Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 09/02/08 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Open Lines of Communication

I'm loving the story idea, but it would be nice if there was more action and a bit less discussion. But I am loving Wayne at the moment ;)

Author's Response: Sorry, I guess I'm just a stickler for detail. I'll work on it when I get the urge to write again! Thanks for the imput.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 12/30/07 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Open Lines of Communication

This is a great chapter. I love this story and I will HAVE to stay tuned. I've never been interested in Cho before now, but you make her so unsnobby that I adore her. And Wayne just seems too good to be true! I love it!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 12/30/07 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Commonalities

Aw, this is so sweet. I like the relationship you have shown between the two. And for a first kiss that was a perfect one. Sweet and innocent. Just the way it should be. I liked the idea of the kites as well. It was so origional and different.

Good job.

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 05/24/07 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Commonalities

Aww, this story is so cute! You're doing avery good job with it so far, but I would like to hear abit more about wayne :)

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