Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 11/28/11 21:45
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Amazing! I really loved this story. You never see Remus in love until that short time when he's with Tonks (Bless her). I really liked the tasks and the story line and everything. My only complaint would be that I was hoping there would be something huge between James and Lily. I saw you had a sequel, but it's not completed. PLEASE FINISH IT!!!! I know it's been YEARS, but I'd love to see what happens during Ballet. Anyways, this was an absolutely lovely story. :)

Reviewer: qqquill_rita
Date: 03/06/08 20:18
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

i dont really think of this as a humor story, but more of a Remus/OC romance story. cute, i like it

Author's Response: It's part of a series, and in the next one Sirius gets a girl. The two stories fit together in that there's the dance plot line, and there's a romantic plot line. Anyway, I may be rewriting this story sometime soon, so there may be a couple changes. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: It's part of a series, and in the next one Sirius gets a girl. The two stories fit together in that there's the dance plot line, and there's a romantic plot line. Anyway, I may be rewriting this story sometime soon, so there may be a couple changes. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: huffpuff94
Date: 02/04/08 14:37
Chapter: The Notice on the Board

Awww Remus is so cute

Author's Response: Okay, I accidentally replied to this with a review, so I think if you look for a review by I_LUV_MOONY, you'll find your reply. Sorry about that!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/29/08 22:02
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Lluvia love, I hope you don't mind but I've just reread the whole story and would like to leave a better review...about Remus.:D

His characterizaton was waesome. His shyness, a little uncertainty, sense of humour, well lets just say you captured him very well.

Looks like you know your man like the back of your hand:)=Sammy

Author's Response: I didn't think I did that well with him. Gosh, thanks!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 10/27/07 16:27
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

This is a really cute story! It had some clever stuff too; PlayWizard cracked me up. I think I'll read the sequel now. Great story!

Author's Response: I had lots of fun coming up with the PlayWizard scene. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 10/12/07 20:19
Chapter: Muggle Studies

Very cute story! I like the idea of having dance classes for Muggle studies because it keeps it out of the "never going to happen realm"

LOL we girls DO have it harder though... We're in high heels AND we have to dance BACKWARD! At my school, dance lessons are unfortunately mandatory, but I did have fun when we got to learn the Latin dances so it's nice seeing them put to good use in an excellent story such as this one! Good job!

Author's Response: I would've loved having dance mandatory at my school! Dance is my main sport, so I would've aced anything my stupid P.E. threw at me. LOL Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 09/22/07 9:28
Chapter: The Notice on the Board

hehe this is very good so far i like the part about remus going pale when james said that he mighit have to kill him, it's just like but I like living


Author's Response: I hoped I had captured the Marauders. Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: Solemnly Swear
Date: 09/03/07 2:58
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

“I’m going to sit on James’ couch and spend my parents’ fortune while laughing maniacally,” said Sirius.

I think I lost a lung on that. This was kind of creepy, though:

The Marauders had just gotten back to the common room after a hard day of learning and pranking (one involving Remus and Gwen in the Room of Requirement). They were about to go up to their dormitories when they saw that a notice had been tacked up on the bulletin board. It was a crisp white paper with the words written in green to make sure everyone passing saw it.

Author's Response: No one's commented on that quote yet. I cracked up laughing while I was writing it! I was going for a repetitive ending. I set myself up perfectly for a sequel! Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: voldy178
Date: 08/17/07 4:47
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Awww... so sweet. This is really good. Please keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Double post.

Reviewer: voldy178
Date: 08/17/07 4:47
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Awww... so sweet! This is really nice, please keep writing! :)

Author's Response: I'll definitely do that! Why don't you go check out the sequel?

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/02/07 0:41
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Aww that really was seweeet. I loved the challanges Remus and Gwen had to face cuz it was a lot like what you go through in life and you can't get anywhere without trust, hope and...pixie dust( sorry, Peter Pan reference )

Anyway, great job with the fic. I must admit I'm looking forwards to reading more from you.=Sammy

P.S.Have you read Deathly Hallows yet. Pity what happened to Remus huh?

Author's Response: That's what I was going for with the challenges. The first chapter of the sequel is posted. And you are awfully lucky that I've read Deathly Hallows, cuz otherwise I'd be burning with curiousity at what happened to Remus. But yes I have read it, and yes, it is a pity.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/01/07 23:55
Chapter: Muggle Studies

Haha, thanks for the class, unfortunately we learned the tango the hard way in Phys Ed. Too bad Lily didn't agree to go with James but I can't be too mad as the way she refused was really funny.=Sammy

Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. It helped that I learned the tango. You are a die-hard James/Lily shipper, aren't you? :D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/01/07 22:58
Chapter: The Preparations

I really hope the kiss works out. Can't wait for class and James making a fool of himself.=Sammy

Author's Response: You'd be surprised...:D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/01/07 10:14
Chapter: A Sickening Discovery

Aww, poor Remus. He really doesn't deserve that.* tacklehugs Remus *=Sammy

Author's Response: Hey! I'm the only one allowed to tacklehug Remus! lol No one deserves that, but unfortunately someone has to deal with it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/01/07 9:23
Chapter: The First Date (sort of)

Oh come on, kiss allready. By the way, still waiting for the dancin

Author's Response: Yeah, some people have said that the story drags a bit, but the dancing's coming. And they will kiss. :D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/01/07 8:23
Chapter: The Fight at Midnight

Anither great chappie but wheres Lily and James' ballroom dancing?=Sammy

Author's Response: This story isn't focused on James and Lily, but don't worry, they dance. The ballroom dancing is in a later chapter. I have to explain the romance plot line of the story, too. Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 07/31/07 10:30
Chapter: The Notice on the Board

OOH, good one. You managed to make the Marouders just as funny as I imagined them to be.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks! I do hope I've done them justice. :D

Reviewer: DarkJoker
Date: 07/26/07 14:46
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Best ending I've ever seen so far...thanks for this beautiful story.

DJ

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I hope the sequel can live up to this. :D

Reviewer: Eye of the Snake
Date: 07/17/07 22:54
Chapter: The Room of Requirement

Ha ha. Love the ending.

Author's Response: Thanks. Stick around for the sequel. :D

Reviewer: lycanthropic lover
Date: 07/10/07 21:18
Chapter: The Notice on the Board

Hey this is lycanthropic lover hear, your story is awesome, I think that you make the characters seem alive and stay close to how J.K. Rowling describes them. Your story is very believable, not far fetched like some stories are, and it sucked me in, you are an amazing writer!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you think it's believable. *wink* :D

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