Reviews For Changing the Past
Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 07/27/07 19:16
Chapter: Holding Back

What? Dumbuldore is fierce about the protection of his students, I can't believe he would handle that so calmly. And I can't believe Harry is that heartless. Now Remus is exposed and he, James, and Sirius are all partially guilty along with Harry for killing Snape. Remus will be a mess. (Or should be.)

Author's Response: Well, remember a few things here...Dumbledore knows that Snape kills him in the future; he may be fearing for his own life at this point. Also, no one but Dumbledore knows that Harry, Sirius and James had a hand in the death. Finally, Lupin isn't to blame at all, because he can't control himself when he's transformed. Anyway, thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/27/07 17:40
Chapter: Holding Back

I feel bad for Harry! PLease update soon!

Author's Response: You do? Personally, I don't (and I'm the one writing, lol)...he is a bit cruel to think of killing Snape in such a carefree manner. But thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/26/07 20:55
Chapter: Confrontations

Wow. I love how you incorporate everything that actually happens in here. I also liked Harry messing up the potion; it makes perfect sense. Great job keeping everything and everyone in-character. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for R/Ring! Glad you like it...I liked having Harry mess up the potion, too.

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 07/21/07 10:22
Chapter: Confrontations

Wow, the plot twists just make me jump outta my seat!

Author's Response: Thanks? (P.S.-shouldn't you be reading Deathly Hallows right now? Or are you done already?!)

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 07/20/07 14:00
Chapter: Confrontations

Harry!!!! No! That's awful! How will Lupin feel?

And with the whole Lily/Harry thing, what about Ginny in the present?

Author's Response: Well, Harry broke up with Ginny, didn't he? Or, maybe it's possible that he's subconsciously seeing part of Ginny in Lily...? Or am I just leading you on? Find out in future chapters...

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 07/20/07 11:27
Chapter: Memories of Old

okay so im sorry that my last review (which consisted of "ewww") was so obnoxious, im at work whilst reading this so when the boss man came in i didn't have time to finish the review.. moving right along, i really like this story, im always excited when Harry gets to interact with his parents. im still gonna go with the ewww factor though... when i was reading some of the other reviews that went the way of "what if Harry turns out to be Harry's dad."...eww. but other than the initial gag reflex, i am really enjoying your writing, and as such, as soon as i finish Deathly Hallows, i will be back here waiting rather (im)patiently for another update. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! (p.s-the ewww thing was a joke...I thought it was funny, actually!)

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/20/07 11:10
Chapter: Confrontations

Ohhh. Can't wait to see how this plan works out.Please update soon!

Author's Response: It might, it might not...you think they can pull it off? Find out...

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 07/20/07 1:04
Chapter: Confrontations

Okay, so firstly, another smooth chapter. Everything flows very nicely. On a lower note (sorry, I hate to say it, but I have to) Harry seems slightly OOC to me. Especially since he's considering trying to murder Snape... so cheerfully. I don't know if Harry would so calmly head towards becoming a killer - I feel like if he killed someone, it would be in a moment of passionate rage. But then again, I could quite easily be wrong. But it is a nice twist to the story, Harry telling Sirius to lure Snape into the Whomping Willow... James is going to be furious though, isn't he? Anyway, enough rambling from me. Update soon! I'm addicted to this story!

Author's Response: You never know...Harry is always changing. He went from a small, innocent boy in SS/PS to attempting a Cruciatus Curse on Bellatrix Lestrange in fifth year...he could change any time.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 07/19/07 22:50
Chapter: Confrontations

OOOH -- I should have seen that ending coming, but I didn't...

Author's Response: OOOH-Well, you'll have a pretty good idea of what happens in Ch. 10 then, don't you?

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/19/07 20:56
Chapter: Confrontations

Wow! Definitely excellent! Talking to James in the Great Hall about Lily was very good. James had the reaction that Iím sure most boys would. Harry actually needs to think about the fact that if he and Lily get together and James and Lily donít then technically Harry doesnít exist.
Not to mention that they have the same genes, which would make anything other than holding hands deeply disturbing.
Having Snape and Harry partner each other in Potions was great. I like the taunts Harry used and the resulting failure on the potion. When Harry made references to the Prince and the spells he made up, I was expecting Snape to have a little more reaction, but then again this is Snape. He never reacts the way I think he should.
Harry is going to tell Sirius to send Snape into the passageway? Oh dear! I only worry about Remusí reaction to having bitten Snape and possibly even killing him.
You know I love this story and I canít wait for the next chapter. I wasnít expecting it to post this soon, but I happened to check e-mail and there it was. Absolutely wonderful, and I hope Deathly Hallows is enough of a distraction to all that are waiting for another update. See you at the next one.


Author's Response: Yeah...this one only took like two days to update! I guess the moderator reading this wanted to read it as much as the rest of you...:) ...Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 07/19/07 2:26
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

I think Harry needs to lock himself up for a while. He is in way too over his head.

Author's Response: lol...but if your parents were dead for sixteen years, and you got to meet them, would YOU want to stay as far away from them as possible? I know I wouldn't...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: harrysgirl4life
Date: 07/18/07 21:48
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

sorry once again it posted twice my mistake

Author's Response: No problem... ;)

Reviewer: harrysgirl4life
Date: 07/18/07 21:46
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

awesome chapter! i wish my story was this popular! i never get reviews. if you want to read my story its on hpfan fic. my user is "harrypottersgirl4life" thanks soooo much and once again keep up the great writting!
~emisa

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: harrysgirl4life
Date: 07/18/07 21:45
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

awesome chapter! i wish my story was this popular! i never get reviews. if you want to read my story its on hpfan fic. my user is "harrypottersgirl4life" thanks soooo much and once again keep up the great writting!
~emisa

Author's Response: Dang...wish I could say I'd read your fic, but I can't...my main site for posting used to be HPFF, but for some reason, my computer refuses to let me have access to the site. It just loads for a half hour then says "Error" or something. Weird...you can always post it here, right? Good luck with your fic over there, and thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 07/18/07 14:45
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

Wow, great chapter. But I thought that they learned nonverbal spells in sixth year; Snape had them do them in HBP. But I'm not going to be nitpicky. Awesome job, and I can't wait for chapter nine.

Author's Response: I think I mentioned somewhere in there that they didn't learn nonverbal spells back then...didn't I? Well, either way, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: imheretosee
Date: 07/17/07 23:02
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

Hmph. I am so angry at Harry! Leave Lily alone! Or tell her he is her son so she wont like him! And James will like him! GRrr . well anyway cant wait til the next chapter is validated....so I can be angry at Harry some more!

Author's Response: LOL...don't be mad at Harry, be mad at me for making this up! Wait, I take that back... ;)

Reviewer: kattmoo
Date: 07/17/07 22:55
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

ok. so this is officially grossing me out....
no one would actually fall for their own mother knowingly.
but watev.

Author's Response: Well, you never know...Lily, according to JKR, was like Ginny in her time...pretty, popular, and attractive to guys. It could happen...but hey, how could you know for sure? No one's ever actually time-traveled before to meet their parents.

Reviewer: phoenixashes
Date: 07/17/07 17:29
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

Okay lily liking harry not surprising, he's good looking like james, but not a git so ok, bu harry liking lily? wierd! its his mom, if there had been some referances to her being like ginny and harry was misplacing his feelings ok, but that doesnt seem to be happening. when he tells her who he is though, thats gonna mess with her head, having a crush on your kid, yuck. Great writing btw.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm gonna explain that a bit further later...there's one funny line that Hermione says about it that I want to put in, but there hasn't been any place to put it yet. You'll know when you get to it.

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/17/07 17:01
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

I hope everything works between the Marauders and Harry. I also hope things work out between James and Lily. But I won't know until you update; So PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: No, you won't, will you? Ch. 9 in the queue!

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/17/07 17:00
Chapter: Slip-Ups and Confusions

I hope everything works between the Marauders and Harry. I also hope things work out between James and Lily. But I won't know until you update; So PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: :)

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