Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Reviewer: SkylerMalfoy
Date: 05/28/08 17:59
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

Did you like suddeny forget about this story, cause suddenly you stopped updating it. I want to know what happens!

Reviewer: lucid_dreamer
Date: 04/04/08 17:51
Chapter: 7. Magical Brazil, Bittersweet England

... and the plot thickens

I have been enjoying this story so far, but this lastest twist has truly inspired me to write a review. Keep those twists coming

Reviewer: whirling dervish
Date: 03/25/08 22:41
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

hooray! more, more!
Very well written, I love it. :)

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 01/31/08 17:35
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

NNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter i have been reading them so hungrily i cant stop thats why i didnt respond be fore
Please Pleas find the time to make another chapter this is one of the best i have ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ginerva9
Date: 01/11/08 13:59
Chapter: 6. Until death do us part

oh my god!!!

Reviewer: charlie black
Date: 01/04/08 23:57
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

this is such a great story. i like that draco isnt stupid, he's catching on--slowly--and ginny isn't perfect at concealing herself entirely. the blend is superb! im impatient for the next chapters!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/04/08 19:53
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

is the lighter draco has like a portable floo? that's really clever! how big is it, and does one actually have to stick their body parts into the flame? and/or use floo powder?

wow. I'm starting to imagine what it will be like when (if) draco finds out. ouch. I hope it's not too soon...

thanks for the update! I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: ginerva9
Date: 01/04/08 6:26
Chapter: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished

wow.....its superb n very interesting!

Reviewer: Strijkers
Date: 01/03/08 4:46
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

I really ejoyed reading this story. So much I read all eight chapter in one night. But it was never boring!
I'm realy looking forward to the next chapter. Of course Draco will find out that he raly married Ginny Weasley, but how... I wonder.

Reviewer: The_Undomiel
Date: 01/02/08 20:32
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

Hey! Love the story but please, when Draco finds out (since we know he will) could you have him be caring and understanding instead of mean and mad? Please?! And since I'm assuming Ginny does want to have children, does she continue to preform the conctraception spell because she is scared the
baby would have red hair? Thanks!

Reviewer: simplyevil123
Date: 01/02/08 10:57
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

im hooked this story is sooo good soo far i hope ginny can keep herself clam when draco talks about muggles ~wink~~wink~ draco is awsome

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 01/01/08 20:03
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

Interesting

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 01/01/08 11:37
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

really good, now I understand about her family.

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 01/01/08 10:41
Chapter: 2. A journey of discovery

Great writing I like the idea of mail order bride but I can't figure out what happened to her family. Is that supposed to be a secret?

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 12/07/07 20:36
Chapter: 7. Magical Brazil, Bittersweet England

That is so cute!!!! Will anyone find out it's really Ginny?

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 12/07/07 16:45
Chapter: 6. Until death do us part

Nice chapter. Keep writing.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 12/07/07 16:09
Chapter: 5. The willing bride

Nice, Narccissa is showing her softer side.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 12/07/07 15:35
Chapter: 4. Temptation

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Okaaaaaaayyyyyyyy then.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 12/07/07 15:20
Chapter: 3. Lifestyles of the Rich and the Famous

Very nice. Iloved this chapter, Draco's exercising self-control I never knew he had.

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 12/06/07 23:57
Chapter: 7. Magical Brazil, Bittersweet England

Wow. Wasn't expecting that one coming. I've only just started reading this fic; I admit it, it was because the summary made me laugh--how could Draco Malfoy be married to Ginny Weasley and not know it?--but you write so well, and I'm a nutter for irony. Talk about ironic. This is just fantastic.

First scene, Ginny speaking, you left out the 'r' in "having your way with me..."

Oh, by the way, I really love all the little extra references you've thrown in--particularly the Tolkien ones. You're sustaining the life of Middle Earth in a Potterverse, and you have no idea how happy that makes me, even just for a little bit!

I'm also intrigued by what you've done with the whole Weasley family being killed (except, and now, Percy), and Harry on top of it all, leaving Ginny pretty much alone. I don't think anything but that could leave her so broken, but you've given Draco and Ginny the power to heal each other...maybe.

Amazing story! Update soon, and have a nice day!

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