Reviews For Points of View
Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/13/09 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

haha i love it

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/07/07 2:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaaw this is so cute, beautiful, my fave potter couple

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermionelookalike101
Date: 10/25/07 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh!!!! SO adorable. My favorite story of yours by far. :) that was amazing!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: queenofdarkness111
Date: 06/07/07 8:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

VERY nice

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 05/27/07 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

First of all, congrats on your challenge win! I can see why you beat my entry. :D A few comments/criticisms now.

First of all, your clincher was perfect! Molly was IC, the ending line was hilarious, and it was the blunt/humorous ending that just brought a perfect close to your truthful and well-thought out characterization throughout the story.

You really captured the essence of Ron and Hermione - jealousy and intellect, banter/fighting and love - in the story and twisted it to make a brilliant plot. I loved the fact that Hermione used Viktor to spur Ron on, just like she used the idea of the Chamber of Secrets to spur the boys into making Polyjuice Potion. I loved the fact that Ron's jealousy is what gets him past his thickheadedness. :) The characterization is just brilliant. Great job.

The dynamic between the two characters is charming and accurate - just the right mixture of fighting and love that they've always shown in canon. I think you've really taken it to heart that it's never going to be fairytale for these two, but they'll make it through anyway.

You drive me crazy... I think Ron got it right this one time. :) She always will, but he'l love her anyway and that's why the pairing works.

Fabulous portrayal and a charming little story. Congrats again and thanks for the fabulous read!


Author's Response:

Thank you, kumy! I was surprised I won, in truth. But, I guess if you enter enough contests, chances are you’ll win won sooner or later, right?

In some ways, Molly Weasley reminds me a bit of my own mom (or mum, however you want to say it). And, the funny thing about that whole bit was it was just the sort of thing I could see my own mom saying in that situation, especially if she knew the girl like Mrs. Weasley knows Hermione.

I kinda though using the whole Viktor thing was kind of cheap, myself. Oh, how original, a girl using another guy to get the attention of the guy she really wants. I mean, that has never been done or thought of before, right …. Still, it was too perfect to pass on, based on what we know from canon. We know Ron is jealous as all hell when it comes to Viktor and we certainly know it is well within Hermione’s character to come up with a crafty little plot to get what she wants. I think Hermione is actually pretty shifty, under the clean-cut surface. Look at some of the stuff she has pulled in the books, the thing with Rita Skeeter or the thing she nasty hex she put on the girl (forget her name just now) who ratted out the DA to name a couple.

Anyway, thanks for the lovely review. Incidentally, what is the name of your story for the challenge? I looked around for it after this review (granted, quickly) but didn’t see it. Let me know because I would like to read it. Thanks again, Kumy!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 05/26/07 16:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good
i can see why this came first!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 05/04/07 17:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

hahaha, very cute! :]

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 05/03/07 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great POV. I love how your described the feeling in his stomach - "swallowed a galleon and sent a Niffler to get it" - priceless picture. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: ChocolatexKisses
Date: 05/02/07 5:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love this story!!
Favorite line: "'Well,' his mother yawned, looking only half-awake. 'It’s about time, dear.'"
I like how you captured the characters of Ron and Hermione!!


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 04/30/07 9:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha! *looks triumphant* Yes! A very nice story, I loved the different points of view. And obviously, Harry WAS right. :D 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that!

Reviewer: maze
Date: 04/29/07 4:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Smooth and comical. I especially like the ending...
Mrs Weasley in the background.Cool.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: votehermione
Date: 04/28/07 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 1


Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: lucilla_pauie
Date: 04/25/07 10:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh! *giggles*

i see now why you beat us! hehe! still, three cheers for a Hufflepuff victory! Yay!

very well-chosen title! and i loved Hermione here, she's so wicked smart, wasn't she?

my own story is now in the queue, but i shy away now after reading this ficlet of yours, awww!

maybe im overreacting, but hey, there's the OOTP trailers and then i get to read these wonderful fluffies to bridge the wait, what's not to squeal about, right?


Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it. Also, I hope you post the link to your story when it gets published. I'd love to see it. Thanks again for taking a moment to tell me what you thought!

Reviewer: GinnyFanForever34
Date: 04/25/07 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow That was interesting. That was Good

Author's Response: thank you very much

Reviewer: SCPGOHDad24
Date: 04/24/07 21:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

i'm in such a good mood right now (i saw the trailer and it looked so great)
and now i read this. thanks for keeping a smile on my face (i'm so happy that i'm not retching from my cliche remark)

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you very much. I appreciate the review and I'm glad I didn't ruin the mood! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: num
Date: 04/24/07 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Gorgeous story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 04/24/07 20:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ohhhh...this was so adorable! No wonder you won! You did win, right...well, I entered too but I think my entry got lost somewhere, it wasn't looked at. That stinks. Well, you absolutely deserved the win, because this was so great!

Author's Response: Thank you! That does stink, about your story. Are you going to submit it? If you do, I'd like to read it. Thanks again for the review.

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