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Reviews For Rekindled Love

Name: Grahammom (Signed) · Date: 07/26/17 14:45 · For: Rekindled Love
Sweet... she waited!!!

Name: Phoenix Song114 (Signed) · Date: 06/19/12 18:02 · For: Rekindled Love
FANTASTIC! I just love your stories, this is the second one I have read! Amazing! Great job!

Name: Accio Goblet (Signed) · Date: 08/03/11 13:21 · For: Rekindled Love
I usually hate the stories that're based off of songs, but this was nice.

Name: softballprincess541 (Signed) · Date: 11/28/10 15:45 · For: Rekindled Love
Hi there!

I'm a member of the FP Watcher Livejournal community and while looking for plagiarized Fictionpress stories I came across a story by an author who has copied most of this story and has simply changed the title and the character names to match the different fandom. Other than those changes, it looks to be a word for word copy of your own story. Here is the link: www . india-forums . com /forum_posts.asp?TID=1277848&TPN=25 (you'll have to scroll down a bit to see it)


Author's Response: Hey there!! Thank you so much for letting me know!! :O Could you send me the link again, because the one you've posted doesn't seem to be working...! I really want to see how much she's plagiarized and get this sorted out...!

Name: Brina Ashlynn (Signed) · Date: 03/23/10 1:45 · For: Rekindled Love
Love It SoOOOooo Much ^^

Name: Hermione_Draco_931 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/10 21:32 · For: Rekindled Love
Aww... that was such a cute one-shot! Love it!

Name: DramioneLuver23 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/09 19:46 · For: Rekindled Love
such a sweet story....so beautiful and romantic. i luv it!! deff one of my fave one shots.

Name: DramioneLuver23 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/09 19:46 · For: Rekindled Love
such a sweet story....so beautiful and romantic. i luv it!! deff one of my fave one shots.

Name: Fangerll (Signed) · Date: 07/12/09 20:07 · For: Rekindled Love
awww... so touching!

Name: padfoot_returns (Signed) · Date: 06/29/09 0:43 · For: Rekindled Love
Awww! What a sweet little one-shot! I loved, loved it.

The way you portrayed the emotions in this one-shot was wonderful. You certainly have a way with words. I love your use of adjectives and your description of things. The certain words you chose to use gave the story an overall magical feeling. Like, here, for example:

Unable to voice out her words, Hermione silently followed him; his hand never letting go of hers. She followed him through the great oak doors and into to the cool night; the starry sky and the bright moon made the night world seem mystical and enchanting. Hermione passed tall, magnificent yew trees that stood on either side of them until they came to a clearing surrounded by hedges with a white water fountain standing right in the middle.

The story is filled with quotes like this one that really helped give the story a magical mood, which is what I’m sure you were aiming for. Also, I must say that the song you picked out was perfect. It’s actually one of my favourite songs and I decided to listen to it while reading this and the song really went along with the whole mood. You seemed to capture the essence of the song perfectly. Amazing job!

Your characterization was also really good. I liked how Hermione didn’t just give in to Draco because that’s exactly how I imagine Hermione to be. She’s a girl who fights and doesn’t give in until she hears what she wants to hear and that’s what happened in the story. As for Draco, although we know that he will never really fall in love with Hermione, you managed to keep his character pretty consistent throughout the whole one-shot. He was a man who wasn’t going to give up until he got what he wanted and I loved that about him.

One thing that bothered me though was the brief information you gave on how Draco and Hermione came together. I know your story wasn’t focused on that and so, it shouldn’t be a big part, but perhaps you should have went into a bit more detail about it. For example, personally, I can’t imagine the whole school accepting their relationship and maybe you should have explained that. =)

Also, I caught a few mistakes here and there. They’re all really small mistakes like this one:

But He hadn’t.

It should be “he”. Like I said, they’re small and insignificant mistakes but sometimes, these little mistakes distract the reader from the amazing magical mood you created. If a beta just takes a real quick look at it, this story will be 100% complete.

Other than that, amazingly wonderful one-shot. Awesome job!


Name: HeidiJ (Signed) · Date: 12/16/08 3:21 · For: Rekindled Love
Wow, that was amazing, nice work. I'm not usually a fan of song fics or one-shots, but that changed my mind. Definitely a favourite! Good work!

Author's Response: Hello!! Yay for deciding to read this lil' one-shot! In the beginning, I didn't like fanfics based on songs either, but I just had to give it a shot! Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review!

Name: snowysnowboardergirl (Signed) · Date: 08/20/08 16:15 · For: Rekindled Love
dang...there are no words to describe this....dang

Author's Response: HAhaha...Glad you liked it! Oh and thanks for popping by and leaving a small review! I haven't recieved one for this one-shot in ages!! =D

Name: Moonlight Goddess (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 21:52 · For: Rekindled Love
that was sooo cute! really well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! *beams* I haven't recieved a review for this one-shot in what seems like forever, so I got so excited when I saw that you had left one! Thanks a ton!

Name: ember (Signed) · Date: 02/23/08 10:36 · For: Rekindled Love
OMG. That was awesome. I loved it! The best one shot that anyone has written and i am not lying. It was wow! Thats all I can say. Wow. Wow and Wow! Hope to read more of your creations. Your other story was good too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, wow!! Thank you so much!! I'm sorry I didn't respond to your review earlier...a lot was on my mind! But this is great - i'm really happy you liked the one-shot! My first one ever, so it feels awesome to know I didn't do such a bad job with it! =D Thanks a ton for taking the time to leave a review!

Name: ravenclawslostdiadem (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 21:49 · For: Rekindled Love
That was beautiful; the bad-boy-esqe Draco was well characterized.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the read! =D Thank you so much!

Name: hermionelover87 (Signed) · Date: 11/24/07 0:52 · For: Rekindled Love
great story!!!!!!!!!!!! very cute!!!=)

Author's Response: Aw thank you!

Name: dracosgirlfriend (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 18:43 · For: Rekindled Love
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was so cute!!!!!!!!!!

your friend

Author's Response: Hey...!! =D Im SO happy you liked it!! (wow...i thought you'd already read it before, but guess not lol..!) Thank you thank you! Your review means the world to me!! *smiles*

Name: Gamma Orionis (Signed) · Date: 10/19/07 19:51 · For: Rekindled Love
I must say, using Far Away as the song inspiration for this one-shot was very inspiring and clever of you. The lyrics really work in your favor of this story. (Why, WHY can't it be longer? LoL).

Normally, I'd wonder about why Harry and Ron are so curiously absent from Hermione's thoughts (after all, they're the Golden Trio!), but as this is a one-shot, I don't really have a problem with their absences.

[i]She looked at him fondly; gazing at his features as if to engrave them in her memory forever.[/i]
If it weren't for plagiarism, I'd totally steal this line. :) The I love you's at the end overwhelmed me because I think they'd both be reluctant to admit it, but I seem to be alone in this opinion, so don't take it personally. :) Great one-shot.

Author's Response: Hello!! Oh yeah, I just had to use 'Far Away' - it's my all time favourite song and i thought it would be a great idea to use it in a one-shot. You see I had imagined out the whole thing in my head while listening to it, so voila! Here it is =D

I really didn't want to get Harry and Ron involved in this one - I thought it would get too complicated then. I really wanted to focus on the fact that even thought they were apart for so long, they still really loved each other *smiles* I guess the I love you's were a bit overwhelming, but once again I needed away to emphasize how much they missed each other *winks*

Ooo Really, really happy you enjoyed it =D Thank you SO much for taking the time to review!

Name: Athenas Quill (Signed) · Date: 09/20/07 22:33 · For: Rekindled Love
wow that is so sweet. I really really really like.

Author's Response: Aw, that's great! Really happy you liked it...I had loads of problems getting this one up - it literally took me forever! lol...My first ever one-shot, so glad you enjoyed the read =D

Name: Wym23 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 12:27 · For: Rekindled Love
This a cute 1shot!!! AND I ABSOLUTELY ADORE 'JOURNEY ON WATER!!!!!!!!!!' ITS SO GOOD!I I know i should be telling you this on the actual story, but i wanted to tell you here. Heheh!

Author's Response: lol Thank you so much! It's great that you enjoy both this one and Journey on Water lol..!

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