Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/30/08 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: The water front

Oh my God, I just realised I left the review in the wrong chapter. Sorry, I messed up.=Sammy

Author's Response: No problem ;)

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/30/08 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hints and suspicions

Wow, it seems that that the last reviewer stole the words right out of my mouth. I, too was waiting for an update (and pestering you about it, I profess) and the wait was worth it.

You have an amazing knack for characterization, speceally with an OC which is the most difficult for me to work with. *is terribly enviouse of you*

Keep updating as it tends to put a smile on your reader's face.=Sammy

P.S. I'm so sorry it took me so long to review this but you know how busy we were with Mark Of Sacrifice.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Yes, we were busy with Mark Of Sacrifice, but it's always a pleasure teaming up with you. Congratulations again! And your OCs are great; you know I loved "History's best kept secret", and it has quite a few. I fear I rely too much on them, but it's really how I feel I want the story to be.

Reviewer: Hagrid_is_evil
Date: 01/29/08 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: The water front

I must admit, I was really looking forward to reading this story when I read the first chapter. I waited and waited for the second chapter; finally, a story I could truly get into. But it nothing came... Imagine my surprise, getting an email months later ‘Update to favorites at MuggleNet Fan Fiction‏’, “ooh ‘Almost me again’ must have been updated” but no… ‘Dumbledore and the Secrets of the Merpeople by lightspot, one of your favorite stories at MuggleNet Fan Fiction has been updated.’ And so I read. Your writing flows, your OC’s are more real than some real people I know, and Dumbledore is as good as anyone can ask for. Even the best can do better, but you are definitely doing the right thing. Your style of writing is drastically different from the series, not that that’s a bad thing. I would liken it to watching an enthralling movie, but better. The words seem to read themselves. Keep up the updates and the great work!

Author's Response: Wow, after reading your review, my ego is over the moon. I am sorry for the late update, but I had to change some major plot points of the story, and this chapter had a couple of details that will be important later. I am relieved that you liked my OCs. There are quite a few more coming yet, and this gives me hope. But I must admit that writing them, what they think, how they react to the situations they are in, is one of the things I enjoy the most.

Reviewer: ChiQs09
Date: 05/22/07 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hints and suspicions

Whoohoo.. I've read this very first chapter and now I can't wait to read the next.
I am now feeling a bit awkward and discouraged about my fiction that I let you beta'ing it. You're not only a good beta but a talented author, as well, and you have to beta my kiddie-story. ohh
^_^

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, but don't underestimate your story! Broadly speaking, mine is about mistery and adventure, and yours is about the difficulties of a relationship. There's nothing to be ashamed of!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 05/22/07 2:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hints and suspicions

I read it very carefully and kept a sharp eye out for errors but I didn't find any. I guess thats why you're the beta who incidentally has to put up with my horrible spelling.=Sammy

Author's Response: The merit of that would be of my amazing beta, Mortalus, more than mine.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 05/22/07 2:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hints and suspicions

Wow, that was the most powerfull stuff I've read and its only the first chapter. Update as soon as you're finished with chapter 5. =Sammy

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm not as easy-going as you with words (I truly envy you for that) but I tried to do my best. I'll finish with chapter 5 as soon as possible, but before updating indeed.

Reviewer: Hagrid_is_evil
Date: 05/18/07 19:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hints and suspicions

This is one of the many trailing ends in HP that i can only hope to be explored in DH. Good job, feels like you have a big juicy plot on the conveyor belt.

Author's Response: You're right, and I hope to explore quite a few of these trailing ends. About the plot, it's all thought through, waiting to be written as soon as I have a spare moment. Thank you for your review.

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