Reviews For I'm Not Looking!
Reviewer: slytherinprincess17
Date: 04/23/07 21:32
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

absolutely perfect. i loved it. maybe you could add more or give the readers a second one-shot that continues with the same story line.

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 04/23/07 20:42
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

I like how Draco came to them, searching for help, and how you described them as extensively questioning him, even with veritaserum, because it definitely seems real. And I think it's hilarious that she thought it was Harry and it was actually Draco. Great story!

~emoprincess26

Reviewer: num
Date: 04/23/07 20:35
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Hehe PLEASE don't make this a one shot! So much more possibility...!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 04/23/07 18:27
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

wait...wasn't hermione still brushing her teeth when draco kissed her?

Reviewer: Juli_13
Date: 04/23/07 18:18
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Omg this is an amazing story write moree please!!
thanks!
love,
-Juli.

Reviewer: Wishingyouwerehere
Date: 04/23/07 18:10
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

wow do i wish that this wasnt a one shot

Reviewer: GreenFairy
Date: 04/23/07 17:47
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

That was funny. haha idk it made me laugh. In a good way. I guess I just pictured her facial expressions. Nice job.
You should make like a whole story about this situation. From the second he knocked on the door. and onward. it would be great. And easy to make "realistic". If you don't wanna could I attempt it this summer?
Perhaps I can beta or something?
Hmm..fun fun
GREAT JOB
Green Pixie~~

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 04/23/07 17:34
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

I love this story! Don't make it a one-shot.

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 04/23/07 15:25
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

wow really good story but u r sooo not leaving it at that

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 04/23/07 14:59
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Ohhh, almost lost it in the bathroom!!! Very erotic but decent at the same time. Update soon.

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 04/23/07 14:38
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

oh i loved it. normally i get annoyed when good stories are short but this worked so well because it was quick.
and whats wrong with peeing in front of people?? honestly, malfoy is too much of a little rich kid.
i love all your stuff. i always get excited when you post something new.
emma x x x

Reviewer: Pirkadatka
Date: 04/23/07 14:16
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Wonderful one-shot, dear!!
Really-really light-hearted, I liked is sooo much, you should write one-shots, too... :D:D
The situation was so perfect, not smutty, but still hot, so great job done!!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/23/07 13:47
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Great one shot. I don't normally like Hermione & Draco (probably 'cuz he's so mean and spiteful in the books), but you could really feel the "heat" in this story. Good descriptions.

Reviewer: cazthenorthender
Date: 04/23/07 12:33
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

I don't usually ship Draco/Hermione but I loved the chemistry between the two of them in this! Good stuff! :)

Reviewer: Colli
Date: 04/23/07 12:08
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

Nice one shot

Reviewer: thunder_storm
Date: 04/23/07 11:52
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

oooo i liked it =] it was really good for a one shot

Reviewer: Irish_Quiditch
Date: 04/23/07 11:34
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

this is a good one shot but one point you forgot was Grimmauld place had dumbledore as its secret keeper so how did Malfoy find it

Reviewer: artist24
Date: 04/23/07 11:28
Chapter: I'm Not Looking!

good chapter.

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