*claps* Are you in the poetry club on the fourms? If not, you really should join. You really have a knack for poetry.
This was really wonderful. You know, I don't think I've read anything by you that I didn't enjoy. Keep up the good work, Anna.
Author's Response: Aw, Elle, thanks so much. I'm not a member of the poetry club, actually. . .I write poems very spontaneously (aka, when I have very bad writer's block and for some reason poems are the only thing that will come out of my fingers), and am otherwise garbage at it. But I'll think about it. :) Thank you for the nice review, again. *huggles*
Very interesting; you've described everything in a very real and powerful way. It reminds me of Selena, showing the same feelings of regret and weakness that she showed after she heard the news about Snape.
Author's Response: Ah, yes, Selena -- this does sound similar, doesn't it? :) Thanks for the review!
This is so powerful. You really understand how helpless the speaker feels. Really good job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
So, this is about someone in love with a Death Eater? Nice idea, and very well written. Had anyone specially in mind when wrting this? Just asking cuz I usually do, even though the poem doesn't reveal who it is.
So like I said, nicely written, and the format is great for the poem. Great job. ^_~
Author's Response: No, I didn't really write this with anyone particular in mind. I had several people in my mind *vaguely*, but I'll keep them to myself. ;)
And it doesn't have to be about someone who was in love with a Death Eater. Perhaps it is a sister, or a nephew, or a friend. It's totally open to your interpretation. :D Thanks for the nice review!
I liked it, and it was wonderfully written. I liked how you had to words arranged in such an uncommon shape! Very cool. You've got a strong talent for poetry--go publish a book!
Great job,
Cutiepoet
Author's Response: Lol, I really hope to publish a book someday, but I doubt it will be a book of poetry. :) Thanks for the kind words though, and for leaving a review!
I liked it, and it was wonderfully written. I liked how you had to words arranged in such an uncommon shape! Very cool. You've got a strong talent for poetry--go publish a book!
Great job,
Cutiepoet
Author's Response: Double, double, toil and trouble... :)
Very good poem, i like the rhythm, keep writing, and good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
