Firstly, I'd like to congratulate you on a brilliant story. It was well written and interesting; I enjoyed the different POVS. It was my first time reading Sirius/Remus and I'd like to continue reading this ship! I think you portrayed the characters accurately - especially Remus. Although he is described as being better behaved than the rest of the Marauders, he's no Hermione. It was nice to see him not paying attention in class! I also liked the internal conflict; it would have been difficult to acknowledge the feelings they had, especially as it was the 70's. I also liked James's surprise at how an innocent pillow fight turned to something more : )
luv it!!!!! absolutely 100%! it's just GREAT!!
adored the ending,
perfect.
lol that was a really good read.
Perfect. I loved it.
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Good story!
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HA!!!!!!!!!!!
jamie boy can b sooo slow!
HA!!!!!!!!!!!
jamie boy can b sooo slow!
Author's Response: Haha, yep, he sure can, can't he? :]
OMG that was really awesome! It was so cute and unexpected I loved it!
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I LOVED it. Very well written.
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MWAH HA HA HA HA!
perfect ending.
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liked the ending!
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LOL poor james. his shock and confusion made me giggle--and i love how you portray sirius. it was all great! keep up the good work!! =D
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aww, that was so sweet =] keep going, you're a great writer and this was so fun to read.
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cute, poor, poor james, not understanding... it makes me laugh.
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, he was pretty lost there... Thanks for reviewing!
wow i loved this! i really like your writing style and the way you ended it, although i wouldn't mind reading more :)
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I love the imagery in this story. I felt ike I was feeling what these characters were feeling! Great Job!
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Whoa. You are going to add another chapter, right? RIGHT?
Please?
Author's Response: Hehe. :] No, I'm sorry; this is a one-shot. I'll think about it though. Thanks for reviewing!