Reviews For Changing the Past
Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 09/02/07 3:41
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Just an after thouhgt, if Harry stuffs up James and lily,he wont exist.But if he does fix things and he has a good life with parents and no voldemort, he wouldnt have gone back and saved stuff, and they would die, and then he would go back and save them, and he wouldnt go back an save them, so theyd die ,so it goes on and on and on
Dont worry if you dont understand a thing i just said-or ever said -niether do I.

Author's Response: OK, good to know...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 09/02/07 3:39
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Just an after thouhgt, if Harry stuffs up James and lily,he wont exist.But if he does fix things and he has a good life with parents and no voldemort, he wouldnt have gone back and saved stuff, and they would die, and then he would go back and save them, and he wouldnt go back an save them, so theyd die ,so it goes on and on and on
Dont worry if you dont understand a thing i just said-or ever said -niether do I.

Author's Response: (see above)

Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 09/02/07 3:32
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Ooopy! Slight misunderstanding i think. Its not my book.Just thought id make sure we got that straight.
Sorry if i made it sound like that, no, im still in year8 for gods sake!

Author's Response: Uh...thank you? And by year 8, do you mean 8th grade? (I'm American)

Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 08/31/07 5:23
Chapter: Zero to Hero

You are a wicked writer.I suck,they rejected my story.I was rejected! im the best bloody writer in the world!When I was in year 7 my deputy principle talked to me about sending stuff to publishers and stuff.
Dont mean to drag on but if you ever see a book called"Leaping the Tingles" by Helene Smith, flip to the acnowledgements and Jill Carter(eaton) is the deputy.
Yes, I kow i send annoyingly long and off-topic messages, but im just a bored kid,cut me some slack peoples!

Author's Response: I hope by "wicked writer", you mean "good", so thanks! And good luck with your story...if I see it on the shelves someday, I'll look for the acknowledgements thing. (And remember, JKR was rejected 20-something times before Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone was published.)

Reviewer: Anya Black
Date: 08/28/07 15:20
Chapter: Zero to Hero

I really like your story, but you've got me in AGONY!!! I'm a total L/J freak and they HAVE to end up together, Lily/Harry seem so wrong, please please per-LEASE *does a sad attempt at puppy eyes and fails because you can't transmit the proper effect of puppy eyes over typing*

Author's Response: No comment...I obviously can't tell you if they end up together or not, because that would ruin the story, but you'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 08/26/07 9:06
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Ugh now I'm SURE Harry has screwed up the future. I'm speechless. I really want him to find a way to clean up his mess, but I don't think you would do that. Well, great story!

Author's Response: Well, all I'll say is that the story IS called "Changing the Past"...well, thanks for R/Ring; glad you like it!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 08/26/07 9:06
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Ugh now I'm SURE Harry has screwed up the future. I'm speechless. I really want him to find a way to clean up his mess, but I don't think you would do that. Well, great story!

Author's Response: (see above response)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/25/07 8:29
Chapter: Zero to Hero

oh i enjoyed this! but how is Harry going to ensure that James and lily fall in love with each other beforethey go back? I liked your line by th way. The Potters certainly have something for red-headed girls.

Author's Response: Sure do...glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MrsGGSparrow
Date: 08/25/07 4:28
Chapter: Zero to Hero

hmm, very very good! however, i must say, that even though its your story and your plot, i personally dont realy like Harry and Lily getting together, its just not....right.... lol, but its your story i guess, but other then that its very good!!
lol
GG

Author's Response: Thanks...next chapter on the way!

Reviewer: omega13a
Date: 08/24/07 0:24
Chapter: Potter meets Potter

I've re-read things and noticed a little problem with what Hermione said in Chapter 3 about why Harry didn't have his invisibility cloak. Hermione said that Harry didn't have it because James had it in the time period they are in. If that is true, then how is is it that everything (and everyone for that matter) that was brought back in time still exist since the matter that makes them up also exists in that time period? Also, in PoA, Hermione was not only in more then one place at the same time, so was her stuff if I recall. Am I making any sense here or am I for the millionth time today saying a bunch of confusing stuff? (Make sense of time travel confuses me)

Author's Response: I understand what you're saying...but look at it this way: Harry's clothes and books and stuff were most likely created after he was born, so that doesn't apply here, whereas the Invisibility Cloak (which we now know as a Deathly Hallow) and the Marauder's Map were created before 1980, and were already owned by someone. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mia2223
Date: 08/22/07 4:46
Chapter: Requests

Its gr8
Do finish the story quickly


Author's Response: I'm working on the story constantly...any delays come from awaiting validation. Thanks for the input; next chapter should be coming soon!

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 08/21/07 15:21
Chapter: Zero to Hero

I love the story. I really do, but.. harry and lily just do NOT go together. It feels so messed up. Personally i feel Harry is forgetting his priorities. But its your story, so Im sur you've got something figured out.
I really really hope Harry goes back to the future.

Author's Response: He may, he may not...I won't say anything, though. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: water_polo_08
Date: 08/21/07 15:12
Chapter: Memories of Old

Ooo..
I think that its pretty cool. But weird how they just go back in time. I hope that you explain that later on.

Author's Response: I do...keep reading!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 08/21/07 0:10
Chapter: Zero to Hero

Didn't Hermione say at the beginning that the pictures would fill in AS they happened?
I may be misremembering, so here's my prediction as to how those enormous afforts to nature happen: As the trio is about to leave, Harry changes his mind and says to the leather something along the lines of how it would be perfect if he could be with Lily, which is still incredibly disgusting and I hope I'm wrong. But then what's the deal with the album????

Author's Response: Eh...I guess that's a mistake. In my own defense, I'll say that Hermione isn't all-knowing. Time-travel is a tricky business, after all. And by the way, the leather has no power over what happens to Harry relationship-wise...it can only transport between times. It chose to send Harry to the perfect time zone in which he could either choose to carry out what he's said, or walk away. It's not a binding contract, such as the prophecy between Harry and Voldemort was not. Anyway, thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: xameex167
Date: 08/20/07 17:34
Chapter: Memories of Old

i like it....but i just thought it was a bit...weird with the whole harry falling for his mother thing...but everything besides that was pretty good

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 08/20/07 11:49
Chapter: Zero to Hero

I hope Harry can get over his Oedipus thing... And if Harry would go back to not being so OOC that would be perfect... hahaha

Author's Response: Uh...thanks, I think!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 08/20/07 9:46
Chapter: Zero to Hero

ew!!!! harry is on a date with his mother?!??! poor james!!!

Author's Response: You're right...James sure isn't liking Harry very much right now. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 08/20/07 1:27
Chapter: Zero to Hero

but shouldnt hermione's comment remind him of Ginny. and OM MY GOD! what is his problom, god i feel like smaking him.

Author's Response: LOL...you should. But don't. It would mess up my story. ;) Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 08/19/07 9:45
Chapter: Zero to Hero

You do realize that the only way Lilly will ever marry James now is if (a) Harry modifies everybodies memory or (b) he tells her the truth about himself....and even then its not for definite.

This baby girl in Harry's arms in the photo really interests me...the fact that it's in the photos is proof that it actually happened...or rather will happen.

This however brings about a great big dilemma.
...ok...so its Harry who marries Lilly...fine...have it that way...but..HOW?

If he marries Lilly, then James doesn't...if James doesn't...then How in the name of everything we hold dear does Harry get born...

In fact...what is he doing here...and presuming that the little baby is in fact Harry's counter part in the future...why hasn't he changed into a girl yet...if you understand what i'm trying to tell you...

Hmmm I can just see the surprise on Harry's face ***evil ***

This is so screwed up!!!

So screwed up in fact that I can hardly wait to see the end....

Poor Harry ...will he be a she? I can already see it...

Main changes in the Future...

1) Harry changes into a girl...
2) Lilly who is both his wife and mother (Ewww and wierd...not to forget usually impossible)
3) James is most likely his greatest enemy for what he has done... (just like the relationship with snape and James)
4) I wonder who Harry's Godfather will be since Sirius is (most likely) too loyal to James to abandon him ...or is he?..that would be the last straw for James...losing his friends to Harry)
Imagine if James died accidentally ...I wonder if Harry would freak out?...I would..or at least I think I would...if I had a chance to..(that is if I didn't disappear before I could. )

5)Since Voldy does not have Snape or Peter to help him...what happened to him?

The list goes on and on...so much has changed...so much to do...at least Ron and Hermione are still a couple... :)

I don't think Harry will go with them to the future...so they will most likely have no choice then to stun him...and bring him back...er... forward... forcefully...and even then... changes have already been done.

If I where Hermione or Ron I'd travel back in time first and stop Harry before he changes the past...but that would ruin the story for everybosy so..please...don't..(but then again its up to you)

One of the main things I'm waiting for is to see the changes...

Anyway..enough for now....let the show continue...I can hardly wait to see Harry's and Lilly's marriage.....poor James lol...

Next Chapter please... ;)


Author's Response: Wow...interesting theories! A few things I can say for sure to you...Harry doesn't become a girl (lol), and James won't be his enemy forever (you'll see in a few chapters). You won't see the changes for a while, as the fic is called "Changing the Past", so most of it will be seeing Harry screwing up his past, and near the end, he'll have to deal with it...but I won't say any more than that. I already know what happens, so although I like your theories, I know what I'm going to do. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 08/19/07 9:35
Chapter: Memories of Old

i just read your response and i suppose i'll just have to shut up and trust you =]

Author's Response: :)...you can still submit any theories you have, or anything like that; I don't mind. Just see the review right above this one...thanks, though!

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