Reviews For The Final Battle
Reviewer: darkdragondraco
Date: 09/11/06 18:35
Chapter: Epilogue

You killed Harry??? And in New Zealand???? Shame on makes me regret being a New Zealander...which part did you kill him in as there is alot of trees here!!!

Reviewer: LalyW
Date: 07/15/06 15:08
Chapter: Happiness at Last

I liked it.Harry would sacrifice his life for the greater good.I also thought it was funny that Draco and Hermione took up some of each other's habbits,like grinning and blushing.

Reviewer: yellowroes
Date: 05/06/06 9:10
Chapter: The Fatal Moment

oh my god i loved it you so totally rock my pokadot socks

Reviewer: yellowroes
Date: 05/06/06 8:46
Chapter: A Loss and a Arrival

question why did Harry just not use the accio charm?

Reviewer: glamorgrl111
Date: 04/30/06 13:26
Chapter: Epilogue

gr8 story reallt good amazing i was crying weh harry dies

Reviewer: erus fortis
Date: 03/20/06 4:54
Chapter: Happiness at Last

really nice finish in must say, worth reading this story to the end, you are a good writer,continue the good work

Reviewer: warriorash
Date: 12/09/05 6:03
Chapter: Epilogue

I've read the whole story, and in my opinion it's almost as good as J.K's work. Most of the scenes were described perfectly, and the few that weren't were still brill! I really likeed the way you ended the lives of Voldemort and Harry too. It had me totally hooked from start to finish.

Reviewer: Avenger_of_Dumbldore
Date: 09/28/05 19:43
Chapter: Epilogue

OMG.... I just read the hole thing non stop, from the first chp to the last.... AMAZING!!!!

Reviewer: Dragonology
Date: 08/27/05 22:32
Chapter: Epilogue

Amazing and beautifully written. Very sad, I cried at the epilogue! Certainly a 10.

Reviewer: JimboCOUS
Date: 08/20/05 1:07
Chapter: Epilogue

Nice. Thanks!

Reviewer: Fleur_Delacour
Date: 08/08/05 21:17
Chapter: Epilogue

O..........M..........G........... Wow, I'm speechless. Absolutly bril, it was really developed writing. I loved the flashback chapter, so incredible, absolutly fantastic writing. I loved the last few chapters, Harry definatly died a hero's death...still sad though. But, again, this story deserves a 100 out of ten. Keep up the fantastic work! I look forward to any more stories from you!

Reviewer: koolgirl1993
Date: 08/08/05 9:48
Chapter: Epilogue

i have only one word for your story: Beautiful. R: the biggest number on the earth.

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 08/01/05 18:03
Chapter: Happiness at Last

The hell I'm mad. But if thats how the storys gonna be, so be it. But its a damn good story!

Reviewer: lukyduky14
Date: 08/01/05 10:22
Chapter: Epilogue

It's...over? ::Bursts into tears:: I loved the majority of the epilogue, the ships were a bit, eh... That's my opinion though, and the epilogue for the most part really closed up the story nicely. The only thing I wish you hadn't done (the ships I can live with =) ) is make the graveyard only accessable to magical folk. I mean, isn't that sort of implying that there were no muggleborn/half-blood wizards/witches there who's parents would want to visit them? Other than that though, I loved your story from the moment I stumbled upon it, and am really sad to see the end. Looking forward to any future stories you're planning to write, lefty! ~Nicole ~R: as always, 10

Reviewer: lukyduky14
Date: 07/30/05 12:47
Chapter: Happiness at Last

I'm with you; I've believed for a while now that the ending to the series wasn't going to feel right if it wasn't bitter sweet... Agreeing with it doesn't make it any less sad though... I loved the memories, espicially the insight to the funeral and the wedding that you've been denying us for 10 chapters =). Overall, very well written, no typos that I could find - can't wait for the epilogue! ~Nicole ~R: 10

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 07/29/05 13:43
Chapter: Happiness at Last

good story... but harry shouldn't die!!! :( give us the epilouge please!!

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 07/05/05 15:10
Chapter: The Fatal Moment

finally!! yay!! i almost shouted for joy when I saw the next chapter was up. very one too. very thorough and very exciting! please update quick!!

Reviewer: pegasys
Date: 06/28/05 15:39
Chapter: Message

Good story so far, I like stories where Draco turns good. The only qualm I have is that Draco woulkd not marry Hermione, well maybe he would, but she is reserved for Ron. Well whatever I really like the story. I give you a 7.

Reviewer: lukyduky14
Date: 06/26/05 16:39
Chapter: The Fatal Moment

Whoa, the MNFF is actually corporating; only had to log in twice! Anyway, sorry about the delayed review, I was on vacation... A few mistakes: 'I thought you were the perfect little witch, so clever and brave.But you were wrong.' You need some spaces in there, and I think you either meant 'You thought' or 'I was wrong.' Also in 'It was a long was back' 'was' I think was meant to be 'way.' Aside from that, excellent chapter. I really enjoyed the individual battles (esp. Hermione/Pansy). The scenes between Harry and Voldie was breathtaking, particularly the dialogue; you had me holding my breath the whole time (as I tend to do with your story). Canít wait for the next update, your story definitely is, and always has been from the minute I read the first chapters, one of my absolute favorites. ~Nicole ~R: 10

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 06/26/05 4:31
Chapter: The Fatal Moment

Ooh, really good - update, update!!! Sorry, I wont be so harsh. Ahem. Well, I must say that was a smashing story in which your skills in writing showed up ever so clearly. I am pleased to announce that I have awarded you a 10 for your troubles and greatly anticipate the next chapter. And indeed, I to am having trouble satying logged in long enough to submit my further chapters, but eventually, after ten attempts, I managed it. Of course, then it was rejected for many a pety thing and I had to resubmit. Sigh, life has a way of annoying one. Anyway, jolly good show, keep up with the writing. The one and only, Ermine the One.

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