Reviews For Isolation
Reviewer: tar
Date: 11/18/07 19:31
Chapter: The Window

great story but i think it might be better if you switch the order of the chapters and explain how the wolf got out of the house befor you explain the attack great writting though exspecially for your first fic

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually did have the werewolf getting out of the house before attacking Rosmerta. I think you just viewed the chapters in the wrong order.

Reviewer: wolverine_rox
Date: 10/06/07 10:25
Chapter: The Window

wow! this is an amazing story 4 your first fic keep writing. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: malteselover
Date: 09/03/07 7:18
Chapter: The Attack

I loved your fanfic! It was so awesome. You described Lupin's transformation really well, and i liked the ending.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried the ending was kind of anticlimactic, so I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Ava_7
Date: 08/23/07 9:09
Chapter: The Attack

Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Ava_7
Date: 08/23/07 9:07
Chapter: The Window

Well Done!!!! Wonderful First Chapter!!!

Reviewer: gatomuggle
Date: 08/21/07 6:18
Chapter: The Attack

Good job. Very descriptive, it allows me to picture what is happening in my mind very easily. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry, I think "The Attack" is going to be the last chapter. I'd like to continue "Isolation," but I just can't think of anything to put i a third chapter that would still follow the original plot.

Reviewer: gatomuggle
Date: 08/21/07 6:17
Chapter: The Attack

Good job. Very descriptive, it allows me to picture what is happening in my mind very easily. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 05/13/07 22:11
Chapter: The Window

That was one of the best cliffhangers ever. I really like this story; it's very descriptive. You show the process of Remus going into werewolf very nicely. I especially like how you show the changes in mind and thought. How you go from sensible human to savage werewolf. It all fits together well. Keep it up.

Author's Response: thanks! the next chapter should be coming soon, keep a lookout for it!

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