This was very good, for me my favorite part was the first stanza it was very powerful. Amazing job, I love poetry, and your poems so far have been great!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you like my poetry. I'm still a newbie with it, so the feedback is very appreciated.

Wow, this was really quite good--especially for a first attempt at HP poetry. I'll admit that when I clicked the link I was ready for a cute and fluffy little poem, but this was anything but. The idea was extremely original, and as I said the title was clever but misleading. Very well written, too; the rhymes are discrete and not at all forced, and it was overall a very enjoyable read. Great job!

Cheers, Fenn

Author's Response: Thanks, Fenn. As soon as I read that you were expecting cute and fluffy, I knew you hadn't read my other stories. *giggles* I have never been accused of being cute and fluffy. However, until you mentioned it, I didn't realize that the title would be misleading. But yeah, I guess people might think of something fluffy.

Anyway, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Poetry is a new beast for me and your encouragement is greatly appreciated. Thanks so much. :D