Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 09/02/08 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Open Lines of Communication

I'm loving the story idea, but it would be nice if there was more action and a bit less discussion. But I am loving Wayne at the moment ;)

Author's Response: Sorry, I guess I'm just a stickler for detail. I'll work on it when I get the urge to write again! Thanks for the imput.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 12/30/07 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Open Lines of Communication

This is a great chapter. I love this story and I will HAVE to stay tuned. I've never been interested in Cho before now, but you make her so unsnobby that I adore her. And Wayne just seems too good to be true! I love it!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 12/30/07 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Commonalities

Aw, this is so sweet. I like the relationship you have shown between the two. And for a first kiss that was a perfect one. Sweet and innocent. Just the way it should be. I liked the idea of the kites as well. It was so origional and different.

Good job.

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 05/24/07 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Commonalities

Aww, this story is so cute! You're doing avery good job with it so far, but I would like to hear abit more about wayne :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Argus Filch by BrokenPromise 1st-2nd Years
Written for the Anniversary Challenge v3 over on the boards - a double dactyl...
The Prisoner by weasley-malfoy-aficionado 3rd-5th Years
A prisoner of Azkaban reflects on what is and what could have been. Little...
Harry Potter and the Sinister Plot by weasley-malfoy-aficionado 3rd-5th Years
Patrolling the streets of Hogsmeade one snowy day Ron encounters an unexpected...
FEATURED
Come Home by WrenWinterSong 1st-2nd Years
Three year old Teddy Lupin ponders the photographs on the living room side table.
But You Haven't Lost Me Yet by Dawnie 6th-7th Years
The war with Voldemort comes and goes, and James and Lily find themselves struggling...
broken brights by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
Harry's breath catches when he thinks of Ginny. I am not JK Rowling and...
CATEGORIES