Reviews For Killer Instincts
Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 02/15/09 16:32
Chapter: Prologue

I owe you a couple of reviews, don't I? hahaha. Anyways . . . wow! To put it in a nutshell, I'm pretty shocked. Harry marries Parvati. This is going to be an interesting story. I'm excited to see what happens. Excellent writing. ~MJ

Author's Response: Thank you so much, MJ! I'm glad that you like the story! :)

Reviewer: HeRmiONe923
Date: 01/23/09 20:58
Chapter: Uh-Oh!

Oh no!! How sad! Please get Hermione and Ron back together, it breaks my heart to see them unhappy! :( *sobs*

Author's Response: Hey! Take two slices of cake and enjoy them, first! Now. Ron and Hermione... hmmm... *scratches her eye* well... I'll see what I can do about them... (muahahahahahahahahahahahahaha......!!!!!!)

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 01/19/09 16:45
Chapter: Uh-Oh!

Oh Goodness...Poor emotional Hermione! She's never going to give Ron the chance to explain *sigh* Is she pregnant or really just going crazy thinking Ron is having an affair?

Author's Response: Nah... she's definitely not pregnant... she's just... Ron's pissing her off, I suppose. Thanks for the review! Here's two slices of cake, one from Daisy and one from Chris! Enjoy them!!! :)

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 01/18/09 15:41
Chapter: Uh-Oh!

Well, Ron is definitely clueless when it comes to Hermione's feelings! I'd feel the same way if my husband was sitting with another woman on OUR ANNIVERSARY!!! Anyway, just had to say that. Really great chapter! I'm so intrigued by the whole Daisy, Chris, Rebecca saga! And when are we going to find out who the murderer is? That's been bothering me ever since I first started reading the story. Oh, I love the storyline between Harry and Ginny too! Can't wait for the next update!! :)

Author's Response: First have a cake! Chris likes people who review the story, and he wants to treat you to cake :). Ron's surely a prat, though. LOL. I love him so much... he should technically leave Hermione and come to me now (muahahahaha!!!). Daisy, Chris, Rebecca... *winks* pay attention to everything that I mention about them... maybe you'll find something somewhere... *evil little grin*. The murderer? Gosh, there is a long, long way to go! Just wait and watch... ;) You will get hints and clues on the way, but I will only unveil the wicked face of the murderer in one of the chapters that come towards the end. That'll be around the 25th-28th chapter, I guess. This is just the tenth chapter... LOL Thanks for reviewing! Update coming ASAP.

Reviewer: padfoot0302
Date: 01/05/09 17:12
Chapter: Prologue

I still love your story great really. anyway you sould read George's book I Me Mine I got it for Hannukah ( I'm 1/2 Jewish) and it is a really good book not as god as Harry Potter but good. You also might like John's book John Lennon In His Own Write which I also got and that one is plain hilarious.

Author's Response: Hey! It's really nice to hear those things about The Beatles, but could you also tell me more about the story? Don't take me wrong, you can still put in your snippets about The Beatles, but I think Mods could treat your reviews as spam O.O So, what exactly do you like in my story? I will check out on both your recommendations as soon as I find time. Thank you!

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 01/02/09 20:30
Chapter: Chris Stevens Confesses

Oh Chris is in love with Daisy...perhaps he turns out to be a stalker? Can't wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Chris... a stalker??? Maybe... ;) But Daisy has feelings for him too, remember? And Chris being in love with Daisy... hmmm... just read on, I'll say. LOL. Thanks!

Reviewer: padfoot0302
Date: 12/14/08 6:56
Chapter: Prologue

Did you know that George Harrison also knew how to play the sitar(an Indian insturment) and he played it on quite a few of the Beatles songs. To mention a few Norwigen Wood ( ThisBird Has Flown),Inner Light, and Within Without You.

Author's Response: Hmm, I knew that, but thanks, anyway! :)

Reviewer: padfoot0302
Date: 12/14/08 5:50
Chapter: Prologue

You're quite welcome for both reviews

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: padfoot0302
Date: 12/13/08 16:21
Chapter: Prologue

Oh by the way really good story just had to say that stuff about George Harrison. I got so caught up I frogot to tell you what a good story it's turning out to be.

Author's Response: Thank you! *squee!*

Reviewer: padfoot0302
Date: 12/13/08 16:18
Chapter: Prologue

Do you like The Beatles? If you do you might know this. In 1967 George Harrison begang to become interested in Hinduism. So in 1968 he dragged the other three off to India for a retreat. He was the only one who stayed for the whole retreat. George never ofically converted to Hinduism but he practiced it for the rest of his life. his request before dying was for him to be cremated and for his ashes to be thrown into the Ganges river in India.

Author's Response: Oh yes, I like The Beatles! Gosh, I never knew that...! Thanks for the info (and my 100th review!!!) Three smileys and a huggle for you! :) :) :) *huggle*

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 12/10/08 16:36
Chapter: Together Forever... or Maybe Not

Wow! I wonder who murdered Andrew? And how did he know he was going to die? Oh, and I love the love triangle between Harry, Ginny, and Parvati. That's getting very interesting! So is the story line between Ron and Hermione! This story has definitely intrigued me! Hope you update very soon! :)

Author's Response: Ahhh... firstly, thank you for the review! And Andrew... *grins* you'll know, just stay tuned! Oh, and Daisy knew that Andrew was probably gonna die too ;). The only other person who knew was... dun dun dun... shall I break the surprise? Maybe... ME!!! Haha, sorry for annoying you, if I did, but you'll know. Just keep reading (and reviewing)... thank you!

Reviewer: HeRmiONe923
Date: 11/11/08 15:59
Chapter: Chris Stevens

Wow, suspenseful. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've already put chapter 8 in the queue! :)

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/07/08 7:37
Chapter: Chris Stevens

For one awful moment I thought you'd murdered Chris Stevens and that won't do at all. *smiles* This is a very different story because you could take all the Potterverse stuff out of it and still have a cracking good read.I love the way you've melded two cultures. (Hermione doing yoga made me laugh!) It's an intriguing tale to say the least. I like detective fiction and am usually very good at sussing out who the killer is, but you've got me beat. I suspect EVERYONE! Brilliant. Update soon!

Author's Response: Carole! *squee* Well, I'm so glad that you like the story! Mixing cultures was fun, of course, and I had a ball with all the sari and yoga imagination too. Hehe, you suspect everyone? ;) The first suspect should be me, because I'm the one who's making the characters die, actually :). But yes, that means my primary aim has been achieved. Thank you! Update coming soon!

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 11/06/08 10:32
Chapter: Chris Stevens

Oh my goodness....The tangled web we weave *smiles* I have been sick and just now logged on to read this!!! I'm usually much better! I can't wait for more...You still have me on the edge of my seat! I will probably go back and re-read all of the chapters...

Author's Response: Woot! Thank you! And are you feeling better now? Get well soon!

Reviewer: hpfanatic112794
Date: 10/05/08 14:34
Chapter: Prologue

I love this story so much, but I am sorry to say this chapter was some what of a let down from the other chapters. I felt that it was gettin gno where fast. I was also suprised by the fact that Parvati did not notice how much Ginny was concerned for Harry more than anyone else. I still love this story and can not wait for an update. So please hurry!!!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry to prove to be a disappointment like this... I wasn't really fond of this chapter either, because it's too soft for the rest of the fic. The next chapter is amongst my favourites, though, and I hope you'll enjoy it. And Parvati doesn't really show it, but she has noticed this. She cannot really do anything about it, though :)

Reviewer: mrsbrandyc
Date: 10/05/08 14:08
Chapter: Murder at Bethnal Green

great! i am glad that everyone is ok!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 10/02/08 23:03
Chapter: Murder at Bethnal Green

Again, I am on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for more--but I will wait patiently *smiles*

Author's Response: *Heaves a sigh of relief* Okay, that's one reader who's ready to wait... thank you so much! I will definitely update asap. In fact, the next chapter is ready. I have PM'd my Beta to ask her whether she's free to take it. And after that, it shouldn't take more than 3 days for me to send the next chapter up, and if it gets validated at my first try, you'll have it here :)

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 10/01/08 16:46
Chapter: Murder at Bethnal Green

Yay! You updated! I was so scared for Parvati, and I feel so bad for Harry! I think you portrayed Ginny very well.
Cant wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 09/27/08 3:06
Chapter: Murder at Bethnal Green

yay, this story has been finally updated (you had me checking everyday, hehe) I really love this story. I am soo glad that nothing happened to parvati and Naina, nad Harry and Ginny. I am still quite sure that something was wrong with those breaks. And Irene is very suspicious. I love this story!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!!! Breaks? Oh, no, nothing was wrong! Ginny is a bad driver, that's all. Hehe ;). And if you want to keep a watch on my updates, then you can just add the story to your favourites. You'll get a mail everythime I update, then! ^_^

Reviewer: Maruder_20
Date: 09/26/08 14:39
Chapter: Murder at Bethnal Green

I loved it! I know hindi too and i know what you mean!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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