Reviewer: Elissy
Date: 05/02/07 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 - William Rashleigh

Really good first chapter. I quite enjoyed this. Your description of events is quite good, and the detail you go into is even better. Great cliffhanger at the end, too!

I don't know how this pertains to this chapter much, but I found this by looking over some banners at the beta boards. Yours caught my attention right away, and I had to see what kind of story it was.

*Is rambling* Ignore me here, haha. But seriously, good job. I'll read the next chapter ASAP!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: kingbobrules
Date: 04/27/07 4:39
Chapter: Chapter 2 - 1692

Another rivetting chapter. I can't wait to read more of this story; it's really unusual. Please update soon!

Author's Response: :D Thank you! I will put the next chapter in queu as soon as I get home!

Reviewer: kingbobrules
Date: 04/23/07 13:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - William Rashleigh

A very well written, intriguing start and what an original idea too! I look forward to reading more; this could be a very different story. Truly enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter 2 is in queu! :)

Reviewer: lucilla_pauie
Date: 04/23/07 8:00
Chapter: Chapter 1 - William Rashleigh

nice one, hallie! i've read this before it got deleted, and I wondered what the Galleon was. A special portkey that also bridges time? Tell us in the next chapters! I notice that all of you here aside from me had made your time-trinkets transport Hermione not just to another time but to another place too.

i can't wait to see the trials. You know i've had some funny visions of it thanks to Sabrina, the Teenage Witch, hehe. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! This story has been fun to write. The trials especially. I've always had this vision in my head of what the trials would be like and it's great to fimally have a reason to write about it.

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