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Reviewer: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Date: 04/12/09 6:08
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

Firstly, I'd like to congratulate you on a brilliant story. It was well written and interesting; I enjoyed the different POVS. It was my first time reading Sirius/Remus and I'd like to continue reading this ship! I think you portrayed the characters accurately - especially Remus. Although he is described as being better behaved than the rest of the Marauders, he's no Hermione. It was nice to see him not paying attention in class! I also liked the internal conflict; it would have been difficult to acknowledge the feelings they had, especially as it was the 70's. I also liked James's surprise at how an innocent pillow fight turned to something more : )

Reviewer: Magical Singer Gal
Date: 10/25/08 19:23
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

luv it!!!!! absolutely 100%! it's just GREAT!!

Reviewer: Flip Carson
Date: 02/28/08 7:43
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

good fic!

Reviewer: weasley__
Date: 01/30/08 17:32
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

adored the ending,
perfect.

lol that was a really good read.

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 10/17/07 10:29
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

Perfect. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/30/07 19:08
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

Good story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Skewper
Date: 09/28/07 5:16
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

HA!!!!!!!!!!!

jamie boy can b sooo slow!

Reviewer: Skewper
Date: 09/28/07 5:16
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

HA!!!!!!!!!!!

jamie boy can b sooo slow!

Author's Response: Haha, yep, he sure can, can't he? :]

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/25/07 19:27
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

OMG that was really awesome! It was so cute and unexpected I loved it!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Glad you liked it. :]

Reviewer: Harrysbabe09
Date: 08/17/07 23:22
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

I LOVED it. Very well written.

Author's Response: Wooh! Thankss. :]

Reviewer: bowiscute145
Date: 08/11/07 6:23
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

MWAH HA HA HA HA!
perfect ending.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. :]

Reviewer: fergiefan
Date: 08/05/07 21:52
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

liked the ending!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ILuvHP4Ev3r
Date: 07/28/07 0:34
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

LOL poor james. his shock and confusion made me giggle--and i love how you portray sirius. it was all great! keep up the good work!! =D

Author's Response: Yay, thanks! :]

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 07/13/07 23:38
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

aww, that was so sweet =] keep going, you're a great writer and this was so fun to read.

Author's Response: Thanks! :]

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 07/08/07 20:17
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

cute, poor, poor james, not understanding... it makes me laugh.

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, he was pretty lost there... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: siriusly_blackxx
Date: 06/04/07 22:37
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

wow i loved this! i really like your writing style and the way you ended it, although i wouldn't mind reading more :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! :]

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 05/19/07 1:07
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

I love the imagery in this story. I felt ike I was feeling what these characters were feeling! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :]

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 05/01/07 16:40
Chapter: Pangs of Discovery

Whoa. You are going to add another chapter, right? RIGHT?

Please?

Author's Response: Hehe. :] No, I'm sorry; this is a one-shot. I'll think about it though. Thanks for reviewing!

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