Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/29/07 19:29
Chapter: Breakout!

OH NO! stupid death eaters. i was really expecting Ron and Harry to say something about their dad's taking out a fully grown mountain troll in their FIRST YEAR! :P cool story! :P

Author's Response: LOL...thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/29/07 19:24
Chapter: Snape vs. Trevor

Trevor’s toad is suicidal!
you’d think I was the school counselor, or summat…”

Fave quotes from this story EVER! and if McGonagall was headmistress, wouldn't someone else be Transfiguration teacher instead of her? Dumbledore wasn't a teach. when HE was a headmaster. well, cool story and i love the 'Trever's toad is suicidal!' part! ;P

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about the McGonagall thing, but I just assumed that, since Dumbledore was involved in a million other things other than Hogwarts, he couldn't do Transfiguration as well...but McGonagall only has those two. Well, anyway, thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/29/07 19:16
Chapter: The Sorting

you are a ¾ blood, my boy!”

Ha! funny! this is a good chapter! but at the beginning, you said "What House will the Inseperable Duo be separated into? Find out..." SEPARATED!! but i guess that's to add suspense... and you sort of spelt it wrong. it's Inseparable. yeah, i just wanted to say it, so... on to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: Oh, sorry about that...I meant Sorted, not separated. Well, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/29/07 19:09
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

“I’m Trevor Longbottom,”

i see Neville reeeeeeally liked that name...
cool story! :D :P

Author's Response: I guess so...LOL!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/29/07 19:05
Chapter: Prologue: The Reunion

lol, i like this chapter! :P

Author's Response: lol, thanks!

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 06/27/07 0:45
Chapter: The Secret Office of Severus Snape

busted!! I so couldn't belive it... I laughted so hard... when harry himself as youngster got away with alot hogsmeade POA, nightime wandering GOF... ect. still very good.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing! Ch. 11 is in the queue!

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 06/26/07 23:26
Chapter: The Secret Office of Severus Snape

lol, i liked that chapter. my favorite part was the end with Harry catching ron and harry, lmao... keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it...ch. 11 is coming soon!

Reviewer: Chalondra
Date: 06/26/07 15:08
Chapter: The Secret Office of Severus Snape

HA! they got in trouble
yeah im quite weird today, but it was good!

Author's Response: lol...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: miss_potter_obsessed
Date: 06/26/07 0:45
Chapter: The Secret Office of Severus Snape

Wow! Thatb was cool! Can't wait for the next bit! Do you know what it's called yet? Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what it's called, but you'll have to wait until I post it to find out... ;)

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 06/25/07 20:19
Chapter: The Secret Office of Severus Snape

omg...how can harry.p behave that when he himself did all that stuff himself!!!!!!! anyway good chapter!!! when is the next one going to be posted???

Author's Response: The next one will be posted once it's written...which should be any day now, I'm putting the final touches on it now. Yeah...that would be an interesting situation, huh? You can't prevent someone from doing something if you've done it yourself, huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you continue to read more!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 06/20/07 14:36
Chapter: Snape vs. Trevor

All gryffindors in the year would have the same schedule until third year when they choose the optatives! I hate stoires whose authors can't even factcheck

Author's Response: Gosh, you could've said that a lot nicer, thanks. For the sake of this story, they do have different schedules, so if you don't like it, don't read the fic. It's that simple. "Factcheck", please...

Author's Response: And by the way, I did know that, but there are certain parts of the fic where it comes in handy to give them separate schedules...so unless you're suggesting Trevor transferrs to Hufflepuff, it's not changing.

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 06/18/07 14:42
Chapter: The Interrogation

aw I wanna find out!!! oh and veritserum (spelling?) is clear liquid not blue...

still love the story.

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, I'll change the color thing. Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: P.S.-veritaserum.

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 06/18/07 14:34
Chapter: The Interrogation

Nice chapter...thanks for updating.

Author's Response: You're welcome! I'll try to get advance chapters written soon for you guys, so just sit tight and read other stuff if you'd like. If you're into this kind of thing, I recommend another story I posted...not "Changing the Past", but a new one, which should be validated by now. Check it out; another post-Hogwarts with Harry's son. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: miss_potter_obsessed
Date: 06/18/07 13:37
Chapter: The Interrogation

Woo!! I love it!! Aother great ficcie-in-progress!!! Carry on!! : )

Author's Response: Will do! Thanks for R/Ring!

Reviewer: happynerd
Date: 06/18/07 11:54
Chapter: The Interrogation

Hi! it's going pretty well so far, but Veritaserum is colorless, odorless, and tasteless. (Slughorn's first lesson) Sorry, but it's the details that bug me! I love your idea of a female Malfoy with the boys. Please give more Trevor parts! I love him!

Author's Response: Haha, I hadn't even planned including Trevor in the story until I got to that chapter...but he'll play a bigger part in all this than you may think! Oops, was that out loud?

Author's Response: By the way, I read your bio...I have the exact same interests as you, except swimming! Obviously writing and reading, or this site would be the opposite of what I like, and acting...I'm pretty good!

Reviewer: Harry Horcrux
Date: 06/01/07 23:59
Chapter: The Boy That Cried "Death Eater"

its an aesome plot 4 the story, its kinda following the original storyline though changing it still....im looking out for more cuz its very good, so give more.

Author's Response: Any suggestions would be helpful...what more would you like to see?

Reviewer: Prongs56
Date: 06/01/07 23:48
Chapter: The Boy That Cried "Death Eater"

Steal Truth surme from the potions master's private stores.

Author's Response: Maybe...or do I have another brilliant idea up my sleeve? You'll have to wait and find out!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 06/01/07 21:38
Chapter: The Boy That Cried "Death Eater"

Ron is gonna use Verituserum on Ms Malfoy, right? That is the only way they could do it, without Polyjuice at any rate.


I bet they steal it from Snape, and then force it down Malfoy's throat! Can't wait! 10/10

Author's Response: You'll see...

Reviewer: Harry Horcrux
Date: 06/01/07 2:17
Chapter: Prologue: The Reunion

i like it, its really funny and interesting, a little confusing but good


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 05/31/07 16:43
Chapter: Quidditch Tryouts

please update sooon!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue...be patient with the mods!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
Allegiance by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
During his final year at Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy had few illusions about where...
FEATURED
The Pretender by littlebird Professors
She feels the familiar pang of disappointment that they've never been better...
A Light in the Gap by WeasleyMom 3rd-5th Years
When Harry woke that first morning in Grimmauld Place, he wondered if Ron and...
Tapestry by Equinox Chick 1st-2nd Years
As Walburga Black stitches, Sirius rebels. Two poems written about the infamous...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
CATEGORIES