Reviews For Changing the Past
Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 10/16/07 16:11
Chapter: Memories of Old

love the story so far, it is an awesome idea,
but i have to know, why PEMDAS? What is so great about the order of operations? WHY?!

Author's Response: I made up the name like 3 years ago, back when I was a math nerd. It sorta stuck, so even though I don't like math anymore, I kept the name. lol...thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 10/14/07 14:27
Chapter: Reconciliation

Wow. Harry is really serious about staying. This should definitely prove interesting.

I think this story is entirely realistic. I can see immense probability in everything that you have had happen. I can especially see why Harry would want to say. I really think it's one of the flaws in his personality: he cared too much. We'll see what Dumbledore has to say about it.

I commend you for tackling such an immense project. You must have a great amount of patience to map out this entire thing. You are an awesome writer.

This chapter was really really good. I don't have anything bad to say about it, and all of it was good. Keep up the great work, and I hope you don't have any more battles with the mod. :D Best wishes!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 10/14/07 14:14
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Goodness, what a chapter!

Those were some pretty destructive weapons. No wonder you had them banned; the Death Eaters in the future would've had way to much of an advantage. (By the way, that made the idea of them canon! :D)

The battle itself was definitely well-written. A little short, but then again you can't expect Voldemort to send all of his Death Eaters for an apparently low-importance level mission.

Harry wants to stay?! What a twist. Luckily, since I'm reading this chapter a little late (sorry about that) I can just click the button that says 'Next'. lol Great chapter, and best wishes! :D

Author's Response: That's okay; read whenever you get a chance, that's fine. Sorry the chapter was a bit short; writing battle scenes isn't my forte. Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 10/12/07 22:16
Chapter: Reconciliation

WOW! i was really shocked!
i LOVE this fanfic. God! hope u update soon. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
PLEASE update!
And i cant believe Ron and Hermy just leave like that! Do tehy cum back?(Stupid Q, ur not gonna ans dat) But i hope they do. So! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: You are correct...I won't answer that. But I'll say this...they left out of anger at Harry's outburst, and it may or may not be long-lasting...but anyway, I'm so glad you like it! I have finished writing this fic a long time ago, and I can't wait for you to read the end...but I can't say how many more chapters there are, because it would ruin some things, but I'll say it's within 10 more. See you next chapter! -PEMDAS

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/12/07 15:45
Chapter: Reconciliation

wow... he's smart. now he has to stay in the future. again... typical harry!! update soon!!

Author's Response: lol...true! Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/12/07 15:41
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

omg, if he doesn't go back he'll mess up the whole wizarding world!! sigh, typical harry. lol

Author's Response: Sigh, true...thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Kif
Date: 10/12/07 13:05
Chapter: Reconciliation

Great chapter! Really am loving this fic. I look forward to the next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: harrypotterprincess
Date: 10/12/07 0:59
Chapter: Reconciliation

i think i pretty much like this fic...ALOT.


Author's Response: Woah...thanks!

Reviewer: mbailey1417
Date: 10/11/07 22:07
Chapter: Reconciliation


great story. i love it when you upate

Author's Response: LOL...but please don't. It would ruin the story. (jk) Glad you like it; see you next chapter!

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 10/11/07 20:57
Chapter: Reconciliation

sorry I haven't reviewed in forever, I was having computer problems. I haven't stopped reading this story... i've grown attached actually.

Author's Response: Thanks...that's okay; anytime you can review is cool!

Reviewer: Harry Horcrux
Date: 10/11/07 20:10
Chapter: Reconciliation

its really good, keep writing! seriously!
I want see how it turns out... like, what is it going to be like in the future now that harry has changed it, and will Ron and hermione actually meet and older harry or even harry's daughter(if he gets together with lily) Im interested, so keep writing...

Author's Response: Thanks...glad you like it! And don't worry; I'm not stopping! Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 10/11/07 15:35
Chapter: Reconciliation

I've said it before, and i'll say it again. Harry is so STUPID!!!

Author's Response: Agreed. ;) Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 10/11/07 15:15
Chapter: Reconciliation

ohhh... wel that changed a bit surprised Lily took it like that, she snogged her son! Lol. anyway, great chapter, i loved the reference to the old mans mistake and i wonder what will happen now. . . but with me being a MASSIVE H/G shipper i hope Ginny helps in some form of bringing harry back...if he does. Cant wait for the next chapter. but one thing, did he wipe the kiss he had with Lily as well?
Also, i loved the last line!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Harry did wipe his entire love life with Lily when he modified her memory. She still remembers that he's her son, but she doesn't remember any romantic relationship between them, thankfully. Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 10/11/07 14:38
Chapter: Reconciliation

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! quite a turn in events. i cant wait to read what happens next!!!!!

Author's Response: And I can't wait for you to read it! ;), thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 10/11/07 14:38
Chapter: Reconciliation

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! quite a turn in events. i cant wait to read what happens next!!!!!

Author's Response: (see above response)

Reviewer: RNCybergate
Date: 10/11/07 13:56
Chapter: Reconciliation

Well Well actually did it...
Now what....does Harry actually get to Marry Lily?

He only got rid of their bad memories towards him after Lily should really like him again.

Poor James...he has to go through Harry and Lily all over again...

If you do...I can hardly wait to see Harrys daugther...

Or do Both James and Lily still know he is their son?

Will Hermione and Ron ever forgive him when he sees them again in the future many years from now. What about Ginny...

hehehe..I can see it...Godfather Harry ...godfather to himself (Laughs at the thought) (that is if he doesn't Marry Lily)

Sirius wont be happy though.

Ok ...Next chapter


Author's Response: Well, I can't say any more about Harry/Lily without giving more of the story away, but things won't be as romantic as before. She knows now that he's her son. But that doesn't completely eliminate their friendship...thanks again for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Ghoul In Pajamas
Date: 10/11/07 13:29
Chapter: Reconciliation

I just started reading this and I really like it! This chapter was like Wow! He just destroyed the leather! Dumb Harry...

Author's Response: You're not the first person that's called Harry you liked it; thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: harrypotterprincess
Date: 10/11/07 1:08
Chapter: In Transfiguration

omgosh..haha..didnt see that coming.

Author's Response: lol...thanks for R/Ring; keep reading!

Reviewer: Anya Black
Date: 10/10/07 22:44
Chapter: Reconciliation

Whoa my good giddy galloping goobers! (haha I like the letter "g") That was completely unexpected, and I mean whoa! I like jumped out of my chair. But like I said, I'm sure you have your reasons, which WILL be revealed in the next chapter. Right? *cracks knuckles* lol jk. Nice chapter :]

Author's Response: Hehe...*gulps* Perhaps not the next chapter, but a few after that...? DON'T KILL, thanks for reviewing; all WILL be revealed eventually, don't worry.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 10/09/07 15:33
Chapter: Long-Range Combat

Wicked! Can you tell me the names of the D.E. that were caught? I forget who some of them are.

Author's Response: Actually, none of the death eaters were caught...just the future ones. Among the kids that were caught were Bellatrix and Rodolthus Lestrange, the major ones, plus some minor ones like Mulciber, Avery, Yaxley, etc.

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