Reviews For Killer Instincts
Reviewer: eva365
Date: 10/25/07 21:17
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

i love it when ate you writing more?

Author's Response: My exam just finished and Diwali is coming. So, I must get a little free time, now. Thanks for reviwing! :)

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 10/25/07 20:13
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

I just posted a stooooory! It's my first one!

BUT SIRIUSLY YOU ROCK.... I HATE CLIFFIES! MUST READ MORE!!!!!

Author's Response: Hmmmm *grins*. There are gonna be many cliffies in this story. So... brace up!

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 10/25/07 18:46
Chapter: A Very Special Birthday

AWWWW... Harry seems so in love with Parvati, LOVE STORY!!!!! NEED READ MORE!!!!

Author's Response: And again...

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 10/25/07 18:46
Chapter: A Very Special Birthday

AWWWW... Harry seems so in love with Parvati, LOVE THE STORY!!!!! NEED READ MORE!!!!

Author's Response: Is he? Everyone loves Parvati, no? Harry too!

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 10/25/07 18:25
Chapter: The New Case

I DON'T WANT TO REVEIW BECAUSE I WANT TO READ MORE!!!! LOVE THE STORY!!!!!

Author's Response: Uh oh, that's dangerous. Reviwing is a good habit. But thanks!

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 10/25/07 17:54
Chapter: Prologue

OMG I THOUGHT HARRY WAS GETTING MARRIED TO GINNY!!!!
The indian cloths made me wonder, and I thought the black hair was a typo. I can't say to write more because there is more, well I GOT TO READ!!

Author's Response: Hmmm, black hair... typo... wow! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 10/23/07 19:36
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

awww.... Ron is so nice!

Author's Response: Yep, Ron is really nice! I love him sooo much! Oooh, I'm jealous of Hermione! :D

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 10/23/07 18:09
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

Hmmm, this story is quite interesting. Just a question though, how do you pronounce "Naina"? I pronouce it how my people (the Welsh) would, as "Nine-a" (yes, it does sound like "Nana" I know. Nain is what most Welsh people call their grannies). I'd just like to know.

Also, your English is very...formal and cold-sounding. There are such things as contractions, which would loosen your style up quite a bit and probably give it some more feeling.

Cheers,
Crows

Author's Response: Naina.. well, 'Nain' is pronounced in a way similar to 'Dan'. It is really difficult to get people to pronounce these correctly because of the difference in accent. The way I pronounce Dan could not be different, for one thing. My accent is too Indian because I speak a lot of Hindi sometimes. And this may sound funny, but I don't know much of English slang. Again, Hindi is what I have to speak, most of the times. I'll try to make it sound better, though! Thanks for your thoughtful comments! :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/23/07 17:16
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

update soon!

Author's Response: I'll definitely update it ASAP. Don't keep too many expectations, though! :D

Reviewer: magical_fortress
Date: 10/23/07 6:48
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

plz hurry up!!! evn i know hindi...lolz...bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad! gud wan!

Author's Response: Thanks! *'bows*

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 10/23/07 6:26
Chapter: Prologue

i am gonna make a very, very, very, very bizarre, dumb, nightmarish guess as to who the person who called parvati is... erm... yeah... it's Ginny,....
I know it's impossible. I'm telling you, I am a bit cracked!

Author's Response: Aha, chor ki daadi mein tinka! But Ginny? Why? I... I dunno! Is it not Irene? Or Romilda? Or... um... Rebecca? Why Ginny? No, don't worry, I not a bit cracked, I'm fully cracked. So you have company ^_^

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 10/22/07 21:25
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

Coolio. An update. Write more and post it. Pretty intruiging plot. I like very much. Wow. Randomness.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I like random people! :)

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 10/22/07 20:15
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

I have missed seeing your story thinks for the update...its a great mystery!

Author's Response: It'll take time, because I'm REALLY busy. We have ranks from my city and all with these exams I'm giving, and I have to maintain a good position, right? So, I'll update ASAP. Definitely.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 10/22/07 19:22
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

great! whats a creche?

Author's Response: Oh, I didn't know that creches are not well known! Well, a creche is a place where many kids are left at a time, and are taken care by what we may call as prefessional baby sitters. They're like play schools. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: e_a_k
Date: 09/08/07 22:47
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

Well. I think I get my wish. I think that the fan of Harry called Parvati.

Author's Response: Hmm... *checks notes*. I dunno, I don't want to grant your wish... but you really can't say what might happen. No one can! And Harry's fan? That's me! Okay, seriously, you can't even confirm this because I'm a twisted person, you know.

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/04/07 17:20
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

wow amazing very thought provoking...god i hate parvati i hated her even in goblet of fire oh well ig euss she was just always on my bad side

Author's Response: Parvati? She's a nice character! Oh, maybe I'm prejudiced because she's a fellow Indian, but I think Parvati is not bad. If she's a Gryffindor, she ought to be noble! Just being giggly and gossipy does not make a person bad. But if you hate her, you'll love her in this story. I promise. And thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: soccergirl68
Date: 08/27/07 20:06
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

awesome so far! i can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh, I'll update as soon as chap 5 is completed and corrected!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 08/26/07 14:18
Chapter: Prologue

this is a secnd review i am posting here...

i really, REALLY like ur story. Being Indian, it kind of gives me a sense of happiness to see our culture reflected in something that is read by thousands all over the world. Great job. Our culture is so rich it needs to be advertised everywhere... and this was a nice way...
(please forgive me for talking utter rubbish... i just wanted t talk to someone of my country on mugglenet, and found reviews a good excuse) :-)

Author's Response: Yes! Exactly! I hate to think that so many people all over the world consider our country as a downtrodden one. It's time for people to notice this beautiful country with such a diverse, rich cultural heritage and appreciate the greatness of it. I hope this small step works... Thank you :)

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 08/24/07 21:31
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

ehh.... awesome story, but i think durin the case harry and ginny tlk alone and harry loses his restraint and like tat affair starts. I ALSO THOUGHT THE SERIAL KILLER WOULD BE ROMILDA! tho im thinkin it might be irene now. but u should check the names cuz sometimes u write padma instead of parvati. still great story. keep updating.

Author's Response: And... again :)

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 08/24/07 21:30
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

ehh.... awesome story, but i think durin the case harry and ginny tlk alone and harry loses his restraint and like tat affair starts. I ALSO THOUGHT THE SERIAL KILLER WOULD BE ROMILDA! tho im thinkin it might be irene now. but u should check the names cuz sometimes u write padma instead of parvati. still great story. keep updating.

Author's Response: Uh, Romilda??? Why? Does she seem bad? And Parvati and Padma do not seem to be mixed up. Did you find any error in it? May I know what it is? Thanks for the review, anyway!

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