Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Reviewer: Angelix19
Date: 09/13/10 12:34
Chapter: 21. Flight

I think "Usque aurora dormi" would be better because dormi is the imperative of dormire (to sleep). Dormio means "I sleep"

Reviewer: Angelix19
Date: 09/12/10 13:05
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

Amazing new chapter!
Keep updating!

Reviewer: holdonyeah
Date: 09/11/10 18:35
Chapter: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished

I looove this story. =) it has so much depth to it! Wishing for another update soon!

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 09/09/10 8:48
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

Finally!!

Reviewer: lovedbythedragon
Date: 09/08/10 21:39
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

yay thank you so much for still writing plz dont ever give up this fic ive had so many that have gotten canceled and i really enjoy this one so plz plz keep writing!!thanks in advance

Reviewer: zolly
Date: 09/08/10 14:52
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

Each new chapter brings me deeper and deeper into the amazing plot you've so carefully weaved. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 09/07/10 20:57
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

you updated!! hurry up and do it again!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/07/10 18:20
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

Wonderful and well worth the wait! I love your dip into gods and it feels like any moment they both will burst and tell each how it is! I love that she overhead his conversation and you know, I kinda think Narcissa is a little bit behind anyway b/c I felt that Ginny was starting to love him before he found out who she was. There seems to be more than meets the eye to what happened to her familiy too.

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 09/07/10 17:14
Chapter: 25. Getting back in the game

Ah. Long wait, and worth it! Even if there isn't a lot of action. xD
I want to see where are you heading with this. Somehow, it doesn't seem that Ginny will get her revenge, she's in it too deep. About Hermione... I don't know.

I love the way you write! Keep it up please!
And update soon, of course!

Reviewer: Sharmeen Sami
Date: 08/31/10 23:14
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

Please be quick with the next chapter!!! I almost cried wen fluer met her end! :(

Reviewer: lovedbythedragon
Date: 08/27/10 19:46
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

omg soo good!!!! plz keep writing and dont keep me in suspense for too long...... :P

Reviewer: ScarlettKarclov
Date: 08/20/10 5:36
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

I really loved this:) is that all though? I'm dying for an ending. You are a fabulous writer.

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 08/16/10 1:16
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

Lols at chapter end notes* whens the next part coming?!? i cant wait. This was almost as exciting as boook 7. i dunno how i feel about all the deaths but i guess i can cope. Wow this made me laugh and cry for hours!

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 08/15/10 23:14
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

I love this story! I hope you post more soon!

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 08/14/10 0:35
Chapter: 5. The willing bride

this could be made into its own movie, apart from harry potter.

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 08/01/10 19:11
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

I've been waiting this for a long time!!!
Getting darker and darker. Good job, please keep it up!

Reviewer: zolly
Date: 07/30/10 21:18
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

I'm so glad you updated! I've been checking faithfully every day for updates, and today, I was rewarded! I hope another chapter is on it's way soon? I'm anxious to see the next turn of events! Keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 07/30/10 5:39
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

Ahhhhh! I'm terribly desperate to discover what will happen. This is simply incredible, not to mention artistically written.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/29/10 13:04
Chapter: Narcissa Black Malfoy

Finally an update! Well worth the wait! Of course, I'm waiting not so patiently for Draco's version of what really happened! >:)

Reviewer: gryffindoll3
Date: 07/25/10 0:52
Chapter: 23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy

so excited for a new chapter! kept checking back for it and its finally here! really love your story

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