hey ur story is so awesome i think we need some more posts. no pressure like.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you like it. :) Don't worry, chapter 13 is in the queue and should be up any day now. I'm writing a lot this summer, so posts will be frequent (hopefully). :D Thanks for the review!
Oh, dear, what a mess...
Author's Response: I know, isn't it? It gets better in the end, though, don't worry. Thanks so much for the review!! :D
And that was awesome on Amelia's part. I loved that Hollie was punched.
:] Haha, I'm terrible for liking that part.
I can't wait for the ball chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you loved how Amelia punches Hollie, that's one of my favorite parts too. :) I'm planning on getting the next chapter to you soon, so keep an eye out for it! Thanks so much for the review!!!
i loved it!!!!!!!!
i can't wait until the next chapters!!!!!!!!!
i could never write a story that good!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay!!! I'm really glad you like it!!! Thanks so much for the review!!!! :D
ooh!! I love this. I really can't wait to see how it plays out. I love where it's going.
Author's Response: Thanks Anna!!! :D I'm really glad that you like it!!! I have some of the original version up on PM, you should check it out sometime. It's horribly written, but it's a lot different and is sorta interesting.
Great description of the tryouts tention. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D I'm glad that you liked it!
Your a really good writer. I can just feel the suspence and everything.
Keep Up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! :D
Ahhh! Next chapter??
She isn't lying is my guess. But James will see how upset she is and realize that Sirius and Amelia were telling the truth. So he'll ditch Hollie, and go with Lily, and there will be rainbows and sunshine! Yayyy!
Haha, couldn't resist. That is my guess though. Wanna post the next chapter so I can know if I'm right? *Hint* *Hint*
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see, but I have a feeling that your answer is half way correct!! :) Don't worry, the next chapter is in the queue!! It ran into some troubles being validated and stuff, but it should be coming soon!!!
I don't like this fic. I LOVE it!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!!! I'm really glad you love it, thanks for the review!!!
I hate cliffhangers....! (I think it's a funny word though, cliffhanger, we don't even have a word for it in danish, and it took me a week to figure out what it ment. But that might be because I'm stupid)
I love this story :o) I really want to read chapter 12 soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I hate cliffhangers too, they're really annoying, and I'm sorry for putting you through one. :) I guess it is a funny word, and I didn't know they didn't have a word for that in Danish! (that's probably because I don't speak Danish, but oh well). Thanks so much for reviewing, and I'll be sure to get chapter twelve up soon!!! :)
Can't wait for the new stuff!
Author's Response: Me too!!! :) I just have to write it first... *gets to work*
My favorite in Tortall is George. (:
Yeah, the cliche goes that Voldemort is attempting to kill James because of a prophecy which he interprets to mean that the one to defeat him will be the last of the Potters. James's parents almost always die and Lily gets kidnapped, typically at a ball. Now that you have been warned, steer clear!
Thanks for listening and responding to my reviews!
Author's Response: Yeah, George is pretty cool. I really like Jonathan and Gary too, but Alanna is probably my favorite character. I'm glad Alanna ended up with George in the end though.rnrnDon't worry... I don't have any plans for Lily getting kidnapped anytime soon. :) This whole Ball section is cliched, so I'm really excited to get past it and write more original stuff for the story because I've got a lot of ideas for what happens next.rnrnYou're welcome for responding to your reviews! I love hearing from people who like my story and I always like getting suggestions because a story can only get better! (hopefully...) :)
Here's what I think:
hollie isn't making it up.
There will be a huge girlfight, and Hollie will loose.
Amelia's brother is actually some sort of demon and he turns all of the house elves against her.
Author's Response: Wow, you're pretty good at guessing things. The demon thing was spot on!! JUST KIDDING!!! I won't give anything away about Hollie though... :) Thanks for the review!
Sorry, this may not be the appropriate place...but do I detect Tortall fans? I love those books!
Author's Response: Me too!! They're so awesome... I love Alanna. :)
That cliff-hanger was cruel.
Anyway, I must admit, I was a little sceptical of your story when I first started reading your story, because there are quite a few cliches in it. But now I really, really like it! You have a writing style which makes the cliches more unique and not as bad as with some other fics I've read. Also, I like how you are mostly sticking to canon. There's only 2 other things I have to say. First, please don't have Voldemort chasing James because of the prophecy. Please don't! This really annoys me, because it is clearly stated that the prophecy isn't made until a year before Harry is born. Also, the only thing I don't like about your fic is the fact that Peter is seemingly worthless. He wouldn't be included if he didn't have something significant to bring to the table.
Anyway, great job and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm glad that you're liking it so far! I agree with you about the cliches... I started writing it when I first got into the HP fandom so I wasn't aware of the cliches then, but as you can see I'm doing my best to make them my own, and I'll be steering away from them in the future. Don't worry, I won't go with Voldemort chasing Harry due to the prophecy, I haven't even heard that one yet so it's safe. Hmm... I never really noticed that about Peter before... thanks for letting me know, I'll have to think up some way to include him more in the future! Thanks so much for the review!!! :)
ooh. I can't wait. that's good. I can't wait for Chapter 12!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Anna!!! :D
What was that for?!?
Hollie better be lying or I'm gonna be pretty mad!
Author's Response: *grins* I've always wanted to try a cliffhanger just to get this kind of response... :) Sorry, I'm tormenting you... I should stop. Thanks so much for the review, and you'll find out what happens in the next chapter! ;)
great story so far
please keep up the good work
thanks for the great reads
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!! :)
Yes! the Circle ones are "absoballylutely"( Redwall series ) wonderful! i liked Terrier, and cannot wait for the next one - ther is a very familiar character in it, too - black fur, purple eyes. . . :)
Author's Response: Is there really?!!! I loved Faithful!!!! I'll have to check all these books out from the library this summer! Thanks so much!!!
OMG!!!! I love it!!!!
This is getting really good. I can't wait for chapter 11. :-D
Author's Response: Thanks Anna!!! I'm glad that you're liking it so far! Chapter eleven is already in the queue, so don't worry!!! Thanks for the review!! :D