Reviews For I Am Lily
Reviewer: Sailing Girl
Date: 12/23/10 12:32
Chapter: I Am Lily

Love it! Lily was believable, hating her perfection while others would kill for it.
James was good, striking out at her with the gum to show that even she wasn't perfect.
Love it

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/22/08 12:08
Chapter: I Am Lily

I guess it's okay.....

Author's Response: Errrr. Thanks?

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 01/13/08 18:38
Chapter: I Am Lily

I absolutely love it!!! yeah, one of your recent stories caught my eye, so I'm checking out more, and they're great!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 07/25/07 20:52
Chapter: I Am Lily

I really like the tone of this story. I like how Lily discovers that she doesn't like being perfect in everybody's eyes. And I can actually sympathize with her, to a point. I used to have shoulder-length ringlets, and everybody exclaimed over me and them, but they grew out and straightened. Now I just have ludicrously thick, wavy hair. But for a time there, I didn't feel RIGHT, like I was pretending to be someone. And I have always felt that I am completely and totally myself around my older brother. We joke and are immature together, and just be ourselves. But when I had that hair, when I was 7 or so, I realized that people liked me because I was cute, and that they just liked to admire my hair. When I was 9, my ringlets were completely gone, and I found that I really was making friends and having a great time. I know I was pretty young, but I still am, so I have a lot to learn, but I think that sort of freeing yourself from who people think you are is totally well, I can't think of any better word, so AWESOME, but that still doesn't seem right. Oh, well.
Sorry for the long-winded story about my little-kid life. But I really did enjoy the story. It meant a lot to me. I think she was really brave to do that, and I like how there's that little part with James, when he says that she isn't perfect, and so he's not sorry that he gave her a slight problem in her perfect little world. I also love how James comes back later after she cuts her hair, and she realizes that she's only really her around him. And how he likes her hair, and that he's the only person who is going to say that. But anyway! Thanks for reading all of this babble. I don't usually write this much about stories, but this one really impacted me, so I felt that since us writers don't get any other reward for writing, the least I could to was to compliment you and tell you that I loved it! Thanks again,

Although I haven't actually posted anything on here yet, I have posted stories on other websites on different subjects.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love these type of reviews, so feel free to keep talking. :D I always try to do the same thing, show the author that his or her story really did affect you. I'm very glad that you loved it! I'm a fan too. :D

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 07/23/07 19:39
Chapter: I Am Lily

that was wonderful!!!! really really talented writing! the pacing was perfect and her tone was just the best it could be for her!i love how you made her like taht and i loved how she chopped off her hair! i had a character do that once, except she chopped everything off. but i LOVE this story, one of the best one-shots i've seen!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hugs*

Reviewer: remilupin
Date: 06/24/07 19:56
Chapter: I Am Lily

Love the way you depict the complexity of being perceived as "perfect." Lily being dumped for the first time, not knowing whether to laugh or cry, needing to do something extreme & reckless ... all of it rings true. I can totally imagine Liy falling for James under the circumstances in your story. Very nice. Very romantic.

Author's Response: :D :D :D Thank you!

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 06/13/07 18:28
Chapter: I Am Lily

I like this...more like love it...but yeaaaa.. its coming of age kind of a thing and its an interesting theme...and u handled it well....gr8 job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 06/10/07 23:36
Chapter: I Am Lily

Wow, what a totally cool story! The fact that everyone thought she was perfect, and it ticked her off, so she did something crazy. What a sweet idea!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 05/28/07 12:33
Chapter: I Am Lily

wow. i really really really really really liked thisstory. so cute and simple. i have never thought of lily like that...and it was kjust a really cool exciting new view of her. once again. excellent story, i can't wait to read more of your stories! you truly are an amazing author.

Author's Response: Thank you! :]

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 05/13/07 9:55
Chapter: I Am Lily

Wow, this was wonderful! I must say, I don't usually see stories that portray Lily Evans as anything less than perfect--which is what your whole story was about.

I love the transformation of Lily, and how it was done with her hair. To a teenage girl, hair is a big deal. Bad hair days=end of the world. I love how Lily chopped it off ruthlessly, and I love how she adored it.

Wow, this is pretty much my favorite story. Ever. *adds to faves again and again and again and again*

I'll have fun looking for pictures for your banner. :D

You did an utterly fantastic job. *gushes*

Author's Response: Thank you, Jordan!! I'm glad you liked it. *hugs*

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 05/12/07 23:06
Chapter: I Am Lily

I like it!!!! So cute! Great job! I like the flashbacks, but only to little bits of conversation. It's different, I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 05/11/07 16:00
Chapter: I Am Lily

Wow! I loved it! It was so different from the normal Lily stories. It was nice. I loved the last scene with James and Lily... so sweet. =D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 05/11/07 15:49
Chapter: I Am Lily

Very powerful, very very powerful. I like it a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: foreverstrange
Date: 05/11/07 12:55
Chapter: I Am Lily

That was wonderful. The way Lily felt eminds me of myself earlier this year, and I did the exact same thing, I chopped of my hair. Mum wanted to keep it though cause it was the longest my hair had ever been. Thankyou for giving me the gift of your writing.

Author's Response: :D Thank you! You're review made my day.

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 05/11/07 11:31
Chapter: I Am Lily

great! the last part was wicked :]

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 05/11/07 7:24
Chapter: I Am Lily


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 05/11/07 5:48
Chapter: I Am Lily

Awww, that was so good!! Thank god you have shown here that Lily is not always perfect, thank you!!! Well done, 10/10. Abbi :)

Author's Response: Thanks AbbI!

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