Reviews For Changing the Past
Reviewer: Ruby_aserum
Date: 08/13/07 17:42
Chapter: Holding Back

erm... if snape KNEW he was a werewolf he wouldn't be so STUPID and follow him down there!!! The fisrt time he went down the tree(when James saved him) he had no idea what Remus was, he was trying to find out.

Other than that, it's great. I'm enjoying it!
:-) :-D !!!

Author's Response: Well, think about when Harry and Ron tried to take on a troll in their first year...not the brightest of ideas either, was it? Well, maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong...glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Ruby_aserum
Date: 08/13/07 9:42
Chapter: Memories of Old

Wow! I never usually read any alternate universe stuff but this is a really good idea. I'm gonna read the rest now.

Author's Response: Okay! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Harry Horcrux
Date: 08/13/07 2:50
Chapter: Requests eww or grosses huh? ok...

What about poor james?
And if harry actually gets together with lily, then Harry wont really exist will he?

Figure something out to make lily fall for james! but make it nice. I really enjoy reading ur writing but i have no idea where your going.
Keep writing and i'll keep reading!

Author's Response: That's for me to know and you to find out...will Harry survive, or not? Don't worry...I've got everything planned out for the future! You'll see in due time!

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 08/12/07 20:49
Chapter: Requests

Can I include the word "incest"? Because that's the road you're headed down...

Author's Response: All right, say whatever you want; I don't care...I know why you would think all of these things, but don't worry! I have a plan for this! Please keep reading; thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: loveshan29
Date: 08/12/07 16:24
Chapter: Requests

LOL! Great story. I like the twist. You adding a little incest into the mix. It's kind creepy, but it sounds good none the less. I like the way it sounds so far. I can't wait for the next part to be validated.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Next chapter in the queue! Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: hailtotheholly123
Date: 08/12/07 14:54
Chapter: Requests

Geez, the future is going to be so messed up when/if Harry returns...

Author's Response: lol, yes it is...thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: hailtotheholly123
Date: 08/12/07 14:42
Chapter: Holding Back

-cries- I hate Snape, but killing him off was just terrible...I can't believe that Harry could go through with something like that!

Author's Response: Desperate times call for desperate measures...but I agree, he is being foolish. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 08/12/07 11:35
Chapter: Requests

no offence but i kind of hoped harry and lily don't go out together. i guess i'm just a big fan of the lily/james ship. it's kind of disgusting to go out with your mum and i always thought harry's heart belonged to ginny. but i guess it is possible that lily goes out with james because of the cosequences with harry. however, your story does have a good plot and all the twists and turns are exciting.

Author's Response: Yeah, I do have fun writing the fic...and a lot of the twists and turns just flow with the storyline. It's hard to like Harry Potter and not ship J/L...I ship them too. You'll see where I'm going with all this romance later in the story. Thanks for R/Ring! (P.S.-You are my 200th reviewer! Congrats, and thanks!)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/12/07 10:40
Chapter: Requests

I'm thinking that Harry will tell James to go on the date and pretend to be him. James'll act really sweet, and at the end of the date he'll reveal that he's James. Lily's mad at first, and isn't sure if James can act like that all the time, but then he proves that he can and she agrees to take him.
Yeah, there's my thoughts. I really liked this chapter. Who knows what's going to happen in the future now?

Author's Response: I DO! LOL...anyway, that's not quite right. Harry likes Lily at this point, although whether the feeling is mutual or not remains to be seen, but you will find out. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/12/07 8:48
Chapter: Requests

Just for fun, how about ewwwww, gross.
Just kidding, I think you did a great job on this chapter. Ron and Hermione know everything Harry has gone through, so them asking if he was all right, and if it had hurt much was within reason.
The article on Peter was well written, and lacking certain elements, like Harry and Lilyís names was really good.
I wondered when Harry would decide Dumbledore doesnít know everything. Even with the time difference, Harry knows he can accomplish more than anyone else. Giving him the list of Death Eater students should help though.
Remus wants to know what happens to him in the future. I know itís human nature to want to know, but he seems to be the only one with the brains to know that knowledge is dangerous. I wonder if Harry will tell him.
I canít believe Harry would ask Lily out, after telling James he would marry her. But with the way they got together impossible now, they either have to come up with a new plan, or Harry gets the girl.
Hope the next chapter gets validated soon. I canít wait for Jamesí reaction to the date.
Sorry it took me so long to R/R, but I spent time with my family yesterday and didnít even touch the computer. See you in the reviews, and e-mail later.

Author's Response: Thanks for R/Ring! The next chapter is in the queue...keep reading!

Reviewer: Madam Puddifoot
Date: 08/12/07 8:27
Chapter: Requests

I feel sick. I really, really, really feel SICK.
How can you do something like this? Bring me a bucket!

Apart from one of the most disgusting ships imaginable, the story all in all is very good. Keep going, mate, and don't take my vomit comments personally. ;) x

Author's Response: Aww, she thinks my story is sickening...*pouts* Just kidding! I knew when I wrote this part, I would get some negative feedback, but don't worry...I'm going somewhere with this. I hope you'll stick with the story, and in a few more chapters, you'll understand. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 08/12/07 6:03
Chapter: Requests

this is a really cool story please update more soon ! ! (harry and lily? well there's not harm in trying something new)

Author's Response: Glad to hear you're not as negative in thinking about Harry/Lily as most others, and I'm glad you like it! Next chapter in the queue!

Reviewer: chochang_katieleung
Date: 08/12/07 3:59
Chapter: Requests

its was good, its a really interesting story

plz tell me when you're gonna update soon...

Author's Response: If you put this story on your favorites list, you'll automatically get an email from the site saying when it's been updated. Thanks for the feedback; next chapter in the queue!

Reviewer: maggiequeen
Date: 08/12/07 0:01
Chapter: Requests

how about "perverted" and "incest"? I really didn't think you'd go so far at that particular matter...

Author's Response: Don't worry, don't I've said in other reviews, I'm going somewhere with this. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: maggiequeen
Date: 08/12/07 0:00
Chapter: Requests

how about "perverted" and "incest"? I really didn't think you'd go so far at that particular matter...

Author's Response: (see above response)

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 08/11/07 20:59
Chapter: Requests

omg. this cant be just cant. its like...messing with...nature. its just sick and wrong. and what about Ginny.

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry really isn't thinking now, is he? Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 08/11/07 17:28
Chapter: Requests

Well, if "ewww" and "gross" are off limits, how about "disturbing"? :P
Seriously though, this is a pretty impressive story, lots of interesting and creative stuff in here. The time travel I think is a good idea and I can definitely see Harry trying to change things and Hermione trying to stop him, so good job keeping them in-character. I'm a little surprised to see Harry going for Lily (not to mention disturbed) since he just broke up with Ginny against what he wanted to. Hmm, maybe remembering her could be what snaps him out of it...
The cliffie back when Harry explained things to James was very James-like in my opinion, so good job with the Marauders too.
Until Snape died, I was convinced that the the future would wind up the way it was(is?) because of Harry's meddleing, but now that I'm wrong I'm very much looking forward to finding out how the future is different. One quick thing though, if Harry's been changing the past so much, wouldn't his memories or appearance (i.e. the scar) start to change? Or is that not how time travel works in this?
Add more soon please!!!

Author's Response: His memories wouldn't change...he didn't forget all the events of the Shrieking Shack in the third book, did he? Anyway, thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 08/11/07 16:50
Chapter: Requests

ewwwww gross there i just said it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry couldnt help myself. very different time travel fic!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!!! harry messed up things a lot.... oh and also, did u know that lily and james got together in their seventh year when james's head deflated cuz he was head boy and had responsibilities? just wondering if this difference is deliberate.....

Author's Response: Well, I guess it is different in this one, but I always thought James saving Snape would be a factor in changing Lily's mind about James...well, right or wrong, that's how it is in this fic. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 08/11/07 14:36
Chapter: Requests

I'm sorry, but it does seem a little wrong. I mean, even if Lily in this time-period isn't Harry's mum, Harry's mum is still Lily, you know what I mean? And poor James... Wow, is Harry being completly over the top, I mean, I know he doesn't know any better, so what you're writting is what he would do, but still, killing Snape and getting Regalus out of the way will be crippling to the Order...

But I wasn't critizing (sp?) you. Because that is something Harry really would do, without stopping and thinking of the consequences.


Author's Response: Yeah, the Order is really being crippled from his doings...but how far will Harry go? Find out in later chapters...thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/11/07 14:34
Chapter: Requests

Disgusting... sorta... (hehe i didn't say ew or gross) Harry should just ell her that James tried to save snape...

Author's Response: lol...well, it doesn't seem like Harry's concerned about the J/L relationship right now, does he? Anyway, thanks for R/Ring!

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