I really thought your "Legalitus Potion" was clever!
"If it is mixed with moonstone it causes someone to feel deeply disloyal to his or her employer."
I also liked the part where you have to add the phoenix feathers to strengthen Pettigrew's loyalty to Dumbledore, and the fact that Hermione is so smitten with Snape that he has to remind her of this ingredient was also good.
The next day, when she comes back and denies her feelings for him, and he reminds her of his skills in Leglimens was fun. And it was touching that he returned her feelings.
I also enjoyed the part where Voldemort tells Snape to bring him Potter by faking an accident in potions, because Potter's
ineptitude has reached even the Dark Lord.
I also thought the last chapter so far was fun when they are having their usual, hostile relationship, but heigthened by their growing feelings for each other. When she is the only one who could figure out the actual name "Brinythistle" would be labelled under, and was thus the only one to do her homework was clever, as was the medi-wizardry use to counteract petrifying. The only thing I didn't like about that chapter was the Snape and Hermione name calling went a little over the top.
ok, so I've already read all of it once before and it's still not updated!
Come on, update soon or I might explode - or cry:'(!!!!!!
xx mrs_weasley xx
yes...I have already read it, but I don't know if I finished it!
I still love it!
I'[m confused...I think I've read this already (lquite a while ago)...but I can't remember if I have or not...
Sorry, you didn't need to know that!:P
Great story so far!
omg pleeease dont take 2 long!!!!!!!!
its been so long. ive read and reread this and hope than one day i can see chapter 5! please update please!
woo! love it!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol i love it please carry on please please please
loving it lol
am lovin the story cant wait till chapter 5
ARGggggggg... what a place to leave off! You evil, vile, OH.... person!
Well... as you may have guessed, I thouroughly enjoyed this little piece of sexy Snape fiction... and especially loved the wee argument between Hermoine and Snape after she insults him in front of the class... *chuckle* "You didn't mind my teeth when you had your tongue down my throat." I can SEE Hermoine saying that... I can... great detail about Snape's past... very believable... and touching Snape can open up as much as he did... I will haunt you if you do not finish this story!
Great fic. Poor Severus feeling that he can't ever have someone who will love him.
Hermoine will have to be strong, he isn't going to be easy on her.
I can't wait to read more of this
Please update soon
Brilliant!!Keep up the good work!!
Ok, you got me. I really want to hear what happens next. It has been so long since you updated. Don't you feel like you want to update some more. Aren't you feeling like writing right now. Keep your eye on the pocket watch as it swings back and forth and back and forth.......
no offence, but this is is queer.
I'm enjoying this so far.... do please update and make the fellow potterheads hapy :)
Hi. I love this story. are there more chapters coming???
Amazing, please update soon! Great story!
I double darkness falls' request!
That was a great chapter. I was a bit surprised by the kisss. *goes to read next chapter*