Reviews For The One I Love
Reviewer: Luna_Midnight
Date: 04/02/10 18:22
Chapter: The One I Love

ahh what a sweet story

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 07/07/08 9:35
Chapter: The One I Love

Wow! I love fics like this. The ones that touch my heart. The ones that "move" me. Beautiful.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Reviewer: james and lily fan
Date: 06/30/08 20:48
Chapter: The One I Love

that was so cute!! =)) i love it and it sort of keeps me wondering if she'll be able to tell severus she doesn't love him when she wasn't able to tell'd be great if you wrote a sequel to it! loved it! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll keep a sequel in mind! :]

Reviewer: Potterworm
Date: 06/16/08 14:03
Chapter: The One I Love

Wow. That was amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/19/08 15:36
Chapter: The One I Love sweet!I like how she wants wants to break up withJames, but when James tells her he loves her, she changed her mind. You're a wonderful author, KASK!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: thechocolatefrog
Date: 10/06/07 21:55
Chapter: The One I Love

This was really sweet. I like they way how it was really inside Lily's head. It's so good you could mistake it for canon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 09/29/07 16:59
Chapter: The One I Love makes me feel really bad for Snape. Great story!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. Just don't feel too sorry for Snape. :)

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 09/29/07 11:23
Chapter: The One I Love

Even though this would normally be a very short piece for an entire change of feelings on Lily's part, I think you wrote it really well. Because I think you made it clear that she never actually was in love with Snape. James was always there, waiting.

I love this line: It is more than feeling safe around him it is feeling happy, alive, loved, needed, wanted, beautiful. It is feeling like there is no place on earth Id rather be.

Amazing fic, really! I love it!


Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/03/07 18:14
Chapter: The One I Love

i just love ur storys. I love the way you use the words. I love how you can feel what the chacter is feeling. did i mention i love ur stoorys lol great job!

Author's Response: :D Thank you!

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 08/03/07 8:07
Chapter: The One I Love

by someting light i meant ...yeah, something less deep....and fluffy!

Author's Response: haha, okay :D

Reviewer: Mischief_managed01
Date: 07/03/07 9:34
Chapter: The One I Love

Aww thats really qt, very good plot twist i must say i like it as i like all ur stories.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 05/31/07 11:18
Chapter: The One I Love

Like your writing style, loved the story

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 05/28/07 12:41
Chapter: The One I Love

AWWWWWW, so cute! i was a laittle disturbed with the prospect of lily loving severus...but you did a very good job with it all. the is such a cool story and yeah! love loved loved it! once again, another excellent story, and i have to say it are a really really really good author. i enjoy reading your stories because they are all so well written and very original. please write more!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/13/07 14:06
Chapter: The One I Love

That is totally sweet! I love it! Could you maybe make it into a story? It would be a really great long term thing, or at least give it another chapter, please? Pretty please with sugar and a cherry on top?

Author's Response: :D I think I might, but you'll have to wait. Light Up is eating up a lot of time.

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 05/04/07 16:52
Chapter: The One I Love

Awesome.... So sweet and romantic. Nicely done. Lily+James=Forever....=D

Author's Response: Hehe, I agree. I <3 L/J. Or maybe Keri/James. :D

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 05/03/07 20:41
Chapter: The One I Love

This was so cute!!!!
Best yet
Rite more plezzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 05/03/07 10:09
Chapter: The One I Love

KASK u rule, but listen, though these endings want to make u go 'shalalalala' shouldn't u try sumthing light? give it a shot!

Author's Response: What do you mean? Something light? More fluffy? Let me know. I appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/01/07 5:44
Chapter: The One I Love

aww.. it was sweet

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 05/01/07 0:21
Chapter: The One I Love

v.good was it a one shot?

Author's Response: Yep. I may add another chapter though. I have an idea. Thanks!

Reviewer: jenni9632
Date: 04/30/07 22:27
Chapter: The One I Love

That was pretty good, but I thought that Lily changed her mind way too fast to be real. The transition of "I love Severus" to "I love James" was very sudden- I wasn't ready for it. I know it was a oneshot and it's hard to really show what the characters feel in a short amount of time. Maybe you should have portrayed Lily's feelings towards Snape in a different way: making them seem real to her, but somehow not as strong as those towards James- but without her knowing? I'm not really sure how to explain it, but good job anyway! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping to portray that she already loved James through the fact that she couldn't remember much about her relationship with Severus, but remembered it from the beginning with James. Also, she always said yes to James when he asked her out. She just didn't realize why. Thanks for the comment!

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