Reviews For Killer Instincts
Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 09/26/08 12:20
Chapter: Prologue

That was a great story... fr the first time im reading someone who wrote a fanfiction that was rfelated to indian culture:D and im happy about that!! The story is really nice and I cant stop reading.... I just hope Harry makes the right move in the end... :P I like the way u put in hindi words ... but i dun speak hindi much... but i id understand the meaning to most of it... hope you will update soon!! Cant wait for the following chapter..!!!

Author's Response: I'll update asap... I have a lot to do, out here. But chapter 7 is almost done! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 09/20/08 21:04
Chapter: Prologue

Woah!Harry and Parvati!That's something I didn't see coming as this was labeled Harry/Ginny,Ron/Hermione.Even though I knew Harry was not going to be married to Ginny,I thought it would be Luna or Cho!
Very good story so far!
*heads for next chapter with enthusiasm*
~Southern belles follow the Son~

Author's Response: Thank you! Luna, Cho... too common. It would have been boring. Harry/Parvati is an interesting pair to work on. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 7:04
Chapter: Interrogation

omg!!!!!! and yet another cliffy. What happened? Is Parvati dead?!?!?!? Was it ginny. Ahhh.
Your an amazing writer you know. Please continue and update soon! I can;t wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: :) Parvati? Ginny? Harry? You'll know! I'll update asap, but it will take time!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 6:54
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

Oooh this is another cliffy isn't it. I think that in this chapter, we really get to see more of Hermione's and Ron's relationship and how they might even be drifting apart. I still feel really bad for Ginny though. She still really loves harry doesnt she. And harry loves her back. And then I still feel bad for Parvati. And the part about the serial killings is really interesting! This story is Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Your reviews have seriously made my day!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 3:14
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

ooohhh cliffy!!!! This story is really marvelous! I really love all the suspense, romance and a bit of humor you put in this story! Your an amazing writer and I really love your style of writing. I really don't like Irene! She is so mean. But maybe she is beyond mean. Is she the killer?!?!?!?!?! Well you probably won't tell me so i will just read on :p

Author's Response: Irene is mine! Hahahahahahaha!!! You'll get to see quirkier characters, don't worry *points at Daisy*. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 2:57
Chapter: A Very Special Birthday

Wow, this chapter is really powerful! i really liked the bewda part. It was really funny. I wonder if harry really doesn't love Parvati and just respects her. because sometimes it seems like he does love her!
I must read on!

Author's Response: Harry definitely loves Parvati. *grins* It's just a sort of... phase for him. It's a trauma. Thank you!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 2:31
Chapter: The New Case

This chapter is really great! For a moment there, in the beginning of the chapter, i thought that Ginny had stopped loving Harry. She was a really great actor. i think it's pretty sad to see Ginny longing for Harry and Harry longing for Ginny. I feel bad for Parvati though. She seems really nice now that she has grown up. And I can't wait to read more about the serial killer who is a fan of Harry's. I think I might know who it might be. I'm probably wrong though. I shall read on now!

Author's Response: The killer... yes. I promise, with all my heart to keep making you guess throughout this story! *wink*

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/25/08 2:12
Chapter: Prologue

wow, i think you really described the wedding beautifully! I can't wait to read on!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: hpfanatic112794
Date: 08/15/08 17:47
Chapter: Prologue

This is probably one of the best h/g and r/h stories that i have ever read. Although i think you talk about the indian culture a bit too much. That is where i start to get bored. but i think i know who is behind all of the killings!!!!! when r u gonna update again? i cant wait to see what happens!!!

Author's Response: Ooh, do you know, then? Are you sure? *grins and then laughs loudly* Okay... yeah, the Indian culture. This is what happens when the author is too patriotic. But there's not much ahead, I asure you! Thank you for your compliment, though! I'm so happy today! Update... it will take time, I'm afraid. I'm compressed out here...

Reviewer: silamo
Date: 08/14/08 11:29
Chapter: Prologue

very nicely written love the story when do u think u can update it?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so busy now... I'll try to update ASAP. Promise!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so busy now... I'll try to update ASAP. Promise!

Reviewer: Mrs Edward Cullen
Date: 07/08/08 9:09
Chapter: Interrogation

Ahhh! Hurry and Update im going mad!

Author's Response: I'm still doing chapter 6. *Cackles with laughter*. You're gonna have to face situations that are worse, dearie! :)

Reviewer: hp_7_rocks
Date: 05/21/08 19:04
Chapter: Interrogation

please uodate!!!!im dying to know what happens next!!!

Author's Response: Definitely. Let me just get some more time... :)

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 05/12/08 9:27
Chapter: Prologue

I'll admit that when I first started reading this story, I thought, "Why is Harry married to Parvati?" But, I think you do a great job of answering that question in the other chapters. Harry definitely seems the type to be so good as to marry a woman he wanted to protect, even if he didn't love her as much as she loved him. Anyway, I'm glad you have a twist like that because it makes it so much more interesting when Harry encounters Ginny again. :) Oh, and I love the story line of Ron and Hermione! I do think Ron's being kind of a jerk to Hermione though. Hope they work things out. But, back to the point, the end of this last chapter certainly surprised me! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: :) Thank you for the really constructive review! I'm so glad that you like the story! Thank you so much, once again :)

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 14:31
Chapter: Interrogation

ohhh... such a big cliffie, I do hope Harry, Ginny and Parvati are alright.

Author's Response: Muahahahaha! BIG cliffie, aint it? Enjoy! Yaaa!

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 14:19
Chapter: Rebecca Palmer

Ahhh. Looks like Irene is the murderer now... I have a hunch she wasn't talking to herself though...

Author's Response: :) I really can't tell you whether you are right or wrong... but you'll definitely get more clues as the story proceeds... ;)

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 12:42
Chapter: Argument Over Breakfast

Bandar na jane adrak ka swaad...haha I love that...

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! :)

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 12:42
Chapter: A Very Special Birthday

I like the way, you made Parvati Occlumens, because for some very weird reason I always thought desi wives can read their husband's minds...And I love Kal Ho Na Ho too! The ending was quite sad though. And have a hunch that maybe...maybe, Ginny might be the serial killer... Maybe

Author's Response: They can, actually, because Indian wives are usually very loyal and attached to their husbands. Automatically, there's such a bond between the wife and the husband... :) And Ginny, the serial killer? Someone has guessed this already, but then I can't tell you anything, now! *zips mouth*

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 12:38
Chapter: The New Case

Poor Ginny...I don't blame her for thinking Parvati framed Harry.

Author's Response: Um... you're pitying Ginny? I'd pity Parvati... no, no... don't take me wrong, I'm just saying that I'd pity Parvati, because Ginny's not believing her ;)

Reviewer: Elusive Dreams
Date: 05/10/08 12:36
Chapter: Prologue

Really liked the way you used the Indian rituals of marriage and Christian. Very well written chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 04/30/08 10:18
Chapter: Interrogation

OMG!! how could you just leave me hangning like that!! ahh! update a-s-a-p!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'll update as soon as I can find time... :)

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