This story was an excellent fluff! It is definately good if you're not in the mood for dark and depressing.
Author's Response: Thanks, Scarlet Night. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. And yeah, it is a fluffy one, and I'm even surprised I wrote it to this day -- dark and depressing is a LOT more my kind of thing!
But thanks again!
Very good. However I must point out a mistake. It's "Next time there’s a ball, buck up the courage and ask me before someone else does, and not as a last resort!" Just wanted to point that out to you. Very good though.
Author's Response: Thanks, pinkandgreengt. You might be right if that's the U.K. edition, but I don't believe it's that way in the U.S. version, and that's the one I had on me to check. I don't have GoF as a U.K. version ... yet.
Author's Response: Thank you, MJ.
Really good, i loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ryligh Christine.
Very realistic, fully with the awkwardness that would come from them finally admitting it, ron stuttering, Hermione interrupting him before he could say it , and a kiss, 14/10. Good job
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, hpsupafan. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Gr8 story. I'm adding it 2 my favourites.
Author's Response: Thanks, glitter_quill. Glad you liked it.
you did very well, short and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you, quick_quotes_quill.
I really liked it, thought it was pretty good. Though annoying as this may sound I wish it wasn't so fluffy. sorry. Anyway thought it was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, ballerinaprincess. I'm glad to hear that you liked the story.
As for the fluffy aspect, that is completely out of my realm -- most of my work has a darker nature to it -- so this was some "Aww" writing for me.
I loved it!(=
Author's Response: Thanks, love_44.
Nice! I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you, MagicalMe831.
Short, sweet and to the point. Very good. Could have used a few more details, but very good.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazzbones, for the review.
Yeah, it was a bit shorter (and that was probably due to my procrastination for the challenge). But I'm glad to hear that you liked it all the same.
Very well done. Ron and Hermione are my favorites so it is fun to see a story about them. Good use of the flashbacks as well. It really helped to place the story in context. Great Job
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, ckwright51. I'm glad you liked this story.
i really liked it i think you should ad some more to the story though.
Author's Response: Thanks, ginny75. I'm glad you liked it.
Well, the challenge was a one-shot, but I don't know, I might either do a companion, or use some sort of continuation elsewhere. But nothing right away though.