Reviewer: Morgainne
Date: 05/30/07 22:07
Chapter: Quidditch Tryouts

YAY for Ron and Harry!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 05/25/07 17:11
Chapter: Quidditch Tryouts

when are we going to be able to read it?


Author's Response: You have to wait until it's validated...that should be any day now.

Reviewer: Morgainne
Date: 05/24/07 7:01
Chapter: Lessons with Professor Potter

Can't wait for the Quidditch tryouts!

Author's Response: That chapter is in the queue!

Author's Response: Whoa...I replied to this exactly a minute after you posted the review!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 05/23/07 20:47
Chapter: Lessons with Professor Potter

Thanks so much for reviewing. "Professor Potter," was cool, to keep quotes easily identifiable.

Author's Response: Yeah...I really hated writing out "Professor Potter" every time instead of "Harry", but it was to avoid confusion. After all, why would you call a professor by their first name? Like calling McGonagall "Minerva" or Snape "Severus"...

Reviewer: Morgainne
Date: 05/11/07 9:55
Chapter: Snape vs. Trevor

It's going really good so far, I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: thismafer
Date: 05/04/07 22:25
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

i love your story... but it doesn't sound to me that harry, ron, and hermione didn't talk to hagrid and that he didn't even know about their children...
Is harry a teacher ?? why does harry says that ron will see his father every day??
anyway jeje love your story ... I love the stories about the next generation


Author's Response: (see other review)

Reviewer: thismafer
Date: 05/04/07 22:25
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

i love your story... but it doesn't sound to me that harry, ron, and hermione didn't talk to hagrid and that he didn't even know about their children...
Is harry a teacher ?? why does harry says that ron will see his father every day??
anyway jeje love your story ... I love the stories about the next generation


Author's Response: Yeah, I know about the whole Hagrid thing...I'll just say everyone was busy with things in life (Auror training, etc.). And, yes, Harry [Potter] is a teacher...you'll find out more in the next chapter. Watch for Ch. 3! -PEMDAS

Author's Response: Yeah, I know about the whole Hagrid thing...I'll just say everyone was busy with things in life (Auror training, etc.). And, yes, Harry [Potter] is a teacher...you'll find out more in the next chapter. Watch for Ch. 3! -PEMDAS

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 04/29/07 12:10
Chapter: Prologue: The Reunion

we want more
we wan more
we want more
wat a start but weres the rest???

Author's Response: :) Chapter 2 is in the queue, and Ch. 3-6 have already been written...just be patient with the moderators! -PEMDAS

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 04/27/07 21:28
Chapter: Prologue: The Reunion

I really enjoyed reading another Post-Hogwarts.. Like the Ron & Harry name twist



Author's Response: Thanks for reading; glad you enjoyed it...watch out for Ch. 2!

Reviewer: maddonna_emmy
Date: 04/27/07 9:43
Chapter: Prologue: The Reunion

Very cute, it is a bit confusing that Harry and Ron have children named after each other but I suppose it will become more clear after they get to Hogwarts... I would like a bit more discription of the two kids, but I guess thats coming later too?
otherwize good work

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...this chapter is actually much different than the other chapters, because, for one, it's shorter, and it's supposed to be a bit cute. None of the rest of the story is from Mrs. Weasley's POV. The story gets darker as it goes along. And the two boys' personalities will begin to show on the Hogwarts Express next chapter. Ch.2 is in the queue, so look out for that soon! Again, thanks for reviewing!

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