This story was an excellent fluff! It is definately good if you're not in the mood for dark and depressing.
Author's Response: Thanks, Scarlet Night. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. And yeah, it is a fluffy one, and I'm even surprised I wrote it to this day -- dark and depressing is a LOT more my kind of thing!
But thanks again!
~Megan
Very good. However I must point out a mistake. It's "Next time there’s a ball, buck up the courage and ask me before someone else does, and not as a last resort!" Just wanted to point that out to you. Very good though.
Author's Response: Thanks, pinkandgreengt. You might be right if that's the U.K. edition, but I don't believe it's that way in the U.S. version, and that's the one I had on me to check. I don't have GoF as a U.K. version ... yet.
~Megan
Awww...cute! ~MJ
Author's Response: Thank you, MJ.
~Megan
Really good, i loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ryligh Christine.
~Megan
Very realistic, fully with the awkwardness that would come from them finally admitting it, ron stuttering, Hermione interrupting him before he could say it , and a kiss, 14/10. Good job
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, hpsupafan. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Megan
Gr8 story. I'm adding it 2 my favourites.
Author's Response: Thanks, glitter_quill. Glad you liked it.
~Megan
you did very well, short and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you, quick_quotes_quill.
~Megan
I really liked it, thought it was pretty good. Though annoying as this may sound I wish it wasn't so fluffy. sorry. Anyway thought it was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, ballerinaprincess. I'm glad to hear that you liked the story.
As for the fluffy aspect, that is completely out of my realm -- most of my work has a darker nature to it -- so this was some "Aww" writing for me.
~Megan
I loved it!(=
Author's Response: Thanks, love_44.
~Megan
Nice! I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you, MagicalMe831.
~Megan
Short, sweet and to the point. Very good. Could have used a few more details, but very good.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazzbones, for the review.
Yeah, it was a bit shorter (and that was probably due to my procrastination for the challenge). But I'm glad to hear that you liked it all the same.
~Megan
Very well done. Ron and Hermione are my favorites so it is fun to see a story about them. Good use of the flashbacks as well. It really helped to place the story in context. Great Job
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, ckwright51. I'm glad you liked this story.
~Megan
i really liked it i think you should ad some more to the story though.
Author's Response: Thanks, ginny75. I'm glad you liked it.
Well, the challenge was a one-shot, but I don't know, I might either do a companion, or use some sort of continuation elsewhere. But nothing right away though.
~Megan
