Reviews For Irreparable
Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 04/25/07 10:10
Chapter: Irreparable

Short - but touching. Very sweet. :)

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 04/23/07 21:18
Chapter: Irreparable

Wow, this is such a sad and touching story. I just had to review this and to let you know of a historical error. When you wrote "When the pioneers sent the Native Americans to reservoirs" don't you mean "reservations"?

Author's Response: yeah, i guess after two people noticing its time i correct that

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: lifter57
Date: 04/23/07 20:34
Chapter: Irreparable

Touching

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 04/23/07 19:51
Chapter: Irreparable

Oops! It is Hermione. Should have read the last line more carefully.

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 04/23/07 19:50
Chapter: Irreparable

I'm not sure that I was able to follow this very welll. I assume this is Hermione? Ginny? Probably Hermione. One thing I am sure of is that pioneers confined native North Americans to reservations, rather than reservoirs where they would have drowned. Actually it would have been the government, rather than pioneers who did it. Pioneers were too busy trying to eke out a day to day living.

Author's Response: well, thats what you get for having bad history teachers.

Author's Response: corrected nonetheless

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 04/23/07 19:04
Chapter: Irreparable

nooooo!!!!!!! HARRY CAN'T DIE!!!!!!!! great story though!!

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