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Reviews For A Bend in the Road

Name: acciowand (Anonymous) · Date: 05/06/07 12:42 · For: Chapter 4: Dumbledore Returns
Interesting twist. The idea of Snape and Bellatrix having a history is more believable to me than the Lily/Snape idea. I'm looking forward to more of your story!

Author's Response: Thank you for your encouragement. Stay tuned. Lots more to come. aurorahope


Name: wodcdre (Signed) · Date: 05/06/07 7:28 · For: Chapter 4: Dumbledore Returns
such a bittersweet reunion..if only for a little while. The child was a major development though....plausible. Can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind response. The action is just getting started, so stay tuned! aurorahope


Name: MankyOldBoot (Anonymous) · Date: 05/05/07 16:45 · For: Chapter 3: A Message from Beyond the Grave
I think he should slow down and write out all the things he might want to ask Dumbledore before he rushes to see the memory.

Author's Response: Ah, you're probably right, but Harry is so shocked and excited, he isn't really thinking straight right now. I promise you that the message will answer a BIG question. Stay tuned and thanks for your comment. Aurorahope


Name: dumbledorefluertwins (Signed) · Date: 04/27/07 11:26 · For: Chapter 1: A Hundred Sighs
You have the begginings of a good story here - I love the complex feelings you describe for each character. Your writing style is very good, but I think it needs a bit more... something. Like, Drama, mystery, action, suspense, ectr. In this chapter not much happened. I look forward to the next chapter - there is a next chapter, right? I know it said that it was completed, but this just looks like an odd place to stop. I reckon that you've just clicked the completed box by mistake, right?

~Evie

Author's Response: Hi Evie, Thanks for the nice comments. There's LOTS more to come in the adventure/action/romance department. I just had to get a little of the preliminaries out of the way first. Wait until the next couple of chapters and you'll see what I mean. I must have clicked the complete button by mistake. I'll change that. Thanks for your encouragement. aurorahope


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