Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Reviewer: SeekerRain5375
Date: 11/23/13 3:54
Chapter: 31. From Violetta to Hathor

Very very very very descripted,perfect dialoge,and you got their personalitys right. You must right more fanfictions to get practice then make up your own story in the little world in your head.

Reviewer: DiaFlower
Date: 02/10/13 10:59
Chapter: 31. From Violetta to Hathor

Your story was really good. You have a knack for writing. I think you should write your own stories, you know, to get practice.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 02/01/13 16:15
Chapter: 31. From Violetta to Hathor

The wait was well worth it. Such a descriptive narrative; well constructed and easy to read. The images are grand, complimentary to Draco's persona. You have created an atmosphere of resolution in this final chapter: Draco and Ginny putting their past in the past and setting their joined hearts and minds towards a future for their boys that would be full of expressive love. Well done.

Reviewer: Luna_Fae
Date: 01/27/13 17:02
Chapter: 30. Malfoy Manor

Really disappointed. I really really loved this story, but its been over a year since you updated and I've just lost interest.

Reviewer: cuna molfoy
Date: 05/06/12 15:56
Chapter: 10. Preparing Halloween

Sorry i haven't comented in awhile but this is totally wicked this story is awesome
lily ragen

Reviewer: cuna molfoy
Date: 05/06/12 12:13
Chapter: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished

Holy shiz that was sweet

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 03/14/12 13:25
Chapter: 30. Malfoy Manor

Nicee, cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Ami RIvers
Date: 02/28/12 17:08
Chapter: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished

i LOVE this story i check everyday for the next chapter

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 02/08/12 4:20
Chapter: 17. The Weasley lineage

that battle part was very intresting i know this sounds crazy but did u not cry just a little while writing that

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 02/04/12 5:41
Chapter: 15. Christmas secrets

i new ginny was pregnant

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 02/04/12 5:13
Chapter: 14. Escalating tensions and subsequent blows

well draco sure showed cyrus

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 01/30/12 2:44
Chapter: 12. Treading on dangerous grounds

It sounds like ginerva is pregant

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 01/27/12 23:15
Chapter: 9. Of ice and Wood

when is ginny gonna tell draco who she really is ???????

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 01/26/12 23:11
Chapter: 6. Until death do us part

the hermione part didint make sense

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 01/26/12 23:10
Chapter: 6. Until death do us part

the hermione part didint make sense

Reviewer: deathlyhallowsgirl
Date: 01/26/12 23:10
Chapter: 6. Until death do us part

the hermione part didint make sense

Reviewer: Ami RIvers
Date: 01/20/12 20:32
Chapter: 30. Malfoy Manor

Good chapter! ready for the next one!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 01/17/12 18:57
Chapter: 30. Malfoy Manor

Very good!

Reviewer: Hermione-who-loves-Draco
Date: 01/17/12 12:29
Chapter: 8. Kindling suspicion

Hey Ogygiasylph, the story has been very intriguing and interesting so far. But, the mention of Dhaka completely won my heart. I'm from there, you see.

Very well written. :)

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 12/28/11 23:31
Chapter: 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort

Finally you update! I had feared you had forgotten about us. Keep Writing!

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