Reviews For Changing the Past
Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 10/09/07 15:32
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Wicked! Can you tell me the names of the D.E. that were caught? I forget who some of them are.

Author's Response: (see above)

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 10/09/07 15:32
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Wicked! Can you tell me the names of the D.E. that were caught? I forget who some of them are.

Author's Response: (see above)

Reviewer: Anya Black
Date: 10/07/07 13:33
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Meh, I hope Harry doesn't stay in the past but if he does I'm sure you have a good reason. I love your story!
If you like time-travel stories, I recommend that you read Fate, by Liisa (it's on MNFF). One of the best I've ever read and it got a QSQ. :]

Author's Response: Thanks for the third of the day, believe it or not! (lol) I'm glad you like it, and if I have a sec, maybe I'll check it out, thanks...

Reviewer: I_heart_Luna
Date: 10/06/07 12:36
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

I really like this chapter

Author's Response: I'm so glad!

Reviewer: mbailey1417
Date: 10/06/07 10:48
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

blah harry is soooo annoying!

Author's Response: Uh, is that a good thing?

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 10/06/07 8:49
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Ha...I say...let Harry stay here and live his past as he should have...(only as his families close friend)

Though if I think about it I'd really enjoy seeing Harry's daughter...

Hermione and Ron can return back to their time and join up with Harry again in the future...

As far as I see it..two main things could happen to harry...whether he Marry's Lily or not doesn't really matter.

(1) He says the same age as he can't grow older until he reaches the time he left in the future...


(2) he grows older, and meets his friends in the future though many years older then he is now...

If he stays the same age, but does not Marry lily he can become James and Lily's son later on....

If he Marry;s Lily he can have his daughter... though that might screw up the time line...but since he already exists can he really disappear? The worst what could happen is that he lives on in a different dimension...rare but not unheard of...

I don't see much of a problem you? lol

Now...what will it be? :)


ps...check out my own story...(first chapters up) 'Harry Potter, Life's a Prophecy'

My name is Light Lord Cybergate
(Warning: rated M)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, those are Harry's options at the moment...assuming he stays in the past, of course. And thanks for the recommendation...if I have some spare time, I'll be sure to check it out. (My life's pretty hectic right now.) See you later! -PEMDAS

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 10/06/07 8:48
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Wooo hoo, some excitement!!! “Yes, sir,” Hermione said before the boys could protest again. She took off her belt, and mounted her broom, which the boys also did. They flew over the battlements and down to the front doors, where Hermione quickly unlocked with her wand. she had said before that she didn't have her wand with her. i luv ur story, the suspense is just always there!!!!!!!!! even tho it is a cliffie, the ending is so appropriate. You've siriusly created the most unique time fic ever. I wonder if he'll stay?

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you like it that much! Whoops, yeah, that's a mistake; I'll have to fix that. Thanks for catching that. Thanks for R/Ring!!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 10/06/07 8:38
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

lol that was cool! very different to other battles i've seen! great! I enjoyed that! I hope harry comes to his senses soon and realises that he needs to go back to his time! haha, dumbledore with blackmail, not somethingy i would have expected, but in the circimastances...desperate times call for desperate measures! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, you just read my lips...desperate times...anyway, yeah, I couldn't make it a full-on battle, because Dumbledore wouldn't want to put the students in danger (which they weren't, which was the controversy with my moderator when it was rejected the first time). Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 09/24/07 12:24
Chapter: The New Guard

Oh oh...I have a feeling your going to kill one of the trio so Harry will have no choice but to go back further in time and redo certain changes to rescue his friends.... (In an attempt to change Harrys plans, since he wouldn't redo anything otherwise...


Next chapter please.. ;)

Author's Response: Nice theory...I won't dent this one yet, good theory...perhaps not ENTIRELY true, but you might have part of it...but then again, maybe I'm just trying to keep you interested, as always. You'll have to wait and see! ;) -PEMDAS

Author's Response: *deny, not dent

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/22/07 16:43
Chapter: The New Guard

dum de dum dum DUMMMMMMMMMMM............ update soon!!!

Author's Response: lol...thanks for R/Ring! Ch. 18 is in the queue!

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 09/21/07 15:21
Chapter: The New Guard

ok i'm sorry but this story seems to be going nowhere and it's weird. don't get me wrong it's a great story and everything but it just goes on a bit. other than that though it is pretty good

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you like it! It's a bit hard to tie everything in with each other, so I keep having to branch off from the main plot, but it'll clear up later, I promise. Thanls for reviewing!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 09/20/07 11:34
Chapter: The New Guard

You're killing me! The suspense is killing me! Somebody stop all this madness! ( an excerpt from drama class, hope you like it)

Author's Response: lol, are my 300th reviewer! Congrats, and thanks!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 09/20/07 11:29
Chapter: Millicent Bagnold

That was... interesting. No doubt we'll hear from the ministry again.

Author's Response: You think? Well, you'll find out soon enough...

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 09/20/07 10:12
Chapter: The New Guard

i read one of your resposes, and da part bout harry or ron or hemy not surviving is huge. i hope you havnt got anything drastic planned for dem. but im waiting for you next ch. (please please validate soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Author's Response: I COULD be lying, you know...maybe just trying to keep you interested, you know? But hey, I wouldn't give anything get to find out on your own whether they make it! Mwahahaaa! (Oh, thanks for R/Ring!)

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/20/07 8:57
Chapter: The New Guard

Sorry it took so long to review, but I loved this. The gifts and Dumbledore telling the Prophet he was dropping the defenses for a while. Not something I would ever imagine him doing for real. If the protections were to be updated, then he would have just done it without saying a word. That spells trap to me.
I also have a feeling the hooded figure was really Dumbledore trying to draw out the Death Eater students. I cannot wait to see if I am right. Hurry up with validation please mods! Great chapter and I will see you at the next.

Author's Response: No, the hooded figure wasn't Dumbledore, as I'll say again. It WAS a Death Eater. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/19/07 20:52
Chapter: The New Guard

I definitely can't wait for the next chapter. I like the idea of those defense packets and all the little sweets from the teachers (crystallized pineapple from Slughorn?). I actually would have thought that James would have sent something to Harry that turns his hair blue or something. Oh well.

I think Dumbledore was a hair OOC. Do you think he would have told the Daily Prophet exactly when the protections would be down? I understand that you needed it for the plot, but it just seems a little stupid. Unless, of course, Dumbledore wanted them to know. *shrugs* Dumbledore and his odd ways will be the death of everyone.

Well, I hope the next chapter is validated soon. Best wishes!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so 18 is in the queue! As for Dumbledore posting in the Daily Prophet...well, I think you already know why he did it, and no, it's not OOC of him, for reasons you'll find out in the next chapter. Again, thanks, and see you at ch. 18!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/19/07 17:02
Chapter: The New Guard

ooh! I wonder whre dumbels is....his will be interesting

Author's Response: Hey, I like that! "Dumbles"...nice one! Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 09/19/07 14:41
Chapter: The New Guard

i think i know what happens. but im probably wrong. dumbledore is the hooded guy and hes tricking the future deatheaters that are deatheaters right now to come into the open.

Author's Response: No, Dumbledore is not the hooded was a Death Eater. But that's okay to have theories! It keeps it fun and interesting...see you next chapter!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/19/07 10:40
Chapter: The New Guard

At this rate, Harrys gonna create a bad paradox, if he trys to replace James.... Anyway, back to the chapter... great chapter, James really hates harry, i dont blame him...will there be a screaming match anytime soon? Lol. Oh bugger, the DE are coming to Hogwarts...Harry has really messed somethin up this time! Lets hope in this Battle at hogwarts dumbledore doesnt die premtiurly...
Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: I think you should rethink that statement for a minute...Dumbledore, in my mind, is nearly invincible; the only reason he died in HBP is because he asked Snape to kill him. So I guess I can get it out of the way that Dumbledore will survive this battle; what YOU should be worried about is whether Harry, Ron and Hermione will survive. Thanks for R/RIng!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/16/07 14:41
Chapter: Millicent Bagnold

Millicent Bagnold was Minister before Fudge.

Well, now that that's out of the way, I shall give you a proper review. An excellent chapter. I really can't wait to see how you think all of Harry's meddlings will affect the future. You leave me waiting anxiously for the next chapter. But here's a little something for you to think about: The past has already happened, right? So doesn't that mean that the future would stay the same no matter what happened? Just something I thought of. Keep up the great work! :D

Author's Response: No, the future CAN change...Time-Turners are different than the magic leather; they sorta duplicate for a few hours until the person that travels in the past gets to the point where he/she left again, and his/her past self leaves. Does that make sense? With the leather, there can only be one at a time in one place, so the past hasn't been changed in the same way. Thus, it's like a "new" future has opened up, although no one knows (but me) what's going on back in 1997. Thanks for R/Ring!

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