Reviews For A First Kiss
Reviewer: Holly218
Date: 09/11/07 14:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it! I totally agree with ou about the other first kiss fanfics with Ron and Hermione. Yours was by far the best I've read!


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I haven't been checking reviews lately because school has been crazy, so it was a nice surprise to see this email! Thanks so much for your support, it brightens my day!!!! XOXO Cara

Reviewer: Magical Mal
Date: 09/06/07 23:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

I must say that you did a brilliant job with this! The way you wrote it was great ... you truly caught the moment of their first kiss!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!! First kisses aren't supposed to be perfect, they are supposed to be memorable and I tried to do that justice!!! Cara

Reviewer: x_dobby
Date: 09/05/07 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

you're so right... this is DEFINITELY how a R/H first kiss fanfic should be written. i loved how ron tripped over the rug. :] classic. also loved 'poke a sleeping dragon in the eye'. isn't that the hogwarts motto?? :] anyway, it was great all over && i'm favoriting it. < 3 kbyes;; OLiViA

Author's Response: Thanks!!! The motto is "Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus" which is Latin for "Never tickle a sleeping dragon". In his second year, Harry calls causing trouble in Severus Snape's lesson as safe as 'poking a sleeping dragon in the eye'. There is your daily history lesson!!!! JK, byes Cara

Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 08/30/07 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha that's awesome!!!! Ron is perfect in this piece, so much better than all the other ones!!!!!! And Hermione is so Hermione-ish, it rocks!!!!! Great, great job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!

Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 08/30/07 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha that's awesome!!!! Ron is perfect in this piece, so much better than all the other ones!!!!!! And Hermione is so Hermione-ish, it rocks!!!!! Great, great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! You are awesome for reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: ronlover101
Date: 08/27/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute, very, very cute

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)

Reviewer: Germa
Date: 08/05/07 6:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was ok, but the characters didn't seem right, like they just wern't!

Author's Response: Whatever, you are entitled to your opinion.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/02/07 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Realistic and... FLUFFY!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks=)

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/02/07 17:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Realistic and... FLUFFY!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 08/02/07 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Realistic and... FLUFFY!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I love reading stories with fluff, so I wanted to write a realistic yet fluffy story!!!! Thanks for your review!!! Cara=)

Reviewer: Heir of Ravenclaw
Date: 07/27/07 0:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very cute fic! I thought something along the lines of that would happen before DH came out. =)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I didn't expect them to happen like they did, but it was cute!!! =) Cara

Reviewer: lauralynn
Date: 07/25/07 22:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love this story! So sweet.

~laura

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I appreciate you guys reviewing me!!! ~Cara

Reviewer: superswiftquidditich
Date: 07/19/07 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked the story and I think that you're right about Ron Hermoine, they're first kiss would be a bit funny.
Thanks,
Lily

Author's Response: Thanks!! I just thought that their first kiss would be akward so I tried to write it that way!! Cara

Author's Response: Thanks!! I just thought that their first kiss would be akward so I tried to write it that way!! Cara

Reviewer: Gryffindor Lion
Date: 07/12/07 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

i understand where you're coming from, but this story is two akward even for them i think. i honstly didn't like it very much. the way you used Krum was great though.

Author's Response: Well, I respect you thoughts. You gotta throw Krum in there though because it just sets Ron off.

Reviewer: Fantasystar
Date: 07/10/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha..I loved this!
I agree with you. This really is more realistic. When he fell on her, I started cracking up, cause I was all like "Oooh..awkward." I want that to happen to me...sort of. As long as the guy doesn't hurt me. Anyways, like I said, I loved it. 10/10

Author's Response: Hehehe, Thanks!!! Yeah, as long as the guy is Ron, he can fall on me too!!

Reviewer: NickiGrint
Date: 07/10/07 9:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very Very cute! 10/10 I love the Awkwardness! And I have to admit I LOVE Ron to. My favorite character and if he dies next week me and my friends are planning an angry mob. Care to join?

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! Hell yes I will join your angry mob. I LOVE RON!!! He is not my favorite character (sorry) but I love him to death. OMG, I can't believe this whole thing is coming to an end. That is like ten years of my life of loving all things Harry Potter. Even if it is a totally awesome book, which we know it will be, I am going to cry my eyes out!!! :( Thanks again for your review!!! Cara L

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 07/08/07 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really good! Truly, genuinely, sincerely, a good fic! Good job, but please do some editing with your quotations, just to fix up and make it look pretty! Again, it's terrific!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I didn't even realise the mistakes, thanks for telling me!!

Reviewer: dance_dance_kitten
Date: 07/06/07 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think this story is so cute and it's just the way Ron acts! Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks!! :) I LOVE Ron....He is so sweet yet mean, smart yet dumb, and cute.

Reviewer: CristinaWeasley
Date: 07/04/07 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

nice...........much more 'realistic'..........ceartianly caught Ron in all his 'Ron-ness'................really liked it

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! We all love Ron, even with all his Ron-ness!!

Reviewer: 4evatonks
Date: 07/03/07 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was adorable! i love it

Author's Response: Thank you!! :)

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