I loved the way you ended it!
I thought Fleur was slightly out of character, because we know her so well. But apart from that, great stuff :)
C'est ainsi adorable la fašon qu'Harry lui demande de danser Ó la fin!
It's so adorable the way Harry asks her to dance in the end!
Sorry about all the French I just thought it was necessary due to Fleur lol
Aweee ^_^! That was so sweet ! You'r story is beautiful ! Keep up the good work !
aww!! it was perfect! i wish there was more! but you finished it at exactly the right moment. to let us decide what happens. amazing writing skills. great job.
Cute story. I liked the fact that harry wasn't sure if he loved ginny even though the rest of us are- that was very true to his character I think.
I found this story to be wonderful. A touching talk between Fleur and Harry. Something that should have happened.
Finally someone brings Fleur from the shadows!
Could use a sequel or mor chapters.
How lovely! This is so well-written, one of the best stories I've read for a while!
Great! Great! You captured the feeling and the moment just right. Hopefully, this is how it will play out in the book. Keep up the good work.
That was adorable. I really liked Fleur's part in it as well. She may be a bit stuck up but she does mean well. I've always thought so, anyways.
Aww... I love Fleur's lines about how to tell if you're in love. So deep.
Good story! I liked how you portrayed Fleur -- too often she is played out as superficial and vain. While the story of how Harry and Ginny get back together has been written over and over, you truly had an original and insightful way to tell it. I can't wait to read your next story.
Yes,like Harry,we,men,are stubborn.Harry open your heart to Ginny.Together you will be more power full than Riddle.Listen to DD have said to you...You have wtitten a beautifull story.