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Reviews For Changing the Past

Name: potterchick14 (Signed) · Date: 10/29/07 23:08 · For: Detention and Deciphering
thats just sick u now ...Lily and Harry!!FREACKY.!

Author's Response: If I hadn't had so many reviews like this before, I might actually be angry...

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 10/29/07 21:44 · For: A New Life
wait, why is james a seeker, he's a chaser in the movie...

Author's Response: Uh, I'm going with the movie canon at this point, and in the movies, he's a seeker.

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 10/29/07 15:23 · For: Intoxication
jeepers! wowee! what has harry got himself into! I really think that he is selfish in this book! er... fic....

Author's Response: LOL...that's part of the problem, isn't it? He was too self-absorbed to see that what he was doing for personal gain by changing the past would ruin his future...oops, did I say that out loud? (But you should probably know by now that he's screwed up some serious stuff back in 1997.) Thanks for R/Ring!

Name: Harry Horcrux (Signed) · Date: 10/29/07 1:53 · For: Intoxication
oh no, what will drunk lily do!!!! will harry get out of it! what waz his plan?
anyway keep writing, and faster, i wanna know what happens

Author's Response: You will find out his plan in the next chapter...I tried to make it semi-obvious in this one, but maybe I could only notice it because I wrote it. Well, anyway, see you next chapter!

Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 18:31 · For: Intoxication
OMG!!!! You definitely do NOT go with anything expected. Harry REALLY should have thought not to get drunk! I can't wait to see what happens next! And also, I'm really sorry for sending a review before this was validated, I'm pretty new to this site and had no idea it was illegal. I'm really sorry, I won't do it again. I nearly had a heart attack when I read the email that said I'd be banned if I do it again.

Author's Response: I don't like to do expected...I like keeping you all on your toes! As for the pre-validation review...don't sweat it. I had no idea, either; it was mostly my fault for inviting people to review and guess what Harry's plan was. No harm done.

Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 18:31 · For: Intoxication
OMG!!!! You definitely do NOT go with anything expected. Harry REALLY should have thought not to get drunk! I can't wait to see what happens next! And also, I'm really sorry for sending a review before this was validated, I'm pretty new to this site and had no idea it was illegal. I'm really sorry, I won't do it again. I nearly had a heart attack when I read the email that said I'd be banned if I do it again.

Author's Response: (see above response)

Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 12:56 · For: Intoxication
oh no lilys so gona regret that in the morning, theyve still got the same blood after all...only if harrys eye colour changes or something then he wouldnt be her son....or maybe she would think shes with James?! hope....please update soon i wanna find out what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! My lips are sealed...

Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 10/27/07 12:01 · For: A New Life
Ooh, cliffie! For Harry's plan, I think he's going to have James go on the date in his place. That's what I would do, anyway.

Harry's new life seems almost too good to be true. It is for him, anyway. No one's gawking at him, no mad men are trying to kill him...It must be a nice change for him. Sadly, Harry has a reputation of having things go wrong for him.

Harry had a wonderful thought one day as he, James, Remus and Sirius talked about Quidditch. Ron had once shown him a list of the past winners of the Quidditch World Cup (taking place every fourth year), and since he knew them by memory, he could make a fortune betting on the team that wins. He could even bet before the season ever started, and almost anyone would take it, thinking him crazy...especially in 1978, in another year and a half, when lowly Israel scraped the win from Austria.

*gasp* Harry's a cheater! Even I wouldn't sink so low as to do that. I thought Harry wanted to earn his money. Tsk tsk. Unfortunately, I think Harry would do that. *disappointed sigh*

“Yeah,” Harry said. “Well, technically, I’m -4 years old, since I’m not born for another four years, but yeah, my seventeenth birthday was just before I was sent back in time.”

“Good, then,” James said. “You’re legal. It should be fun.”

That's so funny the way James says 'You're legal.' You may want to write out the phrase 'negative four', though; it's more professional.

James was so close. *holds fingers an inch apart* So close! He should stop using Harry as an excuse. Sadly (I need a synonym for that word very badly) he will not think of that.

I can't wait to see what brilliant plan Harry came up with (assuming mine's not correct). Keep up the good work, and best wishes!

Author's Response: Lots of people have reviewed to guess that James would take Harry's place, so I will neither confirm nor deny that guess, because...well, it's fun to keep you guessing. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for R/Ring!

Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 17:37 · For: A New Life
This is pretty good but I don't like the way Harry gets his mischeivous thoughts. It scares me.

Author's Response: Yeah, me too. But since they are critical in this story, he continues to have little strokes of maniacal genius. ;) Thanks for R/Ring!

Name: Diadem (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 15:41 · For: A New Life
Is Harry going to get Lily drunk or something?

Are Harry and James going to pretend to be eachother or something?

Author's Response: Good guesses...you'll find out when this is validated! Thanks for reviewing!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 19:22 · For: A New Life
Things seem to be going great for Harry in the past, but I know he misses Ron and Hermione. The map being changed to exclude Peter and include Harry is so funny. The advice Harry is handing out doesn’t seem to be working. I think the big plan is to have James save either his or someone else’s life in front of Lily. Great chapter, and now, on to the next…

Author's Response: Thanks for R/Ring! Glad you like it!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 19:18 · For: Reconciliation
Knowing they have to leave, I can understand Harry talking to Lily, but what she told him was just too perfect. Now he sees the ramifications of changing things. You’d think he would have thought about this when Hermione gave him so many examples a while back. I know Harry really wants to stay, but he has such a strong moral center, no matter how much he wants it I know he will do right in the end. Another great chapter, you are really delving into the hard emotions and doing a darn good job at it. On to the next…

Author's Response: Thanks for R/Ring...the hard emotions, as you put it, are a bit hard to write, but I know what I, at least, would be feeling if I were in any of their positions right now, so I guess that's why I can write it so well. As people may not be able to tell (since I'm a nerd and not a socialite), I know people. So again, thanks, and see you at the next one!

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 19:15 · For: Long-Range Combat
I am soooo sorry I haven't been here to leave my reviews. You have already seen them, so I don't feel that bad about it, but still. Here are my thoughts...
- I knew I was right about the trap. It makes perfect sense. Whoa, blackmailing Harry into going along with it, that’s a bit harsh. The fighting is a little weird with all of the items being used, but Hermione talking about scanning the wands, does make sense. The wands they have aren’t supposed to be in use yet. I really can’t wait to see how Dumbledore fixes all of Harry’s messes. It is going to be an absolute nightmare to untangle everything he’s messed up. Another great chapter and now, going to the next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! That's okay; I don't really care who reviews and when, I just like having them whenever I can. See you later!

Name: inluvwid_pdft (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 16:40 · For: Memories of Old
okay, just one question. if lily knows dat harry is her son. but wont go out with his father then how is harry going to be born? wont he just um disappear?and to answer your question about his plan, i have no idea! but i know it will be good. I love this so far!

Author's Response: Thanks! I can't answer that question, unfortunately, because it could spoil the story. But thanks for R/Ring!

Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 12:29 · For: A New Life
i know, i know!!!! back when i was reading the chapter before harry and lily went to hogsmeade, everyone was saying that james would pretend to be harry and then reveal himself at the end of the day. i bet thats what happens!!! update soon, please!!!

Author's Response: Good idea...but this one I can debunk. Remember, Lily has seen Harry's scar, and his green eyes, and she knows the difference between them now. But thanks for guessing; any other guesses?

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 8:39 · For: A New Life
man alive! Harry had better get things striaght quick!

Author's Response: Darn right he had! Thanks for R/Ring!

Name: Anya Black (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 23:24 · For: A New Life
It is supremely odd for Harry to be "existing" in the past, but not too bad...all I'm sad about is that now Harry and Ginny will never meet, and even if they do, he will be like 21 years older than her (or something like that, my math is terrible) and they are one of my favorite ships :] Good chapter, update as soon as you can! :]

Author's Response: Thanks for R/Ring...yeah, it is a bit odd, and I support Harry/Ginny as well, but I'd better hold my tongue when it comes to romance until this fic is over.

Name: Queen97 (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 2:23 · For: Requests
Gag me. There, ewww and gross free.

Author's Response: Okay, fair enough...man, I need to be careful what I put in my Author's Notes; you guys take them seriously!

Name: SlyDraco (Signed) · Date: 10/18/07 23:03 · For: Reconciliation
First of all I would like to congratulate you on your story. You were......were really......really......okay this SO not working for me. I'm a critic. i critisis people so please don't take it personally. Here are my critics:
When you are doing your story you don't feel it. You are not into the story. How do I know this? Well it's because you left out details. Tiny and large details
TINY : what do people think when they hear that there is 2 Potters? Won't they be suprised? I mean 1 Potter is more than enough, So where did this second Potter come from? They will be all around him asking how come you two have such an unusual name as Potter. You can't say that their cousins can you because they look so much alike. So the point that he is not receiving any attention is kinda dumb(no offence).
LARGE : HOW COULD YOU MAKE A SON AND A MOTHER FALL IN LOVE!!!!!!! That just doesn't make any sense! They father and the son might share their taste in chicks but the son is supose to help the dad win his mom's heart not help himself win his mom's heart. Get what I'm saying?

There are a few more but I'm too lazy to type them down.

Yours Truly,

p/s: one objection. What happened to the Malfoys? They weren't mentioned.

Author's Response: I agree with some of what you said, and then disagreed with others. For one, all that stuff DID happen to Harry and James...people were a little weirded out, but let it go eventually. As for Harry and Lily...that's the way it goes in this story, I'm afraid. You will see in a chapter or two where I'm going with this. It's crucial farther down the road. And the Malfoys? It mentions in CoS that Lucius Malfoy is 41, which would mean he had already graduated from Hogwarts in 1976. I deliberately left them out. Thanks for your opinion, but I already know all of what you've told me. I respect you for it, though.

Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 10/17/07 13:29 · For: Reconciliation
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe he did that! write more, write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: okay, okay, okay...ch. 20 is in the queue!

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