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Reviews For The One I Love

Name: Luna_Midnight (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 18:22 · For: The One I Love
ahh what a sweet story

Name: lilyrox (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 9:35 · For: The One I Love
Wow! I love fics like this. The ones that touch my heart. The ones that "move" me. Beautiful.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Name: james and lily fan (Signed) · Date: 06/30/08 20:48 · For: The One I Love
that was so cute!! =)) i love it and it sort of keeps me wondering if she'll be able to tell severus she doesn't love him when she wasn't able to tell james....it'd be great if you wrote a sequel to it! loved it! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll keep a sequel in mind! :]

Name: Potterworm (Signed) · Date: 06/16/08 14:03 · For: The One I Love
Wow. That was amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Lilypotter55 (Signed) · Date: 03/19/08 15:36 · For: The One I Love
Awwwww.....so sweet!I like how she wants wants to break up withJames, but when James tells her he loves her, she changed her mind. You're a wonderful author, KASK!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: thechocolatefrog (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 21:55 · For: The One I Love
This was really sweet. I like they way how it was really inside Lily's head. It's so good you could mistake it for canon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Nymphea (Signed) · Date: 09/29/07 16:59 · For: The One I Love
Aww...it makes me feel really bad for Snape. Great story!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. Just don't feel too sorry for Snape. :)

Name: R_Ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 09/29/07 11:23 · For: The One I Love
Even though this would normally be a very short piece for an entire change of feelings on Lily's part, I think you wrote it really well. Because I think you made it clear that she never actually was in love with Snape. James was always there, waiting.

I love this line: It is more than feeling safe around him it is feeling happy, alive, loved, needed, wanted, beautiful. It is feeling like there is no place on earth Id rather be.

Amazing fic, really! I love it!


Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Name: HogwartsGirly124 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 18:14 · For: The One I Love
i just love ur storys. I love the way you use the words. I love how you can feel what the chacter is feeling. did i mention i love ur stoorys lol great job!

Author's Response: :D Thank you!

Name: girl_in_love (Anonymous) · Date: 08/03/07 8:07 · For: The One I Love
by someting light i meant ...yeah, something less deep....and fluffy!

Author's Response: haha, okay :D

Name: Mischief_managed01 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/07 9:34 · For: The One I Love
Aww thats really qt, very good plot twist i must say i like it as i like all ur stories.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: ballerinaprincess (Signed) · Date: 05/31/07 11:18 · For: The One I Love
Like your writing style, loved the story

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Quiditch fan (Signed) · Date: 05/28/07 12:41 · For: The One I Love
AWWWWWW, so cute! i was a laittle disturbed with the prospect of lily loving severus...but you did a very good job with it all. the is such a cool story and yeah! love loved loved it! once again, another excellent story, and i have to say it again...you are a really really really good author. i enjoy reading your stories because they are all so well written and very original. please write more!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Name: Prongsies_Girl_93 (Signed) · Date: 05/13/07 14:06 · For: The One I Love
That is totally sweet! I love it! Could you maybe make it into a story? It would be a really great long term thing, or at least give it another chapter, please? Pretty please with sugar and a cherry on top?

Author's Response: :D I think I might, but you'll have to wait. Light Up is eating up a lot of time.

Name: liveonluna (Signed) · Date: 05/04/07 16:52 · For: The One I Love
Awesome.... So sweet and romantic. Nicely done. Lily+James=Forever....=D

Author's Response: Hehe, I agree. I <3 L/J. Or maybe Keri/James. :D

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/07 20:41 · For: The One I Love
This was so cute!!!!
Best yet
Rite more plezzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: girl_in_love (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/07 10:09 · For: The One I Love
KASK u rule, but listen, though these endings want to make u go 'shalalalala' shouldn't u try sumthing light? give it a shot!

Author's Response: What do you mean? Something light? More fluffy? Let me know. I appreciate your feedback!

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 05/01/07 5:44 · For: The One I Love
aww.. it was sweet

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: i love prongs (Signed) · Date: 05/01/07 0:21 · For: The One I Love
v.good was it a one shot?

Author's Response: Yep. I may add another chapter though. I have an idea. Thanks!

Name: jenni9632 (Signed) · Date: 04/30/07 22:27 · For: The One I Love
That was pretty good, but I thought that Lily changed her mind way too fast to be real. The transition of "I love Severus" to "I love James" was very sudden- I wasn't ready for it. I know it was a oneshot and it's hard to really show what the characters feel in a short amount of time. Maybe you should have portrayed Lily's feelings towards Snape in a different way: making them seem real to her, but somehow not as strong as those towards James- but without her knowing? I'm not really sure how to explain it, but good job anyway! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping to portray that she already loved James through the fact that she couldn't remember much about her relationship with Severus, but remembered it from the beginning with James. Also, she always said yes to James when he asked her out. She just didn't realize why. Thanks for the comment!

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