Reviews For FourFold
Reviewer: luinrina
Date: 04/07/08 1:23
Chapter: Snivellus

Finally the story is finished! Hurray!! It’s great how you described Sirius‘ reaction when Snape rubbed it in that the little brother had helped kicking the older sibling out of the house.

But somehow I felt disappointed. I had hoped, after having read the first three chapters, that the fourth would be about the Ministry Hearing of Sirius. Yet you never mentioned whether he got free and was allowed back at Hogwarts. All who know the Harry Potter books know that he did go back, but I somehow missed it in your story after the first chapters were centred about this topic.

Yet all in all I think you did a great job.

Reviewer: cowzrfreaky123
Date: 04/03/08 15:00
Chapter: Snivellus

The plittle Beginning note thingee said that this was a four- chapter series. Does that mean this is the last chapter? It doesn't seem finished. Excellent Job. I lked it a lot.

Author's Response: Yep this is the end I'm afraid :( But if you want more on their story, read Fidelity :) I'll start updating Fidelity again in the winter

Author's Response: Yep this is the end I'm afraid :( But if you want more on their story, read Fidelity :) I'll start updating Fidelity again in the winter

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 04/02/08 15:41
Chapter: Snivellus

Wow... I'm crying. That was- really something. Congratulations! *hands out virtual cookies*

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: fire_whisky_padfoot
Date: 11/02/07 0:54
Chapter: The Rising Moon

poor moony its not like he can elp it ye know!

Author's Response: i know :( everybody love Moony :) thanks for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: i know :( everybody love Moony :) thanks for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: i know :( everybody love Moony :) thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fire_whisky_padfoot
Date: 11/02/07 0:48
Chapter: Official Letters

poor pads he must win!
please pads win!

Author's Response: muahahahaha only I, supreme ruler of the world - ahem, rather supreme ruler of Fourfold - know his fate.... :P

Reviewer: fire_whisky_padfoot
Date: 11/02/07 0:44
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

thats not fair pads your family are just ********!!!!!!
good story great portrayal of the black family!

Author's Response: :D thankyou! glad you like it :)

Reviewer: leahsm2
Date: 10/01/07 15:00
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

I felt your characters were very well done and felt like canon. I particularly liked the part where Sirius gets the letter from the ministry about apparating. I thought is was funny that he didn't mention to James that he ended up in the middle of a muggle street, before he was able to find Jame's house, until he had too!

The only problem with apparating into someone's home is that it would be sort of rude, and I can't imagine a wizard household not having anti-apparation shields in place.

I also thought you captured Remus' sensitive nature, when he didn't reply to Sirius' letters and Sirius' embarassment about his family's rigid world views, when he realized why Remus hadn't sent him any replies.

Author's Response: Thankyou!!! thanks for you specific comments - really helps me improve on other fics too, knowing what i can do well, and also it makes me grin for the rest of the day! :D lol. And yes, my theory with the apparating is that Sirius has needed to come to their place so often Jame's parents made a loop-hole for him - though I cut out the part that explained that...maybe i shouldn't have! lol. If i write more, I'll explain it. Thanks again for you lovely review! :) :)

Reviewer: luinrina
Date: 09/17/07 4:30
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

Please continue writing - your story is so gripping, absolutely fantastic. I'm curious how it goes on and how the Hearing will end for Sirius. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I originally had that as the end!! lol, but so many people have PMed me asking for more, and this is the second review asking for more that i might do another few chapters.... watch this space! :P thanks :)

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 09/14/07 7:28
Chapter: The Rising Moon

Oh no! Update quickly! How can this story be only four chapters? It looks like its just beginning to get juicy. :) I love your writing, great job!

Author's Response: I only had it as a four-chapter fic! I might write more later - when I've finished Fidelity though :) I'm so pleased you like it enough to want more! thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 09/13/07 15:30
Chapter: The Rising Moon

Realllly nice chapter, once again :]

I'm glad you updated; I was wondering what happened to this story =P. But anyway, I again love the in-character ness of this chapter. I've never read a story with Remus' parents, so this was pretty interesting. The way you describe it makes me feel so bad for him *Sigh* poor Remus. But, again it was all very incharacter and realistic so major kudos :] and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: :D thanks! Ooh i keep getting such lovely comments about my characterisation :D thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 09/04/07 6:59
Chapter: Official Letters

I love this chapter! Its great! *hugs* I think that you've written James and Sirius fantastically! Seven letters ... poor Padfoot!

Author's Response: Thanks sugar! :) Love you loads, thanks for reviewing! final chapter up soon....

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 07/05/07 8:43
Chapter: Official Letters

I love this story! Definitely keep writing! I love how you portray them so in-character, and it's very realistic. I love the title of the story. I love your style. and it's very creative =]

Author's Response: thankyou! *grins* that's so nice of you! I'm pleased they all seem in-character, and thankyou for your complements! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: ATTENTION PLEASE!!! I'm so sorry I haven't finished this story! I thought I had so I moved on to Fidelity :S I've written it all, and my lovely Ell (WrackspurtGirl) has proof-read it and I though I'd submitted it all - but blatantly not! Sorry guys! I've got two chapters in the queue, one for Fidelity, one for a new one-shot called If You Care, but once those are through I'll post the last two of FourFold. Sorry! Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry!! If I do anything like this in future feel free to bombard me with emails asking where the next chapter is, okay? Sorry guys! *hugs you all*

Reviewer: siriusly_blackxx
Date: 06/30/07 23:54
Chapter: Official Letters

ohh interesting story! nobody ever really writes about what happened when Sirius ran away. this is well writen too!

Author's Response: Wow, is that Laura? Thankyou! *hugs* Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 06/15/07 12:57
Chapter: Official Letters

I love this chapter its absolutely fantastic! Chapter four is absolutely fantastic as well but i suppose all you other people will just have to wait for a while (a very long while) to be able to read that!

Now the rant begins . . .

Ok i have read the paperback copy of fidelity, have chap1 on my wall and i have it signed by the author. FOrgive me for being a little stuck-up or arrongent but im in schock ive just read chapter 18 and i can promise you that it is absolutely fantastic! I was trying to review it but it wouldnt work so hey - i thought id leave a review here instead
love you fic **hugs**

sorry to everyone else i promise that im not usually this aragent and horrible, bitchy and stuck-up but i really am in shock!!!! I could try and convince you that im usually quite qiet but somehow i doubt you would believe me!

Your fic is FANTASTIC!


Author's Response: Heya Ell! This is kinda pointless us writing on here considering we're sitting in the same room, lol. But hey, tis fun, is it not? Wow my fic is up on your wall...wierd, lol. I feel like a real author now you've asked for my signature! Lol. this is so strange..... Ell is now reading chapter three of Fidelity - I'm shoving chapters at the poor girl in such a random order that i must be slowly driving her insane...... But thanks so much for reading it for me, Ell, you're great! **hugs**

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 05/21/07 4:43
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

Sooooooo good!
I'm very proud of you!I never realized this was only your second story. You seemed extremely experienced in your writing.
Major props!

Author's Response: Bewitcher_SR - my Beta, everyone :D Thanks! You did a great job Beta-ing this. Thanks so much *hugs* glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: WrackspurtGirl
Date: 05/17/07 12:22
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

Wow! Thanks for mentioning me *hugs back*. This fic has always been fantstic but everytime i read it it gets better. I love all the little changes you've made since the begining and its just fantastic! (and there were hugs)! Thanks again for the mention and your work really is in OWL terms Outstanding!

Author's Response: aw, wow thanks hun! *hugs* yeah, we've gotta include hugs everywhere. Thanks for reading this for me all those weeks (or probably months now, lol) ago. Thankyou! Love you Val *hugs*

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 05/14/07 20:38
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

This story is very good. You're such an excellent writer!

Once again, you portray these emotions extremely well. I really like how you characterized Sirius in this story, and in 'Memories of a Traitor'. James' personality was also spot on.

Keep writing! You're very wonderful!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! *hugs* you rock. I'm glads you apporve of my characterisation! Thanks for reading, and for your awesome banners :)

Reviewer: Addictive passion
Date: 05/14/07 13:14
Chapter: Padfoot and Prongs

Oooh I like it. Well done hunny =] xxx

Author's Response: Thanks, babe :) three more chapters to come of FourFold yet. *hugs*

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