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Reviews For The White Sheep

Name: NikkiSue (Signed) · Date: 05/18/07 17:01 · For: Chapter 1
What a fabulous viewpoint on the final moments of Regulus. I have never really read a story centered on Regulus but this one makes me want to read more. I love how you delved into his mind and we were able to watch him slowly crumble, especially after seeing Nymphadora. I always forget how many characters were related and as children spent a lot of time together. When Bella approached him from behind and he greeted her as "cousin" before she killed him... powerful.

Reading the final part - the letter delivered to Andy from Sirius - really brought home how clear cut the alliances were and how far Bella would go to serve Voldypants. Her allegance was unwavering, even against blood. Thats some strong power You-Know-Who has got over her.

Name: travelgirl (Signed) · Date: 05/13/07 14:14 · For: Chapter 1
Well written. I like how you described Tonks. Very cute

Name: Chaser921 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 17:36 · For: Chapter 1
That was terrible! Wonderful! Terribly wonderful! I could feel everything Regulus was experiencing; you really got into his head. I also like that you titled it "White Sheep." Very fitting. And I like that one cousin savs him and others kill him. Poetic, tragic, and characteristic of the Black family.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful response! I am fascinated by the Black family, so I'm glad I managed to capture that particular characterstic. thank you again! :D

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