Reviews For The Kiss
Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/04/07 22:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was very good, for me my favorite part was the first stanza it was very powerful. Amazing job, I love poetry, and your poems so far have been great!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you like my poetry. I'm still a newbie with it, so the feedback is very appreciated.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 05/29/07 12:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

A very short but powerful piece.

This is truly the end.

A great way to end the short poem, it leaves the reader with closure. It is probably my fave line. Great job. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 04/24/07 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this was really quite good--especially for a first attempt at HP poetry. I'll admit that when I clicked the link I was ready for a cute and fluffy little poem, but this was anything but. The idea was extremely original, and as I said the title was clever but misleading. Very well written, too; the rhymes are discrete and not at all forced, and it was overall a very enjoyable read. Great job!


Cheers, Fenn

Author's Response: Thanks, Fenn. As soon as I read that you were expecting cute and fluffy, I knew you hadn't read my other stories. *giggles* I have never been accused of being cute and fluffy. However, until you mentioned it, I didn't realize that the title would be misleading. But yeah, I guess people might think of something fluffy.

Anyway, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Poetry is a new beast for me and your encouragement is greatly appreciated. Thanks so much. :D

Reviewer: pinktat
Date: 04/20/07 6:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this is so different to what you usually do. Very different approach but I still enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much. It was my first shot at HP poetry. :D

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