Gimme More. Rita and Hermione? THAT IS SO HOT
PMSL! Hilarious and quirky!
omg that was awesome i like your stories
I loved it! I want a bird for my hair :)
Funny, wicked and exiting story. I love your style to write, please keep it!
Not too bad, but watch your spelling.
Stairs are the things that you go up and down. Stares are for looking at someone over long.
1 word: BEAUTIFUL this was excellent
Luna was so funny in this! You portrayed her very well.
OMG, 'Mione's a whore!!!! LOL, this is so freaking hilarious!!, I hope it was meant to be, because if it wasn't I'm sorry, but roflmgdmfaoqrx, ect...
Rita and Hermione! Who would have thought it??? Now, however, I'm considering it. They're clearly both incredibly intelligent, so there could be some attraction there. I'm sure they both have some respect for each other. Although you made the pairing mostly physical. Either way, I really enjoyed this, it was very well written! I was entertained all the way through! The descriptions of the club were fantastic, and all those former musicians were inspired! You must have had a fabulous time coming up with names! All of your people were really in character, especially Luna. She really got me laughing! The ending was a little abrupt, though. Is another chapter in the works? I'd certainly read it!
It says that that is the end of the story permenently? 0.o I don't understand that but I guess if that is the end then that is the end. It was nice.
this is good ! its very well written i can't wait to see what happens! it made me laugh!!!!
I'm glad they got over their little differences. Very relistic. Plenty of feeling.
Wow! This was pretty funny, and you played Rita and Hermione, well all the characters, really well!
Can't say that I'm a fan of the pairing, but it was fabulous writing. I was laughing most of the way through!