Reviews For Alliance
Reviewer: BuffyXO
Date: 04/25/07 6:02
Chapter: Alliance

That was such a sweet story, if only JKR would use it for Deathly Hallows, then I would be a very happy camper. I liked how Draco and his father faced off in the end, because I am certain that Lucius will play a role in the final battle. I also believe that things will not end well for him there. I also enjoyed how Hermione had such inner strength during the battle and resolve to end it once and for all. Excellent job!

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 04/23/07 21:08
Chapter: Alliance

Awww!!! This was great! one of the best stories I've read. You should be very proud this was a great story. And I really hope That The Deathly Hallows ends like this...well kinda...I just want Draco to show his true colors and help the Order. Well anyway Awesome story I think it made my day...Kudos!!
*Krystal*

Author's Response: What a glowing review! Thanks so much for that! I have several Galleons bet that Draco will get his act together and join the good guys, so I hope he pulls thru. Thanks for your kind words!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 04/23/07 18:23
Chapter: Alliance

"The archenemies dueled spectacularly, using magic that was ancient and some that had never before been used. And in the end, Harry overthrew the Dark Lord, destroying him utterly, bringing their saga to an end." I like this story, but there is not nearly enough detail. I think it skimms through the important parts just so it can get to the "happily ever after" faster.


Author's Response: I totally agree with you. This story was written as an exchange, and the girl I wrote it for wanted something mostly post-war, so I didn't want to weigh it down with battle details. Also, I'm working on another, longer story that's pretty much all battle, so I included as little action in this one as I could get away with. Thanks for your honesty, though! I do appreciate it!!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/23/07 15:59
Chapter: Alliance

Very good story. I like that they got over the anomosity and were able to become friends, but I don't see them as a couple (just not my cup of tea). Good story though.


Author's Response: Yeah, I know. It's not very likely, but it's fun, nonetheless. I'm glad you liked the story at any rate =)

Reviewer: cazthenorthender
Date: 04/23/07 15:43
Chapter: Alliance

I enjoyed this very much! It definetely shows another side to Draco that we've not seen (yet) in the books. The end of HBP certainly leaves the possibility of summat like in this story happening, at least in terms of Draco not siding with the Death Eaters. Nice writing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I totally agree that this angle is left wide open, and I hope Jo takes us there. I think I'd crumble if Draco and Snape turn out to be baddies. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: liquid_silver
Date: 04/23/07 15:33
Chapter: Alliance

wow . . . this is really good! i've never considered the possibility that Draco and Hermione could actually get together, but i can really picture your fic happening.

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review! I admit, I am a Dramione fan, even though I know how far-fetched it is. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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