I absolutely adored this - it's going in favourites!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks :).
EEeee, Iloved it! Twas adorable
Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks, Sara :). Sorry the comment got messed up!
I really like your story! It is very believable, and I love how you ended it with "he's got your eyes." It seems to be a running theme in the books, and is very appropriate here!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, the last line was probably one of my favorites to write... I was so proud of myself when I came up with it :p.
This was absolutely amazing! It was funny, and touching, and it showed a bit of each in-character character. Great job!
It's going on my favorites.
Author's Response: Absolutely amazing, you say? Well thank you! I'm flattered :).
Oh, I loved it! It was a really sweet fiction. It was filled with a lot of tender moments that made me smile. Good job! You are to be very much applauded! Congrats!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I made you smile :).
It's beautiful and simple. I like especially the last line, the way it sets up to everyone saying that to him in JK's books. You write very well, this was a pleasure to read.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Yeah, I kind of liked the way the ending came out, too :).
This is so cool! I love how you portray everything! It's awesome Allie! All of the characters are very much in character and I love the ending. Are you going write anymore? Like a sequel to this or something? I love your writing style! Amazing job! *huggles* ~MJ
Author's Response: Thanks, MJ! I know I'm going to write more, but I'm not sure about a sequel to this. Maybe... ;).
Very nice. This flowed very naturally to me, even though this isn't the sort of thing I normally read.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it, then :).
Very nice story! I know someone who is going to be very happy with it :)
So, when can we expect an original character out of you? I'll be waiting!
Cheers,
~H
Author's Response: Thanks! As far as an OC goes, I'm not sure. Maybe soon... it all depends on whether or not I have enough time to flesh out an entire new character. My teachers are actually starting to give me work now because it's getting close to the end of the year, so I might be busy with that. We'll see :).
This was too adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you!
its beautifuly writen...
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
By Merlin this is awesome!!!! I am so proud Violet... Way to start out! The Characterization is dead on for all three, especially Sirius! (I bet Lyss loved it!!) Anywho, great job. I look forward to story #2 and beyond! :o)
Author's Response: Thanks! It was a fun piece to write for my first one; Sirius is always fun (although I'm not completely obsessed with him like other people we know :P). I'll talk to you very soon :).
Bring on the next chapter ASAP
Author's Response: Actually it's a one-shot, so that's it for the story. It's nice to know that you enjoyed it, though!
OMG I love your story! That is so sweet! Ahhh... little baby Harry! : )
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, I loved writing baby Harry :).
Good story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
