You write beautifully, I don't see how that site could reject you. This is a extremely well written original. Everybody writes about how they fell in love. But you showed me how James reacted to the time he found out about Harry. I think this is a great story and you should continue writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wanted to show a side of James and Lily that was more than just tragic fluff, and your review makes me feel like I've accomplished that! Thanks for reading!
I don't know what was wrong with that site, because this is one of the best fanfictions i've ever read. It's definately in my top five Lily and James. Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for the self-esteem boost. If I get enough reviews like yours, I'm going to compile them and send them to the site that rejected this. Thanks so much!
Awww, what a sweet story! Poor James, though, thinking Lily was having an affair... Of course, she would never do that, but... I can't blame him. Great job, this is totally going in my favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! I, too, find it impossible to believe that Lily would EVER cheat on James, but I also imagine James as being somewhat insecure about Lily, due to the fact that she hated him for years. haha. Anyway, thanks again, for reading and reviewing.
awwwwww, that was soo sweet! i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!
Author's Response: Awww that review makes me feel so good! Thank you!
i love that they high five... that made me chuckle... this is really good... i love it
:::hearts:::
sarah
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you liked the high five part, too!
HAHAH
"high five"
that was hilarious and cute all at once
excelent job!
Author's Response: On one of the other sites that hosts this story, nobody commented on the whole "high five" thing, and I was so disappointed, because it was one of my favorite parts of the story! So I'm glad that the wonderful readers on mugglenet appreciated it adequately! Thanks for the kind review! Glad you liked it.
ahhhh. So cute.
Author's Response: hehehe. Don't you just love James? I definitely do!
Aw! I feel so happy for them!
Author's Response: :). Glad you liked it!!!
Oh wow that was brilliant!
I was really drawn into it and left wanting more...a sequel perhaps??? Of later on in the pregnancy!!!
Author's Response: A sequel, eh? I'll definitely consider it! Thanks for the review!
I tried submitting a review before and it didn't work so i'll send it again:
I cried at the end of it, just knowing about their fate and thinking about how happy and excited james was... You write spectacularly - you are able to capture the emotions of the characters in a great way... I
m adding this story to my favourites!
Author's Response: Awww thanks! I know what you mean. I always find it hard to write about Lily and James, no matter how happy the story is, because I know what's going to happen to them. (sniff, sniff). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
that was really. really good. just enough tension and emotion to be realistic and powerful. and James's reaction was so cute! his high five...hilarious.
Author's Response: Yes, I loved James's reaction myself. It's hard for me, with the way I think of James, to imagine him being anything but ecstatic at the idea of his son. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Aww, I love this story! It's very well done! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks you! I'm SO glad you liked it!
Wow. I loved it! You had me cracking up with the whole "high-five" thing. That was hilarious. I felt so bad for James when he thought Lily was having an affair. Poor thing. Anyways, great job, and I hope you post more stories in the future! :-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story. I have submitted another one, but it hasn't been validated yet. Keep an eye out for it, and thanks for reviewing!!
