being mysterious wasn't important to the plot. But thanks for checking out my stories, I know your always really busy. THanks!

Reviewer: nikkiolapotter
Date: 06/26/07 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. I'm utterly speechless. Your descriptions were spectacular, and the story was bittersweet. Everything was incredibly IC, and my only nitpick was my confusion describing Hermione's death- you said the curse almost hit her, and I was kind of confused on which curse. Not that I hated that part- it felt like everything was in slow motion and I knew everything that was going on everywhere. Amazing fic, can't wait to read the next chapter!


Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep the characters as true to the books as I can, while still making it my own style...yeah, that part was a bit confuising I sister told me so. I just described everything that happened first, and then went back to describe Hermione's death...the look she gave Ron came right before the curse hit, before all of the other things happened...well thanks again for the great review! Hope you did read the other chapter!

Reviewer: patient wanderer
Date: 06/07/07 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 2

He's right. I did cry. So wonderful! Stunning. And that ending was hopeful. I loved it! Great job! And I'm praying for Gabs too..,

Author's Response: She's okay! *is relieved and infinitely happy*...thanks, dear!

Reviewer: the happy camper
Date: 06/07/07 22:50
Chapter: Chapter 2

OH wow....that was so beautiful! Words fail me. That ending was just perfect, and their goodness Ta was in hysterics...Once again, you've astounded me...

I hope you're sister will be okay. I'm praying for her...

Author's Response: She's okay. the operation ended yesterday, and it went well, no complications. *is unbelievably relieved*...anyway, thanks, for another amazing review! You guys are great!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/28/07 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 2

Yay, it made it through! This is such a lovely story. I really don't have much more to say other than what I already said when I beta'd it, just wanted to pop in. Good luck in the challenge! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! For the nice review and the great betaing! Good luck to you, too!

Reviewer: hogwartsgirl52
Date: 05/23/07 16:45
Chapter: Chapter 2

good job! great story! sad tho but good... =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon92
Date: 05/22/07 21:34
Chapter: Chapter 2

The ending was perfect. It might be sad but its really a great fic I love it! It is so difficult to put things like that in words but you did it! Even though I normally don't like sad fics, yours I always love ;)


Author's Response: Thanks. I don't like sad stories either, I like bittersweet. I don't knowwhy...

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 05/22/07 9:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

I missed this story when the first chapter came out, but I'm glad I caught it after this one.

A lot of authors can write sad stories, but you wrote one that while sad, ended with a promise of hope for Ron. I rarely get emotional reading these type of stories, but yours is exceptional.

And your ending was perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you didn't miss it. i know what you mean, I realy don't like stories that are just sad, and that's that. I think it has to be bittersweet to hold meaning. that's what I tried to do, anyway. Thanks again!

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 05/19/07 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh it's wonderful to see another story out! I've been waiting for so long, just don't forget your other ones.
This is really good so far. Definatly continue. Just one problem.. Depressing much??? JK it's great!

| :)

Author's Response: lol, I won't. Yeah, I know it's sad...but, I think the ending is a little hopeful. Hopefully, you'll think so too. lol

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon92
Date: 05/15/07 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow I love it! It's so sad are going to win I'm sure hehe. You should continue this It's so good well...just as all you've written.

- Pig.

Author's Response: Thanks!!*hugs* I don't know, all the other entries are really good too! But I did my best, or as close to my best as I could, and that's what matters. Thanks again, for the wonderful complements! I love your reviews! Mia

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 05/15/07 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, that's really creepy. very good though.

Author's Response: I know what you mean. Even though I'm proud of this story, it thoroughly depressed me. But I like the next chapter better, and I hope it won't seem as sad. Thanks

Reviewer: Pennilyn Novus
Date: 05/15/07 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this leaves all sorts of avenues open. In this wish world where Hermione is alive, is Harry dead, then? You could absolutely continue this, if you wanted. It was angsty and lovely. Well done.

Author's Response: Oh, I will continue...the next, and last, chapter is with my beta. Hopefully it will be up soon. Things are very different in the world where Hermione is alive. But I don't want to completely spoilt the surprise, so I'll just say thanks!

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